Curt_09
Also known as Chozo
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- Seen Oct 20, 2024
Oh god what is this I don't even...
Let me express my skepticism in the simplest of manners:
1. Your maps are square, why are there five signposts in Milestone Town, and Route 1 still bears some traces of... Route 1 -_-
2. Your aliens are simply recolors.
Now the idea is all fine and well, but the story could use some fleshing out. What are the new superpowered Pokemon looking to accomplish? What exactly are we stopping Team Comet from doing? How did they "evolve" this way in the first place, rather than the normal process of evolutionary chains? Did they come from space? Was there a meteorite imbued with some mystical cosmic power that caused them to change?
Please explain why these Pokemon "evolved" in such a manner, what kind of new powers they have achieved, why in the world they would want to change their color, what Comet's devious plans are, and how the hero comes to play a part in "stopping them." Also, "there" should be "their."
Let me express my skepticism in the simplest of manners:
1. Your maps are square, why are there five signposts in Milestone Town, and Route 1 still bears some traces of... Route 1 -_-
2. Your aliens are simply recolors.
Now the idea is all fine and well, but the story could use some fleshing out. What are the new superpowered Pokemon looking to accomplish? What exactly are we stopping Team Comet from doing? How did they "evolve" this way in the first place, rather than the normal process of evolutionary chains? Did they come from space? Was there a meteorite imbued with some mystical cosmic power that caused them to change?
Please explain why these Pokemon "evolved" in such a manner, what kind of new powers they have achieved, why in the world they would want to change their color, what Comet's devious plans are, and how the hero comes to play a part in "stopping them." Also, "there" should be "their."