Poke-Mon

Well this is a nice little comic. It's true that it is well put together. The jokes don't make me laugh except when they were battling Meowth. That gave me a grin, but still grammar mistakes appear and wordbubbles could be better. The main character I don't like because he looks like a re-color. Over all i'd give this a 5/10, it's average.
 
Thanks Goatman... In reply to that...

The Jokes Are meant ot be funny, but some people have different tastes in Humour...

Grammar mistakes, I know im a bit common with the ol' ............. but thats me... could you specify more?

Wordbubbles... If you would kindly send me some better ones, Id accept them with open arms!

Main Charachter... Well, Its better than nearly most comics recolours I see... With one difference... I removed his bag!

Thats how CC anda response should Be...

NEWS: The official Choose the next two charachters competition is here! I will now post the sheet you must Vote from. Littering through my collection of Trainers, I picked a select few. If you wish your trainer to stand a cance of being in the comic, PM me the charchters sheet, and I'll add it to this one. To vote, PM me with the subject Name 'Cara Comp' and with your two charchters you wish to be in the comic enclosed in the PM.

You can vote for two people. Winners will be announced on the 8th of July.

On the 14th of July, starts My Holiday for two weeks, where i shall not be able to update at all. Them weeks shall be death week. Post in this thread the charchter you wish to die during the week. The one with the most Votes when I return, Dies!
 
Ooooo.. This is getting exciting a choose a character competition thing.
 
Here is the sheet! Let the Voting Commence!

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More of their personalities will appear later on. Some of the charchters on here are known by some of you.
 
Fat Man

Solemnity said:
Cool man nice new eps cant wait for hoenn!!
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Hoenn??? I Thought They Were Going To Johto....

Anyway Nice Comic Maneachicken, Glad To See You Finally Got One Up After All Those Weeks. Its Funny And My Favorite Joke Was The One Where The Fat Man Didnt Have A House.

Keep It Up, I Hope To See More.
 
No Hoenn, I realised i would have to work my socks off to do the maps for Johto. Yeah 'Fat', as I call him, had that joke done before. The three campers (Homeless Kids) are my charachters.

NEWS: I Have just aquirred all pokemons MD sprites up to graveller.
 
Maneachicken said:
No Hoenn, I realised i would have to work my socks off to do the maps for Johto. Yeah 'Fat', as I call him, had that joke done before. The three campers (Homeless Kids) are my charachters.

NEWS: I Have just aquirred all pokemons MD sprites up to graveller.
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Lol, You Just Got Them Now?? If You Needed Them I Wouldve Gave Them To You Sooner..
 
GULPS? You already had them??? Could you PM me all the ones you have please? I'll credit you for what you have...

Plus, Expect the Finale of Chapter 1 possibly tonight. Let the voting commence (read up a bit lazy gits!)
 
Thanks... I already have the ones up to graveller, but right now, i need poocheyna and wurmple.

Will someone look at the competition and select two charachters to enter chapter 2?
 
Ah... The old member gets a vote... poor sheepnut, it really was stupid why he got banned... for all of you guys that can't remember, it was because of the April fools prank...

...and myself? thats odd! I didn't plan to get any votes... Oh well... At least if i win i can maul the charachters to death...
 
Currerntly, the scores are as follows...

1. Chiz 4
2. Sheepnut 3
3. Mace 1

GymLeaderLily, may you PM them to Me? I have a plan...

PS: Everybody, no comics tonight, but expect one tommorow...
 
Orby is really a rarity in Sprite Comics. A Personalitty of a Pokemon like Orby is quite unusual in comics, and the fact that, well...'Duh' He is a Voltorb. If you guys really want, Right now, I shall get you a new episode. As soon as I get five, yes 5 more posts on this thread (excluding My Own) you get your comic... Deal?

Oh yeah... For those that didn't realise, Episode 9 is on the first Post.
 
Its pretty obvious that Chiz and Sheepnut are gonna win this so get to making the new ep!
 
I vote for bug catcher mark and eric and lucy.
 
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