Please rate and help my UU/BL team

ThePlaya

I Am The Charizard Master
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    K this team will only have UU/BL pokes.I still havnt created it YET but am on the road to do it.I also need help on who should be my LEAD.
    Tell me everything that is wrong with my team and be as harsh as you want...ill accept anything as you are only trying to help.
    K here it is...all help WILL be appreciated it:)


    Charizard@Focus Sash(Damn Stealth Rock and Sand Stream ruin it)/White Herb
    Ability:Blaze
    Nature:Timid
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Sp.Attack, 6HP
    -Flamethrower
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Air Slash
    -Focus Blast/Overheat

    Overheat with white herb........This would be my Special Sweeper

    Vaporeon@leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb
    Nature:Calm/Modest/Bold
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Sp.Defense, 129 Sp.Attack
    -Surf
    -?????
    -?????
    -?????

    This would be my special tank.....I REALLY need help with this one..LOL

    Kangaskhan@Leftovers
    Ability:Early Bird/Scrappy
    Nature:Adamant/Jolly
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Attack, 129 Speed
    -Fake Out
    -Sucker Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Strength/Dizzy Punch/Shadow Claw

    Not sure what this would be....Need help on last Move set and nature.

    Lapras@Leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb/Shell Armor
    Nature:??????
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Defense, 129 Sp.Defense
    -Dragon Dance
    -Waterfall
    -Ice Shard
    -?????
    This would be used to wall both physical and sp.attacks.But need help on my last move set slot.

    Torterra@Leftovers
    Ability:Overgrow
    Nature:Adamant/Impish
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Defense, 129 Attack
    -Wood Hammer/Seed Bomb
    -Stone Edge
    -Earthquake
    -Synthesis

    I'm thinking of putting in curse but not sure what to replace....he would be my Tank.

    Aerodactyl@Life Orb/Choice Band/Leftovers
    Ability:Rock Head
    Nature:Jolly
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Attack, 6 HP
    -Earthquake
    -Stone Edge
    -Stealth Rock/Thunder Fang/Fire Fang/Ice Fang
    -Stealth Rock/Thunder Fang/Fire Fang/Ice Fang

    By the way, I understand i need a Rapid Spinner for Charizard but i don't have room for one so DON'T mention it.
    Thanks in advance:).

    Crap....just found out that Torterra, Vaporeon, and Aerodactyl are OU....is that true?
     
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    K this team will only have UU/BL pokes.I still havnt created it YET but am on the road to do it.I also need help on who should be my LEAD.
    Tell me everything that is wrong with my team and be as harsh as you want...ill accept anything as you are only trying to help.
    K here it is...all help WILL be appreciated it:)


    Charizard@Focus Sash(Damn Stealth Rock and Sand Stream ruin it)/White Herb
    Ability:Blaze
    Nature:Timid
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Sp.Attack, 6HP
    -Flamethrower
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Air Slash
    -Focus Blast/Overheat

    Overheat with white herb........This would be my Special Sweeper

    The general rule is not to have two of the same type of moves on one Pokemon.

    Vaporeon@leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb
    Nature:Calm/Modest/Bold
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Sp.Defense, 129 Sp.Attack
    -Surf
    -Wish...?
    -?????
    -?????

    This would be my special tank.....I REALLY need help with this one..LOL

    Can't help you here. I think it should have Wish, though.

    Kangaskhan@Leftovers
    Ability:Early Bird/Scrappy
    Nature:Adamant/Jolly
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Attack, 129 Speed
    -Fake Out
    -Sucker Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Strength/Dizzy Punch/Shadow Claw

    Not sure what this would be....Need help on last Move set and nature.

    Can't help you here.

    Lapras@Leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb/Shell Armor
    Nature:??????
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Defense, 129 Sp.Defense
    -Dragon Dance
    -Waterfall
    -Ice Shard
    -?????
    This would be used to wall both physical and sp.attacks.But need help on my last move set slot.

    Uh, uh....can't help you here.

    Torterra@Leftovers
    Ability:Overgrow
    Nature:Adamant/Impish
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Defense, 129 Attack
    -Wood Hammer/Seed Bomb
    -Stone Edge
    -Earthquake
    -Synthesis

    I'm thinking of putting in curse but not sure what to replace....he would be my Tank.

    I'm not good with Torterra....

    Aerodactyl@Life Orb/Choice Band/Leftovers
    Ability:Rock Head
    Nature:Jolly
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Attack, 6 HP
    -Earthquake
    -Stone Edge
    -Stealth Rock/Thunder Fang/Fire Fang/Ice Fang
    -Stealth Rock/Thunder Fang/Fire Fang/Ice Fang ?

    Thanks in advance:).

    I suck with UU Pokemon. A lot.
     
    K this team will only have UU/BL pokes.I still havnt created it YET but am on the road to do it.I also need help on who should be my LEAD.
    Tell me everything that is wrong with my team and be as harsh as you want...ill accept anything as you are only trying to help.
    K here it is...all help WILL be appreciated it:)


    Charizard@Choice Specs
    Ability:Blaze
    Nature:Timid
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Sp.Attack, 6HP
    -Flamethrower
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Air Slash
    -Focus Blast

    Overheat with white herb........This would be my Special Sweeper

    Meh, Overheat is alright, but why waste an item so you don't have to switch once (sure Stealth Rock slaughters him but...) Specs for RAW POWER!!

    Vaporeon@leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb
    Nature: Calm/Modest/Bold
    EVs: 236 HP, 108 Def, 136 Sp Def, 36 Sp Atk
    -Surf
    -Substitute
    -Wish
    -Baton Pass


    This would be my special tank.....I REALLY need help with this one..LOL

    Tank or not, Vaporeon makes one hell of a sub passer with over 101 subs, add in Wish for recovery and damn it is sweet

    Kangaskhan@Choice Band
    Ability: Scrappy
    Nature: Adament
    EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd 6 HP
    -Fake Out
    -Sucker Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Hammer Arm

    Not sure what this would be....Need help on last Move set and nature.

    Choice Band + Scrappy + Fake Out + STAB = really, really annoying

    Lapras@Leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb/Shell Armor
    Nature: Bold
    EVs:252 HP, 128 Defence, 128 Sp Defence
    -Surf
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunderbolt
    -Confuse Ray/Hidden Power Ground


    This would be used to wall both physical and sp.attacks.But need help on my last move set slot.

    A wall that needs to set up, yeah sure... Standard boltbeaming Lapras, HP Ground hits the one pokemon that resists everything (Lanturn) but comes in handy for taking out other Pokemon as well, Confuse Ray to cause switches

    Torterra@Leftovers
    Ability:Overgrow
    Nature:Impish
    EVs:252 HP, 152 Atk, 106 Def
    -Wood Hammer
    -Stone Edge
    -Earthquake
    -Stealth Rock/Curse

    I'm thinking of putting in curse but not sure what to replace....he would be my Tank.

    Synthesis fails due to it only working in neutral or sunny weather effectively (Unless you invoke the weather clause, I've seen it done)

    Aerodactyl@Life Orb/Choice Band/Focus Sash
    Ability: Pressure
    Nature:Jolly
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Attack, 6 HP
    -Earthquake
    -Stone Edge
    -Ice Fang
    -Crunch

    Since I've given Torterra Stealth Rock, I've given Aerodactyl a set that can be Choice Banded, or Life Orbed etc if you don't feel like switching between attacks... Focus Sash is for leading with Aero

    By the way, I understand i need a Rapid Spinner for Charizard but i don't have room for one so DON'T mention it.
    Thanks in advance:).

    Tanks over Walls never really works IMHO, but it's your team so I won't critizise

    darkknight316 said:
    I suck with UU Pokemon. A lot.

    Then why bother giving it a rate
     
    K this team will only have UU/BL pokes.I still havnt created it YET but am on the road to do it.I also need help on who should be my LEAD.
    Tell me everything that is wrong with my team and be as harsh as you want
    What's wrong is that the team only has 2 UUs and the rest are Low Tier OUs =/
    ...ill accept anything as you are only trying to help.
    K here it is...all help WILL be appreciated it:)


    Charizard@Choice Specs
    Ability:Blaze
    Nature:Timid
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Sp.Attack, 6HP
    -Fire Blast / Overheat
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Air Slash
    -Focus Blast
    Choice Specs Plox

    Vaporeon@leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb
    Nature:Bold
    EVs:252 HP / 176 Def / 80 SDef
    -Surf
    -Wish
    -Roar
    -Protect / Ice Beam
    WishPassing is fun.

    Kangaskhan@Choice Band
    Ability:Scrappy
    Nature:Jolly
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Attack, 129 Speed
    -Fake Out
    -Crunch
    -Earthquake
    -Return
    Strength, oh hell no
    HM Attacks SUCK. Use Return.
    Too bad he doesn't get Close Combat for that bastard Spiritomb ;_;


    Lapras@Leftovers
    Ability:Water Absorb
    Nature:Careful
    EVs:252 HP / 176 Def / 80 SDef
    -Curse
    -Waterfall
    -Ice Shard / Avalanche
    -Rest
    This would be used to wall both physical and sp.attacks.But need help on my last move set slot.
    Use him the same way you'd pull a CurseLax.
    Only thing I can think of that's Clever for this one.


    Torterra@Leftovers
    Ability:Overgrow
    Nature:Adamant/Impish
    EVs:252 HP, 129 Defense, 129 Attack
    -Wood Hammer/Seed Bomb
    -Stone Edge
    -Earthquake
    -Synthesis

    I'm thinking of putting in curse but not sure what to replace....he would be my Tank.
    I'll come back to this one.

    Aerodactyl@Life Orb / Choice Band
    Ability:Pressure
    Nature:Jolly
    EVs:252 Speed, 252 Attack, 6 HP
    -Earthquake
    -Stone Edge
    -Ice Fang
    -Aerial Ace
    Aerial Ace may sound nubish, but it will guarantee Breloom and Heracross death.

    By the way, I understand i need a Rapid Spinner for Charizard but i don't have room for one so DON'T mention it.
    Thanks in advance:).
    3/6 Pokemon aren't Stealth Rock friendly, so you NEED to make room.
    You should consider Blastoise over Lapras.
     
    Make Kanga a sup puncher and give Tortera the Axe.
    I would recommend this......

    Kangaskahn@leftovers
    adament
    Thunder Wave(slows down all pokemon)
    Substitute(so Focus punch isn't disrupted)
    Focus Punch(150 atk w/ 100 scc)
    Sucker PunchPick off thoose killers!

    Sceptile(Tortera replacement)@ chesto berry
    Swords Dance
    Leaf Blade
    Earthquake
    rest

    I love making Uu movesets...If anyone else has a question about Uu moves sets..just PM me.
     
    I can tell you about 5 reason as to why Rest sucks on Sceptile. Also, Sceptile isn't UU anyway.
     
    Ooooh, Kangaskhan...

    @ Leftovers
    Trait: Scrappy
    Adamant Nature
    - Thunder Wave
    - Return / Crush Claw / Dizzy Punch
    - Hammer Arm
    - Crunch / Reversal / Counter

    Crush Claw may work with Reversal.
    Reversal and Counter are completely for novelty. I like making novelty sets. (I'd even consider Aerial Ace up there just to counter Fighting-types.) It's fun! And some of them actually work, much to my own surprise. O_o

    Somewhat off-topic: I used to wonder how a Kangaskhan would hatch from an egg fully grown and with a baby in its pouch. Roflolmao
     
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