Awesome job! I have just a couple of things to point out with the grammar, if that's okay:
Vileplume, page 2: "Wow! You can won many battles. Not bad." should read "Wow! You have won many battles. Not bad."
same page : "I let Dusclop learn this move with using my BP." should read, "I let Dusclops learn this move by using my BP." Note: "Dusclops" is the proper form of the name, therefore "Dusclop's Fire Punch" should read, "Dusclops' Fire Punch"
If you want, I could proofread the rest of the volumes for you.
Good of you, Ryan, keep us informed with the link once you're ready.
OMG i love you. so how many more chapters till 28 is finished?
hey i just wanted to ask i mean i like all the chapters but i actually just wanna like see the finished chapter of Vs Vileplume I
thanx ryan
i just have to see what's going to happen next
By the way, this is not really related to this thread but as you know, the Pokedex holders are revived! For those who are not read the summary of Coronis in the end of Volume 28. They are froze by Sird and Mewtwo's power and they are transport to Battle Frontier in the end of Volume 27. Nearly the end of Volume 28, Ruby and Sapphire saw the statues. And Sapphire was hapy because she wants to see Red when she was young. But they don't really know about the statues. So until Wonderland 9, Crys and Gold maybe tell the Hoenn Trio (Sapphire, Ruby and Emerald). Then in Wonderland 10, they finally unfroze! Here's the image scanned from Coronis.
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This is actually Coronis' pic. I don't want to claim others pic so this is not mine. By the way, who has HP Deskjet F300 Install file? I need for scanning because my PC is re-formatted. If you have, please send it to me via MSN. If not I can't scan the rest of the manga.
Also, I just noticed that Blue's skirt flies up behind her, like almost right in front of Silver.
Hmmmm.....and notice Silver's low-crouching form behind Blue when they were frozen as statues. Did he want to wake up to a sight that he liked? Ugh, I hope that's not the case. But then again, he IS friends with Gold. Maybe some of Gold rubbed off on him...
Wow. The people here are awesome. You sacrifice your time just to do something for all us Pokespe fans. Also, I just have a question... When you say Mangafox denied, do you mean mangafox didn't let you upload the manga or you don't wanna post it up there? Just curious..
Also, I just noticed that Blue's skirt flies up behind her, like almost right in front of Silver.
P.S. The Blue's skirt is just like flied or Silver peek it?
yea it mightve been the rocks breaking apart or maybe when they were about to be frozen mewtwo mustve jumped really fast and made a breeze because i dont think it can be breezy in the battle tower when theres hardly any windows u can see i think it was the stance right before they got frozen....sob so good people...saving the kanto region not once..but this time part of kanto since the Sevii islands is usually Kanto...sob sob im happy for them =]I don't know... I think it flew up because I see pieces of rock flying around them... so it may have been kinda breezy there for a second. But you people here are awesome. Even if I knew another language (which I don't. T^T) and have a good scanner and the volume, I'd be WAY too lazy.
By the way, I'm going to scan the whole volume once again in my friend's home. Scan date is 20th Octorber 2008 and in the last chapter of Volume 28, I'll post some previews pictures/images to the next volume. Well, that's only maybe, no promises. And I'll promise to release the whole volume before the next volume released ;)