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Chizzy

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    • UK
    • Seen Oct 27, 2010
    WARNING: This is PG13 as there is swearing in this comic and various other pathetic things.


    IF YOU READ THIS COMIC PLEASE POST.... THATS THE WAY TO GET MORE COMICS!

    Hi Guys... This is my new sprite Comic! *Bows*. I've had my time out of the section and due to all the recent spurlge of Generics, I went for more of a different approach with this sort of already half way through story.

    We start with our Hero Daniel Roberts, Who is a trainer who wanders around the region of Kanto with his Voltorb, Orby. Daniel and His Voltorb have a kind of Generic Adventure on thier hands, and they are returning home after Accidently Burning Down Viridian Forrest.

    All Pokemon (excluding Rockets Meowth) Think everything. I have used italics to show thought.

    The Comic
    1. Doubting
    2. Internet
    3. Walk
    4. Distraction
    5. Kentucky
    6. My House
    7. Love
    8. Run
    9. Short
    10. Cliche'd NEWEST!


    Charachters

    Daniel Roberts : He is a 15 year old boy who travels around with his Voltorb. He pokes fun at his spherical friend.
    Orby : Orby is a Voltorb who wants to be in control. He has a temper and is Poked fun at continuosly.
    Slowpoke: A Fat Pink Peice of Lard. He hates Orby and wishes he could eat him. Typical.
    James Rocket : He is a gentleman who is commonly seen trying to steal pokemon for his boss Giovanni. Recently, him and meowth have developed a taste for Slowpoke.
    Meowth Rocket : James's Sidekick. He can talk and understands Pokemon speech. Is lazy and sometimes annoying. Recently, Him and James Have developed a Taste for Slowpoke.
    Angry Mob: The Angry Mob is made up of Bug Catchers and Young Trainers. The Mob is led by Phat Gui, the local Mayor.
    Falkner: The Ex Gym Leader of Violet City in Johto. He got exported after selling bird Pokemon to KFC.
    Fat: This Guy fills Comics up with his Overall Pointlessness.
    3 Homeless Kids: They sure do Love their Pokemon... coughbbqcough!!!

    Credit
    Pokemon Elite 2000
    Serebii Forums Attackdex
    Chronis
    Myself
    You Guys who Post about this Comic
    Spriters Resource
    Online Video Game Atlas
    Coronis
    GameGuy29
    Epona4

    (If I forgot you, just let me know...)
     
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    Heh,that was funny,I'll keep my eye on this...
     
    Meh... Myself I think it would've of been better if Orby would've said 'Never Doubt Me' and thanks BosnslyLover for your comment. Next Episode is being worked on too, and if you want more epiosdes, you have to post guys!
     
    Your comic made me laugh because of what voltorb did... I like how the hero has a voltorb instead of one of the starters and the fact that you customized your hero sprite. Daniel's eyes looked funny in the 5th panel.(that's my younger brother's name, too) This comic is heading in a good direction. Keep up the super good work. I'll be back...
     
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    Gym Leader Lily... I bow down to you... I don't know anyone who has ever given me a three line long response! Thanks. The eyes were a Random thing and the Vltorb Just came to my head becasue I like them!

    Next Episode will see the Introduction of James from Team Rocket and Meowth.
     
    The comic was presented greatly.

    The joke wasn't.

    If you want to make a humorous comic, you need to have a humorous joke. That right there, wasn't even a chuckle.
     
    Im going to change the last panel ever so slightly, becasue i know (and said earlier...) the joke never came out the way I wanted it to.

    Edit: Here is the next episode... 2. Internet
     
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    hey this is pretty funny Ill definetly keep me eye on this one.
     
    Thanks Solemnity... Im also looking for a Banner so I can advertise this in my signature. Next episode is up later...
     
    Daviku said:
    The comic was presented greatly.

    The joke wasn't.

    If you want to make a humorous comic, you need to have a humorous joke. That right there, wasn't even a chuckle.
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    I thought it was good... Just because of a: the randomness of the first 1... but the second one wasn't quite so lolish...
     
    I actually Prefer the second Comic Myself. To me it seems better.

    and I have already scripted the next episode and im just doing it right now, so expect it in half an hour...

    EDIT: Here is the new episode... entitled 'Walk'
     
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    Maneachicken said:
    Thanks Solemnity... Im also looking for a Banner so I can advertise this in my signature. Next episode is up later...
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    I can make you a userbar just give me the image you want.
     
    Can you use the trainer on here and a Voltorb?

    "image removed"
     
    Thanks BonslyLover... Glad you liked it... That Walk Idea just came to me this morning...

    EDIT: New Episode

    4. Distraction
     
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    It does say in a massive text on the first post that its a PG 13.

    But I think I may be over swearing so I'll cut that out a bit. expect two episodes within the next half an hour.

    EDIT: Check the first POst for episodes 5 & 6.
     
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    This is good I like chapter 5 the best.
     
    Thanks dude. Episode 5 was just completely random and i needed an answer to why Falkner was in Kanto. Long live KFP! Keep posting people!
     
    Finaly, someone who knows how to start out good with a comic. I like how all your episodes seem organized, understandable and not too cliché. It's not something that drags on, and gets boring. It's humerous. I like it so far, keep it up Chiz.
     
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