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Your storyline is very hard to read and full of grammatical errors...
I quickly fixed as much as i could for you.
Spoiler:There are many different kinds Pokémon, that have different powers and types. Each of these Pokémon have their own ways of living. There are some powerful Pokémon, called legendary Pokémon. They are the protectors of Pokémon and people.
People and Pokémon live together. Some people catch Pokémon, and train them for battle. Others breed Pokémon, and raise them. Others even use their pokemon to do hard work. However, humans and Pokémon support each other every step of the way.
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However, there is also a dark side of human nature. Some people use their Pokémon to do evil deeds. Team Galactic, for example, are some of these people. They want to catch legendary Pokémon, and use them to rule the world.
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So, Team Galactic is hunting Giratina, because of its power to go into another dimension. If they can catch Giratina, they can get to the time and space dimension and can catch Dialga and Palkia (Note: Giratina can not take them to the Distortion World or the Reverse World). However, they have found out that Darkrai has the power to open a portal to the Distortion World. They have tried many times to catch Darkrai, but they always fail.
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So they came up with a new plan. They captured Mewtwo, and controlled him with a device. Then they made Mewtwo open the portal to the Distortion World. Darkrai immediately noticed that something was wrong but he did not have enough power to stop the evil Team Galactic.
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Darkrai shows you a dream:
You find your self in a dark place, and there is a white fog and some kind of light. When you take a step you feel a weak Earthquake and a huge Pokémon will fly away.
After that you will find yourself back in your bed.
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You live in the beautiful region of Deiona. Today is your 14th birthday, and you get out of bed. This is the day you will receive your first Pokémon, and when you talk to your Mother she will tell you that Professor Rowan, who is your Father's friend, has come here to research Pokémon. When you go outside you meet Professor Rowan, and he will give you a Pokémon as a gift as well as a Pokédex. He will then ask you to help him with his research on legendary Pokémon. After you leave the lab your Mother will give you a pair of running shoes and tell you to collect gym badges to become a Pokémon master. After that you will leave the town and go out on an adventure with your Pokemon. On your journey you will meet many trainers, lots of Pokémon, and battle bad guys.
I edited the edit of your story to make it a little more pleasing to read.(see the spoiler in the quote)
I left it basically the same with many edits. That is a very interesting storyline, and I can't wait to see how it all works out.
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