4th Gen Platinum Luck?

[Heracross678]

I was going to use this team competitively, it is an edited version of my in game platinum team. I just wanted some opinions of it. Please be friendly, i'm new at this

Bronzong: Damp Rock: Rain dance-Extrasensory-Calm Mind-Flash Cannon (levitate)
Togekiss: Wise glasses: Heat Wave-Air slash- Psychic-Aura Sphere (serene grace)
Clefable: Expert Belt: Cosmic Power-Ice Beam-Meteor Mash-Swift (magic guard)
Leafeon: Muscle band: Leaf Blade- X-scissor-Aerial Ace-swods dance (leaf guard)
Honchcrow: Leftovers: Heatwave-Dark Pulse-steel wing-sky attack (super luck)
Heracross: Toxic orb: Megahorn-aerial ace-brick break-double edge (Guts)

 

[bobandbill]

Sorry, but this isn't the place for team rates. We do have other sections for that, namely the Competitive Battling Centre section which is what you want as it's a wifi team.

I'd move it there for you but rules in that section stat you need a bit more information (e.g. Natures and EVs). Check out the rules and other thread stickies there as well before posting the thread again, you could get some useful help from those alone.

Hence closed. (As an aside, from a glance you have a few odd moves, e.g. Double Edge on Heracross seems an odd choice, as does Swift. I'm not too sure about using Rain Dance as it only really helps and arguably hinders one Pokemon (Leafeon), and hinders the Pokemon with Heat Wave).