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Pokémon : Secrets & Lies

Chizzy

Comic coming soon...
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    • Seen Oct 27, 2010
    Pokémon : Secrets & Lies

    Welcome to my new comic!

    Its been a while since I even attempted to make one, and this is my first comic in about 2 years! :O

    Its a move away from the simple straight foward generic.

    STORY BELOW
    Spoiler:


    COMICS!

    Volume 1 : Rookies don't Rock

    Episode 1 : Escape

    Credits
    The Spriters Resource.. For everything, although a few say credit isn't necassary to people personaly, I'll list them on here eventually.

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    Ooh, pretty comic, though I'd suggest you create your own professor, just so you aren't restricted by the audiences prior knowledge of the character.

    But yeah, nice looking comic so far. The speech bubbles might become a hassle though, since they take up extra space unnecessarily, and there's no idication (besides their placement), of who is speaking.
     
    Yeah, I haven't sprited in a while so I kinda need to get used to that.

    Im editing the speech bubbles as I type!

    Prof Oak will have The Greyish coloured one, and the main charachter, a red one. Other new charachters will get different coloured bubbles.
     
    Purdy nice, but that the equipment is twice oaks size might be a problem >.<

    Oaks a bit generic with the hidden agenda that he explains to the audience, but he's good. Will there be MD Pokemon or Ranger Pokemon?
     
    It's likely to be Ranger Pokemon :P
     
    A c e n d o

    D: Chizzy! It's Acendo, :D

    + the spriting and everything looks spectacular.
    + the characters sprites and background objects don't seem to mesh with each other very well, the characters are small and the objects are thrice their size.
    + The bubbles are very creative and i like them.
    + Also, the episode title in the top right corner is spelled wrong (Escpae = Escape).

    so far i like it, just a few minor flaws which you of course and fix.

    ;)

    good luck.
     
    It has a nice spriting
    and very creative
     
    Looking really good so far.

    Oak is using the little children, the lazy mother - !

    Only joking. Really good comic though.

    Can't wait for more.
     
    I know.

    It's really interesting, can't wait.
     
    You should really use textbox tails. It makes it a heck of a lot easier to see who is talking. But not a bad try for your first attempt!
     
    FuzzyMuzzy said:
    You should really use textbox tails. It makes it a heck of a lot easier to see who is talking. But not a bad try for your first attempt!
    Click to expand...

    'Tis not his first attempt. It's like his.. fifth or something.
     
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