Part Two~~The Totodile who Will get Eaten By Carvanhas

[Latias Lover!]

I couldn't find a website for backgrounds, but I found a way to make better bubbles.

 

[PrinceOfDarkness]

its ok, just not funny, u should work on some more ;) 6/10 ~Johnny~

 

[Feraligatr master]

aw cute go totodile!
10/10(evolve it!)

 

[Latias Lover!]

I couldn't think of another joke. And the Totodile won't evolve for a long time.

 

[Feraligatr master]

how about while escapeing the carvanas he finds lugia and gets aero blasted!

 

[Latias Lover!]

I made another comic. Maybe a little funny, I don't know until you guys rate it.

 

[Feraligatr master]

cool i made one to following the totodile using diffrent sprite and more battles :D i rate this one 8/10

 

[Omega Latios]

Hhahahahahah!!! that's very funny comic! 10/10

 

[Allstories]

...What the hell, guys? These comics don't even make any sense, let alone have any sort of cohesive punch-line.

 

[Shinin]

STOP BEING OVERLY NICE, PEOPLE. If a comic sucks, don't say it's good. They'll just keep making the bad comics and we'll all die. Anyways, these comics are horrible. They're incredibly unfunny and the backgrounds are horrible. 0/10.

 

[Goatman56]

Sorry to be mean but I have to agree. The comic is not very good. Needs alot of work and I stretch the word alot. Please read a tutorial.

 

[Latias Lover!]

I finally found a background.

 

[LunaticSteven]

by god ppl, ppl have different interests u kno, if u can't go with it, then get a life by god >_>
Latias Lover, I like ur sprite comics, just try using a different background like ones found in the sprite comic thing and try to make them longer and try to make them funnier ~Johnny~

 

[Latias Lover!]

I already made a funny one. Four panels long. Heres my newest one:

 

[NiNGi's Worst Nightmare]

First one: Meh. I've seen WAY better. One question is really bothering me: why does Ho-Oh want Totodile to dive?

Second one: Sick. That's all I have to say.

 

[Allstories]

I already made a funny one. Four panels long. Heres my newest one:

This isn't funny at all. THERE ISN'T EVEN A PUNCHLINE, the dialogue is terrible and annoying, it doesn't make any sense, and you could at least combine them into one image. C'MON, man.

 

[armadilloHD]

Allstories is my hero ;_;

Yes the comics suck, read a tutorial Blah blah blah. I think the majority of where your skills should come from a place with harder reviewers >>

 

[Shinin]

The second is worse than the others. It doesn't even make sense.

 

[Hazard7]

^This guy being a prick and post every topic "It doesn't even make sense."!
Why don't you leave this topic and shut your mouth because you have no respect mate.

 

[Fox♠]

STOP BEING OVERLY NICE, PEOPLE. If a comic sucks, don't say it's good. They'll just keep making the bad comics and we'll all die. Anyways, these comics are horrible. They're incredibly unfunny and the backgrounds are horrible. 0/10.

STOP BEING OVERLY MEAN SHININ...when will you get it in to your heads that a comic isn't about BG's?.....my dear god...shinin is right bout the humour but please stop being so *****y you silly child and try and be nice...I take your crap flames in my topic cuz of I don't care,,,but this guy seems to...just stop flaming everything you grinch