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Poems

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    Not sure if I posted this before,

    A whisper of death

    Death came to me the night before

    not having to wait

    for now or more.



    The birds whispered

    the silence came.

    Peace not be forgotten

    by the truth of my words.



    The peace came tonight

    its whisper so sweet.

    It's dream into love

    of the peace of my heart.

    What I not knew

    to forever live.



    Peace came tonight

    and it whispered of death.
     
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    A whisper of death, Overlap

    This world was filled with people,
    But none as beautiful as you?I wanted us to share our hearts,
    But that could never be.
    Overlap came over my soul and my eyes saw what I not wanted to hear,
    The truth of whispers, the death of my heart.

    The quite of this could not be stopped. I was headed towards my end.
    Was it bliss I wanted, or the sweet sensation pain? The two were different, but they were the same.
    Your eyes could touch my soul in a way I?d never dreamt of.
    Your soul could change my life so fast,
    Give me pain, and give me bliss, to each his own.
    The whispers that this brought about were so sweet?
    The whispers that brought about were so painful.


    To be thought of as a monster, to be revered of as a god, I had never finished what I started.
    I loved you; I hated you, always in contradiction with you,
    you gave me all that I wanted,
    and dangled it in the air for me.
    Goodbye to my fellow mankind,
    The greatness of me was not known,
    My soul was lost,
    But in sweet pain it was found,
    As it was with sweet lust.
    We were overlapped?



    When we two parted
    In silence and tear's
    Half broken hearted
    To sever for years
    pale grew thy cheek and cold
    colder thy kiss
    truly that hour fortold
    sorrow to this.
    The dew of the morning
    sunk chill on my brow
    It felt like the warning
    Of what i felt now
    The vows are all broken
    And the light is thy fame
    I hear that name spoken and i share in it's shame
    Thy name there before me
    A knell to my ears
    A shudder comes over me
    why wert tho so dear?
    Thy know i knew thy
    Who knew thee to well
    Long long shall i rule thee
    to deeply to tell
    In secret love we meet in silence i greive
    That thy heart could forget thy spirit decive
    If i should meet thee after lon year's
    How should i great thee?
    With love and compassion?
    Or with silence and tear's?
    For that is the greatest gift of my fear's
    We we two parted.
     

    Kyosuke

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    I don't know much about the rules of a good piece of Poetry, but what you wrote makes me feel in a way calm, and relaxed, something I haven't felt in a while. It was good to me.
     
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    I'm speechless...those are just such good poems.I'm not sure how to describe them really.
     

    Kyosuke

    .·Simple Complexity
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    blue said:
    I'll post more in a bit but,....they make you feel calm? What the...


    Thats the way I feel when I read most poetry, not that it gives me some sort of feeling or anything but I'm ususally anxious most of the time, and it calms me down by reading it.
     
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    Oh ok...your welcome? O_0 Ya I can do good poems but not good fics? Ya, thanks a bundle god! XD
     
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    If the river had felt the way I did,
    what would become?
    Surely we moved foward,
    and never willing to run.
    Gods eyes and his legs,
    gave us our need,
    even though we begged
    we begged and pleaed.

    Forgive that of which we sined,
    give us our life back,
    the human was your creation,
    and only a demonstration.

    There we go, now who the heck gave me a bad rep here? Was it because the poem was bad or what?
     

    Geometric-sama

    The Manly Man of Steel
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    I won't tell you who gave you the bad rep, he can tell you if he wishes, but yes, he didn't like your poem (I think it's great). Actually, for some reason he reported it o_O
     
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    New one:
    Smile
    We had it all one day,
    and lost it all so fast.
    I waited for you by the tree,
    I watched you study from afar.
    Came to your doorstep,
    couldent bring myself to it.
    Would I regret I forever knew,
    I waited so long, but after a while
    I brought you a smile.

    New Idea!
    If anyone needs a poem, ask me for one, just tell me the subject matter,tone,length. I'll try to have it to you fast.
     

    cranium

    Lv 100 Pokemon Trainer
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    like the poem blue
    i like the way you let people come to their own conclusions about what you're writing

    good work ^^
     
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    Got another one for ya here:

    *~View*~
    I felt that it could go on no longer,
    but what was it that I really wanted?
    Was it love, or something more?
    I felt that I had given all I could to you as a friend,
    now I sat down watching you be happy,
    never wanting to let you go.
    If I brought me joy, it brought you pain,
    I let you stay in joy as I stayed in pain.
    With you never knowing, but allways showing.

    That one just came to me last night for no reason,lol.

    Ok, I swear my next one will be happy...well maybe not happy, but at least not as depressing as these last few ^ ^;;.
     

    Kelsey

    ~-*-~-*-~-*-~
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    Awww, I liked that poem very much, blue! I think that if you added a few more stanza's it'd be perfect. But, the way I feel about poems is as long as you took the time to write out a poem, and as long as it came fromt he heart, then no matter what the legth, it will be of pure perfection. Well done, blue. ;)

    ~Kelsey
     
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    Aww thanks ^ ^

    Destiny
    A predetermined course of events considered as something beyond human power or control, a simple few words can map out your life. Though you fight it you can never do much, it's all in the cards, it's all come to pass. Escape and run, but time and again you will fall from grace, the truth you escaped and the peace you found...was it really that diffrent from what was your destiny?

    Tried a paragrah fromat there O__0

    Era
    The era you left behind was perfect, so filled with your footsteps and light of your life. We all gave you praise and we all let you go. Though what could have been diffrent? We shall never know, truth be told we had nothing to lose, but everything to gain. The thought that we could never live up to your era was just so...even though I tried...I allways died...

    Now figure the hidden meaning in that last one out! XD
     
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    Seeds of destiny were with you and me, both ever ment to be together. Grown and aged we were know stronger then before...but the wrath of time had changed us forver, not what I remembred but something else, we were apart...
     
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    Got another one in me!

    How long is forever?
    How long is forever?
    That question kept running in my head over and over again.
    Not knowing the answer to which it gave me pain.
    Not having the heart to go on,
    Not having the will to give up.

    How I wish for the simple complacency of before,
    Young and unaware of our future.
    Happy and joyful full of bliss,
    Now it feels as if everything is amiss.

    Having to wait now for that response,
    But how long would it really last?
    Without heart and without the love,
    I could neither stay nor could I go.

    Now I sit here asking me the question…
    How long is forever?
     
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