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PKMN Territories... REDUX!

"Yes. I'd like 50P for you renting land on my campsite~"
Chip then noticed the large purple sky writing.
"Ah look Nibbles. Seems you've got a thank you note. Now, my 50P?"

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"Eat that! Loser!" Umbra said as he sent a gloom flying across a clearing, KOing it.
"Anyone else want a taste of this?" Umbra gloated. All he heard was some rustling in the bushes. He had KO'd many forest pokemon and had gotten stronger.
"Ah, no matter. I've got plenty stronger!" He said as he shot a flash cannon off into a tree, sending some pidgeys flying away scared.
"I gotta do more training," Umbra said to himself, "Better go find s'more to defeat around Lugon Lake."
 
"Ah, yes, rent..." Nibbles said while fumbling around in his pouch
(250-50=200p)
(btw, how much p do you have?)
"What? Oh." Nibbles said as he looked up and saw the message.
"That must be from Draggy, I should thank him later" Nibbles thought.
-Slightly later-
Nibbles was making his way through the forest on his way to Shellpoke Pond. When He heard a strange Pokemon commenting on gaining power.
Nibbles stepped out from the bushes and saw a Mawile.
"Why hello friend! What brings you here on this fine day?"
(There's some obvious contrast, with the previous post... which one of us should change out post? I vote you just cause I haven't had a chance at a one on one fight yet ...or just a bit of character development... But I'm fine with changing my post...)
 
((Chip has some ungodly large amount of money. Around 10,000 P. Probably more XD And nibbles, umbra just ran off to Lugon lake. I'll just assume he's there too...))

"Stat outta this pinkie. I got a score to settle with rock monster."
Umbra readied a battle stance and growled at rock monster, "Rock monster, you don't have a chance. I've tailored my moveset perfectly... Partly to defeat you... You'll be my next step to power! I'll beat you and get good enough to beat that dragon!"
Umbra fired a powerful flash cannon at Rock monster.
 
"Sorry, Granite, Imma have to bail. I need to get back home..." Nibbles said apologetically, as he sped off.
(Kinda works out, me and my dad are finally getting around to watching The Hurt Locker. Then probably bed. Maybe not though.)
 
Draggy sighed, He was upset.
"I wish I had friends that would visit or stay or sometimes..."
*Sigh*
"Well who would want to hang out with someone like me anyways?" Draggy asked himself
Draggy laid down on top of his cave to sunbath, it is one of his favorite things to do.
"Lets see...I have 0 friends and 1 enimie.... that leaves me at -1"
Draggy just layed there and stared into the forest, he could hear yelling and felt that a fight was gunna start.
 
((Eh heh heh, sorry about my long absence everyone, anyways, might as well wrap up the battle! ))

Boing stood astonished as Ghast flew out of the Rhyhorn, followed by toxic chemicals erupting from all over the brute's body, topped off with a thick foam frothing from it's maw. The creature flailed madly, knocking down pillars and more walls, which in turn caused violent tremors. It was now roaring with a ferocity that Boing never saw before in any Pokémon, and it stomped with such force that Boing was actually bounced into the air. Boulders fell from the ceiling and started to roll around on the ground at dangerous speeds. A single collision would certainty crush him.

"We got to get out of here! Yep!"



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Rolace could have sworn he felt a faint tremor, perhaps from something taking place on a much lower floor.

"Well well tiny one, go ahead, pick. I don't have all day, after all...Or maybe perhaps, I do have all day. Yes, maybe..."


The shop keeper's unnerving voice made him all the more eager to get out of this area as soon as possible. He hastily picked up one of the strange berries and presented it to the Drowzee.

"Hmmmn, yes, that would be 600 poké, but since I'm feeling generous, you'll have to pay a mere 300 for it..."

Rolace pulled out 300 poké and handed it to the Drowzee cautiously.

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1200P
-300P

Remaining Pok
é: 900.

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"Mmmm...You're not much of a talker, aren't you. Yes, I can tell. But there's something special that I feel inclined on sharing with you..."

Rolace froze. There was hardly anything he wanted to do more then get out of this horrid place right away, and never return. But fearing he might offend the Shopkeeper, Rolace reluctantly listened to what he had to say.

"Yes, a while earlier, I spotted another member of your kind. Yes, whatever you call your second most high form, the one with the long hair and skirt. Anyways, she seemed to be in some sort of hurry, as if fleeing something. In fact, she seemed quite frantic to get away. The lass seemed to be holding some sort of odd blue instrument. In fact, her hair was blue too. Yes, there was something special about her, and I likely should have spoken up...But..."


The Drowzee paused for a moment.

" ...Well anyways, probably has nothing to do with you, but just to let you know. I can't remember when was the last time I saw another Drowzee, or even a Hypno..."

The shopkeeper then started to mutter to himself, completely enveloped within his own self-discussion.

Rolace took this as a good moment to teleport a short distance away. He was now in a large room, consisting of four individual cells broken to form a large area.
The cloth had tears in it, and there were large gaps in the flooring, along with areas where the metal frame poked out. He had to move around cautiously.

Without the bizarre atmosphere of Drowzee's shop, he could sense the strange presence again, this time much stronger. He must be getting close by...





 
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"WHA--" Umbra gasped as a fiery chomp hit his shoulder area, and did a considerable amount of damage. He jumped back, and then readied the next attack.
"That's it..." Umbra said angrily, "Ice beam!"
Umbra shot a powerful Icy blast near granite's feet, causing the ground near him and one of his legs to freeze over.
"And now that your immobilized, Iron head!" Umbra said as he rushed at granite with intense speed.
 
Rock Monster's flamethrower hurt umbra a bit, but he was in the air and at too great a momentum, so he flew through it with some minor singes. He then blasted into Rock Monster's head, sending him flying backwards sliding on the ice into a tree.
"Heh!" Umbra laughed as he jumped backwards, "Your no match for me!"
Umbra readied a flash cannon and aimed at the sprawling Rock Monster.
 
Umbra's flash cannon was interrupted when Rock Monster attacked with an earthquake.
"H-hey! Stop that!" Umbra said as he was rattled around and thrown onto his back.
Umbra got up to see Many cracks in the ground and several water pokemon that seemed to have been thrown out of the lake.
Umbra made his way a bit closer to Rock Monster, but as he moved, stepped on something wet and squshy. "H-hey! Stoppit, karp!"
Umbra looked down to see an odd golden Magikarp that looked rather distressed under his foot.
"Tch... Worthless..." Umbra said as he kicked the magikarp into the lake.
"Now! Where were we!" Umbra said as he fired a flash cannon at Rock Monster.
Suddenly, the ground started rumbling and the water in the lake started to boil. The steaming water started bubbling and splashing wildly, and a whirpool appeared that was sending water pokemon of all kinds spinning in all directions. Suddenly, a humongous form blasted out of the water shining and roaring.
"R... Red Gyarados..." Umbra said as he was splashed with water and sent back a few yards.
"I'M SICK OF BEING PUSHED AROUND!" The Enraged Gyarados howled, "NOW I'LL DESTROY YOU ALL!"
 
"Hurk..." Umbra said as he got up soaking wet, "Where's that stupid red thing?"
Umbra looked around for Latias, but didn't see her anywhere.
"Crud, the coward must have flew away while we were fighting... Hey, stupid Gyarados! Who says your any stronger now! I say bring it on!"
Umbra flew at the Gyarados with an iron head, only to be sent flying down into the water with a whirlpool.
"Gah!" Umbra said as he coughed and sputtered, crawling up on to the land, "You were lucky! I didn't give it my all!"
Umbra shot an ice beam at the Gyarados partially freezing it, but it managed to break out with an outrage, and then it spazzed up into part if the shoreline, slightly expanding the lake. by now, rain was starting to fall.
 
Umbra shielded his eyes as the powerful blasts clashed together and sent off a huge blast.
"Urk..." Umbra said as he opened his eyes, "That was crazy..."
Suddenly, Umbra noticed that the Gyarados was focused on Rock Monster, so he made his move. He dashed at the Gyarados and clamped on to the fin on the side of the Gyarados' head.
"GROAAAAAAAAR!" The Gyarados bellowed as it lunged forward and under the water, and took Umbra with it. After a trip under the water, it flew up into the air, sending Air Cutters flying everywhere.
"WAAAAAAAH!" Was all Umbra was able to say as the Gyarados seized in the air. Then, the Gyarados smashed into the water, sending a massive wave over the shore, and damaging Umbra almost to the point of fainting.
 
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