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Pokeblade: Bladers in Hoenn

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"Ah! Oh, no, it's my fault!" I said nervously. "I just got her and well...Aheh."
I looked at the beast. It fully fit Lance's description of a Rayquaza. "Is...that...a...Ray..q-quaza...?" I asked a bit scared.
 
"Yes that's me, sorry again for bumping in to you."
Rayquaza felt a strange Power comming form Raiyna's pocket. It was the same Power he felt comming from the Bladebreaker's Bitbeasts. "You're a 'Blader no? I can feel you're bitbeast's power." he said.
 
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Daniel: my name is Daniel and unless you change your tone then you can shuv your words up where the sun doesnt shine.

Daniel gave him a cold glare.

Evee sighed

Evee then decided to rest since this wouldnt end well.
 
Kai stared back, even colder than Daniel.
"Who do you think you are?" he said.

now you can say your last name (Hiwatari)
 
Daniel: I WISH I KNEW DAMMIT!

Daniel stared back at Kai just as cold but then grinned a grin similar to Tysons

Daniel: how about a pokemon match to end this?

Daniel looked at kai and thought "who is he..."
 
"Since you knocked out my only Pokémon, that's out of the optionlist.
Have you ever heard of Beyblade?" Kai groaned. He took his blue Dranzer GT Blade, his ripcord and launcher.
"What?" Ray asked.
"Let him, he is a 'blader too" Oshiba stopped him.
Ray looked from Oshiba to the two boys ahead.
 
Daniel grinned and took out his Kid dranzer beyblade rip cord.

DanieL: bring it me and dranzer will kick your butt!

Daniel grinned

Daniel: you ready?
 
"Dranzer? That is my bitbeast."
Kai launched his blade. "Go,Dranzer! BLAZING GIG ATTACK!"
Kai's blade was covered in flames. Feathers tried to hit Daniel's Blade.
Kai's attack worked. Trapped in the feathers, Daniel's Blade got hit by Kai's.
 
Daniel: GO DRANZER PHONEIX ERUPTION!

Daniel blade caught fire and broke from Kias grip and turned into a ball of fire and slammed into Kias balde

Daniel:OKAY DRANZER KEEP UP THE PACE

Daniels blade was faster than kais and spun round him.
 
"No", Kai said.
"DRANZER!" Kai's Bit Chip started to licht up and the Mighty Phoenix appeared.
Dranzer spread his magnificant wings and dove to Daniel's blade. Two Blade's clashed in a huge fire ball.

"Don't let the forest catch fire..."Oshiba said.

Kai's 'Blade clashed into a tree. Daniel's stopped spinning.
"A tie?" Ray asked.
"I can't believe it," Kai murmered. He took his blade. "Well done Dranzer".
"You're a strong Blader, Daniel," Kai said.
"Where did you learn to do that? As far as I know you've been living in the Pokémon world." Ray asked.
 
Daniel: my dranzer beyblade is the only thing I have that belongs to me and the only thing I have of my past.

Daniel pikced up Kid dranzer

Daniel: appearently my big borther ..Kai gave it too me

Daniel tuns his back on them and places the balde in his rucksack.
 
"your brother's is Kai?" Kai asked. "I know you from somewhere, but I don't know it. Maybe... No that's not possible. No it can't be. But your bitbeast is the little brother of mine. And that only happens when the 'bladers are brothers too. But I don't know my past. What is going on? Are you the key to the time before Black Dranzer?"
I'm off, see ya!
 
Daniel stared at kai wide eye

Daniel:....ow..can...well...I.......

Daniel holds out a necklace with a phonic symbol on the edn

Daniel: I do remember my brother gave me this...he said it was special and had mystical powers...do you reconize it?

Daniel looked at kai with hope.


(bye ^^)
 
"..." Kai stared at it. He couldn't believe it. He had something like that, but his phoenix was more red, Daniel's was more orange.
He took a little thing out of the pocket he kept his blade in. Kai openend his hand and showed Daniel his phoenix. The rope was broken and the phoenix looked old, but you still could reconise it. "Do you mean this?"
 
Daniel eyes went wider at this.

"Its you...but..they said you were killed..they said you were dead...." he stammered and he backed away slowly not daring to look at kai and tried to think of a reason for this concidence, but deep down he knew, he knew it was all true. Tears fell down his face as he screamed.

"YOUR A LAIR YOUR NOT HIM KAI IS DEAD!" he yelled as the tears rolled down his face and with the tears running down his face as he spun in the opposite direction and ran through the forest not looking back.
 
"Daniel wait!" Kai yelled and ran after him. Houndoom followed.
The Bladebreakers and Oshiba didn't knew what was going on.
Tyson wanted to run after Kai, but was stopped by Ray. "This is something Kai needs to solve."

The sun was setting whan Kai found Daniel. He was sitting on one of the cliffs, tears still fell down his face.
"Maybe I should tell you what happened in Russia..." Kai said. He stood after Daniel, staring at the sunset.
 
Daniel saw Kai

"is....is it really you...are you really him" he wispered tears in his eyes

He couldnt belive his so called dead brother was alive., How was it possible?

Charizard looked at Tyson

"Ray is right Tyson this is something they must do alone"
 
"It's been a while, no?" Kai asked. He sat down next to Daniel. "OK, this is what happened. Prepare for the long story of my life."

"It was a cold and snowy day, but for us,students, it was a big day. The scientists of the abby were about to test Black Dranzer. He looked just like every other Beyblade, no special things. 'Till he did for what he was designed. He cut through the blades as if they were made out of butter.
I was dazzled by his Power and Perfection. *I hate it when he says that ^_^
The entire day I only could think of Black Dranzer and at night, when everybody slept, I sneaked out of the bedroom. I wanted to use Black Dranzer. I reached the blade and launched it, but I wasn't prepaired for what would happen. Black Dranzer created a power I couldn't handle and exploded. I guess you have heard that?I fainted and when I woke up I was on an airplane to Japan. I was afraid of everything. My grandfather desided it was the best for me to leave Russia. I banned everything out of my mind, and to be honest, you too.
I grew up in Bey City and after a lot of years Tyson, Max, Ray and I became the Bladebreakers."
Kai looked to his little brother, Daniel had become very silent.

Oshiba looked at Charizard. "If Daniel is family of Kai, how did he get here?"
 
Charizard sighed

"I am not sure myself I found daniel when he was about 2. He was alone and afraid and I was a charmelon at that stage. I decided to help him and took him under my wing and raised him as if he were my own"


Daniel looked at Kai and walked to him slolwy and hugged him

"I missed you"
 
Kai hugged his brother too.
"Me too, Daniel. Me too."
Kai felt tears appearing in his eyes. It was a wierd feeling... kai had still one question:
"Ehm, Daniel? If I may ask you, can you tell why you tought I was dead?"


Oshiba tought 'I'ts alsmost the same story as my life, except I was found by Rayquaza. He tought me how the Legendary Pokemon, rule our world. And how one of them managed to look into the future and how they saw our world was in great danger. Ho-Oh found a way to cross the worlds to look for help, he found that in the Beyblade World; as the power that came from the strange creatures in the future, was the same as the Sacred Spirits in that world. Ho-Oh chose the Phoenix as the Chosen One, and the others would help him.'
"It seems like the Dark Time is beginning" Oshiba murmered.
"What?" Max asked.
"Nothing, Max, nothing"
 
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