Poetry From The Heart

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    Well, these poems are some of my best, so I hope you like them!

    A Stare Not a Glare
    By SPon11

    Such an elegant shape
    Pointed, elf-like ears
    The long tail like a cape
    There is nothing it fears

    Out in the daytime
    Sleeping in the night
    It's voice like a windchime
    Such fur...such a sight

    The gem on its forehead
    Resembles the morning sky
    Such a dark, ruby red
    It let's out a soft sigh

    Its eyes are what capture me
    Such an idle stare
    It stares at the sea
    Not a furious glare

    But a soft, soothing, suddle stare​

    Hoo-hah! I'll do two poems at once!

    A Will in the Night
    by SPon11

    O, the moon is alight
    The sun fades away
    The stars now have might
    The owls astray

    As their wings beat
    So does their spirit
    One thing, indeed
    Will always hear it

    The spirits all sing
    And it will always stay still
    "Nothing can withstand
    The power of will"​

    Hey! I can even do 3!

    War
    by SPon11

    The lives are at stake
    Some already downed
    Survivors have ached
    Most diers have drowned​

    Phew...So...what do ya think?
     
    I really do like your poetry its feels calming to read them, and please post more.
     
    Great Poetry SPon11, i love the first one "A stare not a glare" It's beautifully written and the rhyming scheme is excellent...
     
    Thanks, Hikaru's Twin and Liquid Thunder! I made most of these when I was about to go to sleep...I guess it makes sense, because I'm kind of relaxed...Gosh! I made myself tired!

    Peace​

    by SPon11

    I dream of a place
    Where the soil is healthy
    Plants never die
    And the people are wealthy

    A place where birds sing
    Fish jump out of water
    A loyal man is king
    And has a nice daughter

    The reeds bow to the wind
    Seaweed waves in the sea
    No being has ever sinned
    To either you, him, or me​

    *bows* I just made that one up. Took a bit...
     
    Okay, I updated "War", and changed the name!
    The Agony of War
    by SPon11
    The lives are at stake
    Some already downed
    Survivors have ached
    Most diers have drowned

    The sky's raining blood
    The children all cry
    As blood forms a flood
    That will surely reach the sky

    Survivors never die peacefully
    As their souls shall decend
    Will this never-ending agony
    Ever have an end...?​

    I love that one...
     
    I love that one too ^^;.

    But seriously, "The agony of War" captures what its like in War in such a short amount of writing and this is definatly an excellent example of quality over quantity great job.
     
    Wow...I would love to see work like that on the TNSC FanArt/FanFics pages..even tho they not really FanArt. But of course noone ever visits meh site..altho i spend too much time trying to make it a little better every day. well ill post meh fanfic there..and maybe here..if its ok with the PC mods.
     
    Okay, I know I'm going online like grandpa, but here's a Mew poem (oh, and 'A Stare Not a Glare' is about an Espeon)

    Immortal
    Accidently helping one
    Thinking it's a game
    Just wanting to have some fun
    To you, it's all the same

    At the strike of danger
    You just give off a chortle
    You're just a small pink stranger
    Except that you're immortal​

    Heh, heh...I forgot the middle stanza...oh, well...[/arial]
     
    Your poetry is very calming, it reminds me of Robert Frost. I love his works, they are also very sooting to the soul.
     
    Yeah, a Frost comparison is quite valid. Yur poetry captures emotion quite well, and it's easy to read. You maintain clarity quite well, nor do you degenerate into sappy lines. Amazingly talented, actually. Might I suggest writing some haiku? I think you'd be good at it.
     
    Now I remember the Mew poem...Thanks for the compliments! I've done Haiku, but I like rhyming the best.

    Immortal

    by Haley Wall (I finally reveal my name)

    Accidently helping one
    Thinking it's a game
    Just wanting to have some fun
    To you it's all the same

    Having only one feeling
    You are always glad
    I can't even think of sealing
    The way you can't get mad

    At times of perilous danger
    You just give off a chortle
    You're just a small pink stranger
    Except that you're immortal​

    I like your avatar, Liquid Thunder. It's Ken from Super Puzzle Fighter II, right?

    Oh, and I forgot how to do Haiku...
     
    5-7-5 syllable structure. There's also an alternate format that gos 5-7-5-7-7.
     
    Nicely done SPon11, you seem like a really calm person and I can see it in your poems if you are. I like everything that you wrote so far its calming.

    And yes it is Ken from Super Puzzle fighter 2 XP.
     
    Actually, that's a good Haiku. They're supposed t invoke a feeling of nature and yours does just that. You did well at a description of the setting, and it leaves the reader with the sensation of a storm.
     
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