Please Rate My Team

[Trainer BlAzE]

Hiya guys, was wondering if someone could rate my NB team for me? Thanks in advance ^_^

crobat @ Choice Band
E.V's 6HP /252Spd /252Atk
Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
-Aerial Ace
-HP Ground
-Shadow Ball
-Sludge Bomb

Standard CB Crobat. I'm not sure weather to have HP Ground or HP Fighting as HP Ground is good for pokes like magneton and Aggron, whilst HP fighting is an OHKO on Tyranitar...Hmm
Dragonite @ Macho Brace

E.V's 6HP /252SpAtk /252Atk
Quiet (+SpAtk -Spd)
-Substitute
-Focus Punch
-Ice Beam
-Thunderbolt
Standard SubpunchBoltbeam Dragonite

Dusclops @ Leftovers
E.V's 252HP /129Def /129SpDef
Careful (+SpDef -Spd)
-Will-o-Wisp
-Rest
-Substitute
-Seismic Toss

Really good at taking on Curselax and the like. He is also my Spdef Tank and will-o-wisp makes up for the lower defence.

Miltank @ Leftovers
E.V's 252HP /129Def /129SpDef
Impish (+Def -SpAtk)
-Heal Bell
-Milk Drink
-Seismic Toss
-Thunder Wave

My Defence Tank and my Heal Beller. Thickfat stops significant damage from fire and ice so that makes up kinda for the lack of SpDef.

Metagross @ Leichi Berry
E.V's 169HP /89Spd /252Atk
Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
-Agility
-Earthquake
-Meteor Mash
-Sludge Bomb

Standard Agiligross

Sceptile @ Leftovers
E.V's 6HP /252Spd /252Atk
Timid (+Spd -Atk)
-Leech Seed
-Substitute
-Leaf Blade
-HP Ice

Really good annoyer plus my Swampert counter.

Well, thanks for reading :p

 

[Ham]

Macho Brace on Draggy? why **** yourself like that?

 

[Squarewalker]

Comments in bold.

Hiya guys, was wondering if someone could rate my NB team for me? Thanks in advance ^_^

crobat @ Choice Band
E.V's 6HP /252Spd /252Atk
Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
-Aerial Ace
-HP Ground
-Shadow Ball
-Sludge Bomb

Standard CB Crobat. I'm not sure weather to have HP Ground or HP Fighting as HP Ground is good for pokes like magneton and Aggron, whilst HP fighting is an OHKO on Tyranitar...Hmm

HP Fighting works better. Btw, Jolly > Adamant nature on this.

Dragonite @ Macho Brace
E.V's 6HP /252SpAtk /252Atk
Quiet (+SpAtk -Spd)
-Substitute
-Focus Punch
-Ice Beam
-Thunderbolt
Standard SubpunchBoltbeam Dragonite

Well, not quite standard. Leftovers > Macho Brace, Rash nature, EVs: 28 hp / 176 speed / 104 attack / 200 sp.attack.

Dusclops @ Leftovers
E.V's 252HP /129Def /129SpDef
Careful (+SpDef -Spd)
-Will-o-Wisp
-Rest
-Substitute
-Seismic Toss

Really good at taking on Curselax and the like. He is also my Spdef Tank and will-o-wisp makes up for the lower defence.

I rather like Focus Punch over S-Toss and Shadow Ball over Sub. Give it at least 24 attack EVs, to OHKO Alakazam for sure with Shadow Ball.

Miltank @ Leftovers
E.V's 252HP /129Def /129SpDef
Impish (+Def -SpAtk)
-Heal Bell
-Milk Drink
-Seismic Toss
-Thunder Wave

My Defence Tank and my Heal Beller. Thickfat stops significant damage from fire and ice so that makes up kinda for the lack of SpDef.

A bit less hp and more defense. Those SDef EVs can go into attack... I mean, it is not going to wall any special attackers, no?
Also, Curse and Body Slam > S-Toss and T-wave; it's not a blissey, so use Miltank with its advantages over blissey. It can wall really well physical attacks after a few Curses.

Metagross @ Leichi Berry
E.V's 169HP /89Spd /252Atk
Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
-Agility
-Earthquake
-Meteor Mash
-Sludge Bomb

Standard Agiligross

It needs at least 96 speed EVs. Explosion > Sludge Bomb on Agiligross, imo.

Sceptile @ Leftovers
E.V's 6HP /252Spd /252Atk
Timid (+Spd -Atk)
-Leech Seed
-Substitute
-Leaf Blade
-HP Ice

Really good annoyer plus my Swampert counter.

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Well, thanks for reading :p

I hope this helps.

 

[Ice demon]

psych up can also work over curse.

 

[Trainer BlAzE]

Blissey normally has around 149 speed and even with a -Spd nature dragonites speed can't get that low, machobrace is there so draggy can get the sub up after blissey the FP it to death. I dont really need Shadow ball on dusclops as Crobat has a definate ohko against zam with shadow ball...

Thanks for the suggestions :)

 

[Ham]

Yeah, you watch as your Draggy gets hit by an Ice Beam. GREAT MOVE THAR.

and Leftiesless Subs are just plain stupid.

 

[Espy Psyche]

Hiya guys, was wondering if someone could rate my NB team for me? Thanks in advance ^_^

crobat @ Choice Band
E.V's 6HP /252Spd /252Atk
Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
-Aerial Ace
-HP Ground
-Shadow Ball
-Sludge Bomb

Standard CB Crobat. I'm not sure weather to have HP Ground or HP Fighting as HP Ground is good for pokes like magneton and Aggron, whilst HP fighting is an OHKO on Tyranitar...Hmm
I probably would go for a toxistaller, but this works too...
As for HP, Fight is better. Fight kills Aggron as well as T-Tar(2x2 still =4)
Dragonite @ Macho Brace Leftovers/Shell Bell

E.V's 6HP /252SpAtk /252Atk
Quiet (+SpAtk -Spd)
-Substitute
-Focus Punch
-Ice Beam
-Thunderbolt
Standard SubpunchBoltbeam Dragonite
:D

Dusclops @ Leftovers
E.V's 252HP /129Def /129SpDef
Careful (+SpDef -Spd)
-Will-o-Wisp
-Rest Shadow Ball
-Substitute
-Seismic Toss

Really good at taking on Curselax and the like. He is also my Spdef Tank and will-o-wisp makes up for the lower defence.
Shadow Ball is needed somewhere on this Dusclops, I say for Rest
Miltank @ Leftovers
E.V's 252HP /129Def /129SpDef
Impish (+Def -SpAtk)
-Heal Bell
-Milk Drink
-Seismic Toss
-Thunder Wave

My Defence Tank and my Heal Beller. Thickfat stops significant damage from fire and ice so that makes up kinda for the lack of SpDef.
OK
Metagross @ Leichi Berry
E.V's 169HP /89Spd /252Atk
Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
-Agility
-Earthquake
-Meteor Mash
-Sludge Bomb

Standard Agiligross
I like CB Gross more, but this works. For yours, Adamant is OK, but for the ones with Psychic, avoid Adamant.
Sceptile @ Leftovers
E.V's 6HP /252Spd /252Atk
Timid (+Spd -Atk)
-Leech Seed
-Substitute
-Leaf Blade
-HP Ice

Really good annoyer plus my Swampert counter.
Sceptile can annoy, but I like it as a spec sweeper more.
Leaf Blade, D Claw, Brick Break, Crunch/T Punch. Sceptile has more than enough speed to sweep, and its SA>ATK. For yours, keep Lefties, but for mine, Shell Bell works more.
Well, thanks for reading :p

Some of your roles may be dubious, but the movesets for the roles are good.

 

[Ice demon]

leftovers > shell bell till the end of time.....
whats better?...recovering 1/16 of ur hp every turn or only after u get hit??
Anyone would say the former.

toxic stalling crobat fails..It has amazing speed and a good attack stat..Utilize them.

A tank without the ability to recover HP is stupid...Hence rest,pain split > shadow ball...
with dusclops' horrid hp, substitute is retarded.

keep ur current sceptile.

 

[leafgreen386]

HP:Fighting>Ground on Crobat. Fight takes out all of the same stuff that you mentioned as Ground does. With that logic, wouldn't you want Fighting? Jolly.

For Dragonite, use Torkoal_7's EVs. Leftovers>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Macho Brace on that thing. Blissey aren't even that common anyway.

On Dusclops, Pain Split/WoW/Shadow Ball/[Focus Punch/Seismic Toss] is standard. With its low HP, it will benfit a lot more from Pain Split than it will from Rest. But I would recomend giving it more than 24 Atk, as with only 96 Def EVs, iirc, Alakazam will survive it. It takes 84 EVs to OHKO Alakazam on average with those extra Def EVs on Alakazam.

On Miltank, USE CURSE AND AN ACTUAL ATTACKING MOVE. It's unbelievable how many of these things I see with T-Wave and ST. It can actually do something with an 80 base Atk, unlike Blissey, with a shameful ten base Atk.

If you're using Agiligross, use either T-Punch (for Skarm) or Explosion in that last move slot. If you use T-Punch, use Naughty and 136 SAtk EVs to guarantee 2HKO Skarm.

The Sceptile's fine.

You lack a (P)Hazer. Btw, next time, go File -> Export to Text so you don't have to type it all out.