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Your finally back.Welcome..... ^_^

Hey I just found one of my very old poems. Here!

♥Sweet Love♥

As spring comes
Love arrives to our lives
Your true love is discover

As spring goes by
Our love stays
Our sweet love remains

When the birds sing of joy
Our hearts sing of happiness as well
Our love is strong,our love is pure

The sweetness of love is nice
Its a wonderfull feeling
The feeling of sweet love is special

As cupid goes by and shoots his arrows
Im shot with love
A love that lasts forever

Sweet love's like a perfume
One that never fades
And one that never wastes..

And as love fills my soul
I feel like a butterfly wondering by
Watching the wonderfull flowers below

As look down I see you there..smiling at me and my hearts fills with happyness
And it feels like jumping out
And I became happy to see you smiling at me

And I thank cupid for shooting us
For I know you love me as well
Im happy we're together

For this sweet love we feel is eternal
And im happy its so..
I know that I would have wanted to be with you forever..for our sweet love is forever..
 
pink-tiger said:
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Your finally back.Welcome..... ^_^

Hey I just found one of my very old poems. Here!

♥Sweet Love♥

As spring comes
Love arrives to our lives
Your true love is discover

As spring goes by
Our love stays
Our sweet love remains

When the birds sing of joy
Our hearts sing of happiness as well
Our love is strong,our love is pure

The sweetness of love is nice
Its a wonderfull feeling
The feeling of sweet love is special

As cupid goes by and shoots his arrows
Im shot with love
A love that lasts forever

Sweet love's like a perfume
One that never fades
And one that never wastes..

And as love fills my soul
I feel like a butterfly wondering by
Watching the wonderfull flowers below

As look down I see you there..smiling at me and my hearts fills with happyness
And it feels like jumping out
And I became happy to see you smiling at me

And I thank cupid for shooting us
For I know you love me as well
Im happy we're together

For this sweet love we feel is eternal
And im happy its so..
I know that I would have wanted to be with you forever..for our sweet love is forever..
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I'm sorry to say this, but this to sappy for my liking. It doesn't suck, I just do not like love poems unless they include some form of blood, pain, abuse, etc.
I guess like this (And yeah, this is mine)

Empty Memory

One last hold of my hand
One last drop of blood spilled
One last chance for survival
One last chance for anything

Your grip lossens as I pull mine away
And set off again
I see the glimmer reflecting off the sun in your eye
I know why it's there
But my heart wouldn't be able to take it

One last hold of my hand
One last drop of blood spilled
One last chance for survival
One last chance for anything

I walk alone
Wondering everything
About that one last time touching your skin
It felt so nice
And perfect
But the world is falling apart
Because of hate
And tearing people apart

One last hold of my hand
One last drop of blood spilled
One last chance for survival
One last chance for anything

I know you worry
But that's just natural
Maybe more then normal
But I know it will be fine
Puddle of tears collect on your windowsill
And more start to fall
Flowing off onto the carpet

One last hold of my hand
One last drop of blood spilled
One last chance for survival
One last chance for anything

I take the cuts and slashes
Knowing you're waiting back for me
Knowing that you will die if I do first
You will get the rope
If someone comes back with bad news
Tie it up
If too much of my blood is spilled
And wrap it around your neck
If I never wake up again

One last hold of my hand
One last drop of blood spilled
One last chance for survival
One last chance for anything
 
Noone has posted in a while so i'm going to bring it back to life with a little poem

Friends to enemies
Pals to rivals
People killing each other just for survival
Friends at each others throat becuase theres no bread
Friends killing each other becuse theres no water

These people are giving each other a horrible slaughter
but to thing they were once friends playing togeather
but the things people do when they dont get there way
it really hurts its a grave pain
that is why you choose your friends wise
becuase who knows what theyll do only to survivie
 
Well here's a topic, since its club it need to to live!!!!

Do you guys think its important for it to rhyme?

Cause I think poems can be great with or without rhying.
 
pink-tiger said:
Well here's a topic, since its club it need to to live!!!!

Do you guys think its important for it to rhyme?

Cause I think poems can be great with or without rhying.
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*stands stiff* AHven't we already said this?

Anyway, no. I know some good freeverses.


Cold Rugud Pavement

Layer after layer
Of cloth between my fingers
I hold on so much longer
Curling and un-curling my fist
I notice you
Walking on this rainy day

I wanna know
Is everything alright?
This rain
Does it numb you like it does to me?
Is there pain
That you're hiding?
From my reach
From my thoughts

Lightning crashes
Around us both
You keep heading off
Into the nowhere
Where your heart wants you to roam
I continue to stare wondering a question
On my mind

I wanna know
Did someone's words hurt you too much?
I wanna carry on like nothing happened
But not until I see that your fine
I want to make sure you are just great
I want to know of your pain

Sit yourself down
On the pavement
Like your waiting for a car
To come by
I still don't know
What to do
Should I say something
Should I wait
Should I go
And not watch what happens next?

I wanna know what is on
Your mind
Inside your head
I need your reassuring
It's okay
I'm just fine

Drenched
To your skin
Still waiting
I'm still scared stiff
What has become of that
Beautiful smile of yours
The corner of sunshine
Radiant to everyone
Wanting to know the truth

I want you to tell me
When something horrible has happened
I wanna know the real truth in
Your cherry red rimmed eyes
I wanna know you are good
And right

I don't care how much
You hate me for this
I don't want
Any excuses
I need you to come
To me first
I need the everything
I wanna help you
But you won't open
And I'm not going to
Break down your barriers

Open yourself
Before a car opens your skull
I want the world to know you
Are regular
In mood

I wanna know
The truth
No more lies
No more false
Nothing but
The realism
Of your kind

I start my walk towards you
I hear a blaring sound before me
I run fast
Almost tripping on the pavement
Too slow
And
CRASH
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Hullo all.

Manaphy1128 told me to join this clubbeh a while ago... So... Here I am. A little late, but... ^ ^;;

So here's one of my poems.

Hate

What is love, really?
When you hug?
When you kiss?
Or is it when you feel attraction to another person
even though
they don't feel attracted to you?

Or is it maybe
something tangible?
Something you can wrap and
give as a gift.
Something you can
touch.

Or could it be something to kill for?
Would you kill to love?
Would you die to love?

Or maybe, you, yourself, are love.
You're the love that you give,
the love that you get,
the love everywhere.

Or maybe love isn't real.

And only hate exists.
 
Yes, you should have come earlier. 10 POINTS OFF! *shot*

I really like the poem . It really expresses your description of this world. Yeah, I suck at this.

Mirror

Losing strentgh
And losing at my own game
Running faster now
Trying to escape my fate

It's probably
Just around the corner
Too bad this world is round
Hiding in shadows alike

So much for helping me today
Standing so stiff
Rigid as stone and the like

Finally
Come over, please help me
Another sick twisted dream
Or is this outlandish thing real?
Such a peril
In disstress
Danger
And hiding heart
To strike and rip it out
Holding on to my last regret
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Pretty. I like the "Hiding in Shadows Alike" part. <333

Awu. 10 points? Can't it only be, like, five? ;o;
 
No,its about the same thing.Just a bit different.Cuase Midori said it was different. ^_^
 
Why is this thing always almost dead or in-active? I don't know.

Short poem:

Two Days Ago​

Let me go, let me out, let me be, let me die
Let me be free, just do not, let me down
In my head I'm falling
Pity blame
Such atrosous words
So profound
Aggnorant little
No I won't even go there
Sacrifices must be made
AI have last regret
;Don't die now​

Sorry if anything is spelt wrong...
 
Manaphy1128 said:
Why is this thing always almost dead or in-active? I don't know.

Short poem:

Two Days Ago​

Let me go, let me out, let me be, let me die
Let me be free, just do not, let me down
In my head I'm falling
Pity blame
Such atrosous words
So profound
Aggnorant little
No I won't even go there
Sacrifices must be made
AI have last regret
;Don't die now​

Sorry if anything is spelt wrong...
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Aww this poem brings the word hope into my mind.Well the last sentence,
;Don't die now
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 It reminds me of someone telling you not to give up on hope. ^_^
 
As always, I'm almost always the person who post every other post. Why, I do not know.

By the way, this is the shortest poem i have ever written, but i guess the message is someting to think about..("WAIT, WHAT?")

Steep Hill​

I burnt my own
Heart to ashes.

Fight fire with fire,
I fought fire with water.
I cheat the world,
Who cheated us first.​
 
The reason why this clubs almost dead its cause the originall owner hasent come in here.Even though im also an owner. ^_^

Thats a very good poem, even though its short.Good job. ^_^
 
It is still a dead place around here, always is. So,

Bridge​

Why can't I save you?
I thought I was supposed to.
isn't this what you want?
Am I on the bridge between me and myself?

Sincerity,
It's worthless.
They never can keep their promise.
I won't buy into it.
I never will.

Am I the on who's worthless?
What have I become?
Seeing my reflection.
Seeing I'm fading.​


By the way, the original li9ne for the line "Bridge between" was diffrent.
 
Manaphy1128 said:
It is still a dead place around here, always is. So,

Bridge​

Why can't I save you?
I thought I was supposed to.
isn't this what you want?
Am I on the bridge between me and myself?

Sincerity,
It's worthless.
They never can keep their promise.
I won't buy into it.
I never will.

Am I the on who's worthless?
What have I become?
Seeing my reflection.
Seeing I'm fading.​


By the way, the original li9ne for the line "Bridge between" was diffrent.
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Really? 0_0

I would post a poem but im not good at them so I wont even try. >_<

If I try itll take me a night to write.
 
Yet another time to showcase my crap-I mean, poetry. yeah.

Roses​

And well,
The greatest thing in life is wondering why.
Why do we exist.
Oh and I think I have an answer,
Right here on the tip of my tounge.

You see,
No one knows what is enough,
There are more poems to write,
So many songs to sing,
More drawings to be drawn,
So many more people to blame.
And you know your life is ending when you think
You experienced a lifetime.
And the ending for me is not near.

And my next concern is what happens here,
Finding out mysteries we can.
Is there really coincedence and accidents-
Or just Hitzuen, as quoted?
So many more wonders to let them sink in.
Waiting to be answered.

And the best thing about this planet,
Is being a kid.
The happiest-
Or most depressing.
Your sucked into the crazy things people do,
And maybe you treat it lightly.
That's what being one is about.
Not knowing,
Always wondering.
That's how you grow up,
And that's how the world works,
And that is what life is about.
Oh and don't forget those life lessons.

"What, your paper has a rip?
And your just going to throw it away?
Is that what you do to humans too-
They aren't not complete, so you just trash them?
You think this world should be a pefect place?
Well gosh honey,
Not even Heaven is.
And you will make sure what you use is the best one you know?
Well I'll let you ponder on this."
 
I like that Manaphy1128, and I don't think its crap...Here's an old one I wrote seven years ago...(note I don't think it's that good but tell me what you think)



First day we met, seems just like yesterday.
It's been so long since we've known each other.
No one can take our great friendship away!
Hopefully we can stay best friends forever.

You are always a friend and a sister to me.
We have lot's of fun I'll never forget!
Yet, we never fight nor we disagree.
Our friendship is like a golden sunset.

We've been friends for fifteen long, long years.
A best friend is someone who's always there.
If we became enemies I'd have tears.
No matter what happens, you'll always care.
When we get older, we will never forget.
And yet, I am so grateful that we met!
 
I really liked it.(Keep in mind, I like most friendshipr poetry because I can't write them.)
MAKE IT DEEPER!(Because I can;t do that either)
Done with my ramblins, this is like, my poetry dumpage.

This is a poem for a contest on a Poetry site. So, boom boom. And I really don't think any of my poetry us good. I just realized my bloody poems were so naive and stupid compared to todays work.

Reflection​

They do it with mirrors
They do it with glass.
They do it to see if they look nice.
Just don't stand there for too long,
Concieted girl.

I look in the ocean,
And the nearby pond.
I gaze and think whatever happend,
Why is this water dirty.

I look towards my window,
Washed out with rain.
When I look in it,
The liquid falling makes me look
As if I'm crying.

They do it with mirrors
They do it with glass.
They don't really how to reflect.​
 
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