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Please rate my OU team?

AnonSilver

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    • Seen Sep 4, 2010
    A team for competitive battling. Its my first one so it cant possibly be very good. Take out one of my pokemon if you want as well. Im not really good with EVs because Ive never EV trained before so if it sounds bad then tell so. And don't tell me to get hidden power, I really cant be bothered :P. Thanks heaps!

    Bronzong@ Light Clay
    Levitate
    Relaxed (+Def, -Spe)
    252 HP/ 128 Def/ 128 SpD

    Light Screen
    Reflect
    Stealth Rock
    Explosion

    Double screen and stealth rock lead. If at any point I need to I can always go kaboom.

    Lucario @ Choice Band
    Steadfast
    Adamant (+Att, -SpA)
    252 Att/ 252 Spe/ 6 Def

    Close Combat
    Extreme Speed
    Crunch
    Earthquake

    Physical sweeper. Close Combat is going to be the primary attack, extreme speed helps anything I see on low health and out speeds any of my other pokemon and I have the chance to switch in lucario.

    Gengar @ Choice Specs
    Levitate
    Modest (+Spa, -Att)
    252 SpA/252 Spe/6 Def

    Shadow Ball
    Sludge Bomb
    Psychic
    Thunder Bolt

    Special sweeper. Shadow Ball and Sludge Bomb are STABs and the other two are just for type coverage.

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Serene Grace
    Bold (+Def, -Att)
    252 HP/252 Def/6 Spe

    Wish
    Heal Bell
    Ice Beam
    Flamethrower

    The cleric of the team, if I ever get lucky enough the ability will help me utilise that occasional freeze or burn.

    Cloyster @ Leftovers
    Shell Armour
    Bold (+Def, -Att)
    252 HP/252 SpD/6 Def

    Toxic Spikes
    Rapid Spin
    Ice Beam
    Surf

    And then we have my rapid spin and toxic spiker. Ice Beam and Surf are STAB and for type coverage as well.

    My last pokemon hasn't been filled yet, I can't figure out whats going to help here :S Thanks for your help!
     
    AnonSilver said:
    Bronzong@ Light Clay
    Levitate
    Relaxed (+Def, -Spe)
    252 HP/ 128 Def/ 128 SpD

    Light Screen
    Reflect
    Stealth Rock
    Explosion

    Ok..

    Lucario @ Choice Band
    Steadfast
    Adamant (+Att, -SpA)
    252 Att/ 252 Spe/ 6 Def

    Close Combat
    Extreme Speed
    Crunch
    Stone Edge / Ice Punch

    Eq sucks badly, adds no coverage to this great set. Use Stone Edge or Ice Punch to hit Gyarados and fliers or Gliscor respectively.

    Gengar @ Life Orb
    Levitate
    Timid
    252 SpA/252 Spe/6 Def

    Shadow Ball
    Substitute
    Focus Blast
    Pain Split

    Choiced Gengar is horrible in this metagame, Pursuit bait. This Gengar set is superior, even more so with T-Spikes up because it stalls Blisseys brains out whilst the sub lets you escape from Pursuit too. S-Ball + Focus Blast hits everything in the game for at least neutral.

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Serene Grace
    Calm
    80 HP/252 Def/176 Sp.Def

    Wish
    Heal Bell
    Protect
    Seismic Toss

    Wish without Protect is fail. Bold Bliss is also meh. Needs the S.Def evs or junk like LO Tran REALLY start to wear you down with Fire Blast. Use S-Toss as you are walled by Said Tran otherwise.

    Cloyster @ Leftovers
    Shell Armour
    Adamant
    248 HP/100 Att/162 SDef

    Toxic Spikes
    Rapid Spin
    Ice Shard
    Payback

    Cloyster is only useful in Ou for one reason and that reason being he stops dragons basically so use Ice Shard to halt DD Mence and pals. Lead with this btw, Payback + Ice Shard Ko's lead Azelf 100% of the time with the given evs whilst Payback 2HKO'S ALL Rotom with Stealth Rock up so it can only come in twice at most. Payback + Ice Shard also KO's Choice Rotom coming in with SR up.
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    Well Bronzong seems useless honestly. There are better Pokemon and nothing benefits from the screens truth be told, get a Scizor check like Gyarados who also has great synergy with Lucario. Bulky Dos would be cool and it can also sweep late game as nothing can here currently.

    Gyarados@Leftovers
    156 HP / 72 Atk / 96 Def / 184 Spe
    Adamant Nature
    - Dragon Dance
    - Taunt
    - Bounce / Stone Edge
    - Waterfall / Aqua Tail

    Bounce is fun with T-Spikes since Vappy cant use Protect on you then. :]

    Cloyster is also pretty inferior, Tentacruel is more useful in OU and also covers your huge MixApe weakness.

    Tentacruel@leftovers
    252 HP / 120 Def / 126 s.def
    Calm Nature
    Trait : Liquid Ooze
    - Sludge Bomb
    - Surf
    - Toxic Spikes
    - Rapid Spin

    Dragons are also an issue, id try a Mamoswine with Stealth Rock in that last slot he also has amazing synergy with Luke and Gyara too as they share similar counters and can wear them down between themselves.

    Mamoswine@Life Orb
    EVs: 244 Atk/236 Spd/30 SAtk
    Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
    ~ Stealth Rock
    ~ Earthquake
    ~ Ice Shard
    ~ Stone Edge / Blizzard

    Blizzard 2hko's Gyarados and Skarm with SR up and also the most of the time Rotoms iirc. If you use Stone Edge just use Jolly. Speed evs beat + Speed Nature Heatran and Adamant Lucario. Its an ok lead too actually.

    Mamo
    Gyara
    Cruel
    Bliss
    Luke
    Gar

    Something like this?
     
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