Pokemaster in training's Fusions and Revamps!!

[pokemasterintraining]

hi I'm Pokemasterintraining (A.K.A Lalakoops)

And I'm Here to show off some of my fusion and revamp works!!

Here are Eggsamples:)!!!

Revamps

NOTE: I'll add more Later


Fusions:

From top left to Down right:

1. Lileep+ bulbasaur+ metagross
2. Scizor+Lucario
3. Roselia+Lugia+Ninetails+Gengar
4.Nosepass+Nosepass+Lucario
5. Altaria+Cacturne=... Forgot the Ghost's name...
6. Mewtwo+Pinsir
7. Teddiursa+ roselia+ Gengar
8. Sentret+Drifloon
9. Duduo + Lapras
10. Chansey+Quilava
11. Psyduck+ Poliwag

NOTE: I'll add more Later


Please Feedback These Pokemon fusion and Revamps I WILL aprecciate it!!:)
Thanks!!! ^^

 

[Conan Edogawa]

Your revamps are all pretty good. But the fusions look way to copy + paste. I suggest on the ones like Mewtwo to get rid of the dark blue line on each pinser. It makes it look like they don't belong. The Lugia one is too much of a stretch and the body looks really awkward. And on CHansey the random stripe down it's face doesn't look good. I think that if you take your time and work on making the pieces fit they'll come out better. Look for tutorials and gain some knowledge and you'll be pretty good.

 

[ShaySkymin]

Most of your revamps look as if they were recoloured. No.

Splices/Fusions: Pieces don't fit.

Also, these are saved in JPEG. Big no-no.

 

[Azumi]

^ I was warned by a mod that the rules isn't like that. So this dude's thread is still valid.

First off, you saved off as JPEG. That is a big no-no to all spriters.
Second off, some fusions look copy-pastish. That is another no-no to spriters. I think it doesn't show the talent of the spriter.
Third off, some fusions have been recoloured badly (e.g. the ChanseyxCyndaquil). Again, this doesn't show the talent of the spriter.

EDIT: I forgot to tell you. I didn't talk about the revamps because I have no experience in this area. So no crit for this.

 

[manga_meijin2]

The Mewtwo one looks pretty awesome!

 

[gummybarz]

The reason why he saved them as JPEG. is to prevent sprite theft.

 

[Aethelstan]

Your revamps are going to make me explode (don't take that offensively). It's nothing personal, I say this to everyone I see doing this on other forums as well, but REVAMPS ARE NOT RECOLORS. Often times, small parts are scratched to make it look more modern, and the lines are not recolored. You don't want solid black lines. Take a look at the 3rd generation sprites and up more closely. The lines are shaded just like the rest of the sprite. Also, add your own shading to the general body of the sprite. In case you hadn't noticed, if you do a direct recolor, since the original only had around 5 colors total anyway, there isn't much shading. As for your fusions, I think the colors are a bit weird, but that's just me. They look a little thrown together. Often times fusions are not just pieces put together, but they're re-shaded and even scratched a little to make the pieces blend better. 8, 10, and 11 look the best because they blend together well.

 

[Fox♠]

Those are hardly revamps. The shading, outline and anatomy are all a fair bit off. Try comparing them to their current sprites.

 

[Gary the Magic Fairy]

Another thing is that the forum wants 4 sprites per thread, and the rules say a sprite sheet equals 1 sprite.

Totally different sprites on the same image =/= sprite sheet. As the rules also say: "an image containing different sprite frames".

Anywhoo, as has been said: jpeg, recolors, etc.

A few of the revamps actually look they had some shading added, such as the Igglybuff. It looks like it might be almost okay. If you have another copy, save it as PNG and upload it, and I can give you some better comments.

As for the fusions.. they're very awkward. They just look.. wrong. Specifically the Electrode/Nose-thing & Shuppet. The pieces don't fit well, and.. I'm not sure what else is specifically wrong with themm they're just... I don't know. Maybe try some newer ones, using pokemon that are actually similar in size and anatomy? Also, maybe try making parts from scratch. It can help you learn, and it's much easier than making completely scratch sprites which rarely come out well on the first try.