Pokemon 1: Mewtwo vs. Mew (starring Vanyx)

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    OK, well...here it is. SI (Self Insertion), going through the movies WITHOUT Misty or Brock, since they only seem to get in the way LOL...so here's basically what my OC looks like. I didn't draw her, but one of my BFFs did as an idea for a Final Fantasy OC, so...basically it's just based off of the pic, right here, if you click on the first link in the first post. Isn't she a good drawer ^_^ except my SI doesn't have the whip, just the spear. Well, I thought it would be a neat idea so I'll stop blabbering and get to work (course I wanted to do Pokemon Heroes first, but I have to go through all the other ones first -_-)

    Pokemon 1: Mewtwo vs. Mew
    starring...Vanyx...


    Chapter 1

    "Hmm?" I asked, unaware of what my sister had said. Currently I was fooling around at the dining room table with my long spear. It was pointed in five different ways; one pointing up, two pointing diagonal, and two pointing to the side. It had intricate designs on both sides, and was supported by a long wooden pole. I brushed my short hair out of my face, and looked up. The two upraising parts of my hair swayed to the side a bit as I looked at my sister, a short kid who was only in third grade. She had even shorter hair that bushed up around her neck. It parted two ways as did mine, but my sister didn't have the two large upraises that I did. She was wearing casual clothes, a red shirt with a pink outline of a butterfly on it and light blue jeans with flowers on the top left. Her deep brown eyes searched the my face.

    "I asked whether you are going to stop playing with that spear and help me plan what Pokemon I'm getting, or if you're just going to play with it all day," she asked. I smiled, thinking of a rude comeback as I went back to fooling with my weapon. "I'm going to just sit here and play around with it," I replied, looking down. Besides, I wasn't really dressed to go into a clean lab and pick out all kinds of Pokemon to inspect. Right now I was wearing a white vest with several pockets in it, and a black long-sleeved shirt beneath it that looped down on my wrists, making it seem like my arms weren't big enough but they were. My pants were designed the same way as my vest; white with pockets all down them. I wore white sneakers, and my hair was normally straight except for the large bangs that raised above my forehead in two parts, and the hair that hung out over my neck and combed forward.

    "You're so immature!" my sister yelled, stomping away to go cross out more selections of Pokemon that she wanted. I watched her stomp through the white tiled section that branched the living room to the dining room slash kitchen where the brown wood table was, and where the counters lined the kitchen part. I got up and strode toward the sun room, where several chairs were scattered around and the glass table was set in the middle of the room. Streaks of light rushed in through the glass windows, and I walked over to one of the windows to look outside. Brown leaves were blowing across the ground in a gust, and the green trees dotted randomly across the front lawn were blowing in the breeze.

    "Vanyx! Are you going outside?" my mother asked. I turned to face where I was guessing my mom was, and yelled, "I GUESS, MOM, ONE CAN NEVER REALLY TELL WHAT I'M GOING TO DO!!" I opened the screen door and walked out into the breeze, running out to the main street. Several other houses were lined up alongside mine, and a huge meadow of grass was out past the main street, with dirt paths and such lining along the city of Pallet Town.

    "Well, since I have nothing better to do, I guess I'll just walk around..." I mumbled, putting my hands behind my back and holding the spear sideways behind my back. The pole faced the left side, and the spear faced right. I looked up to the sky, which was...starting to cloud over. Odd, I thought, it shouldn't be changing like this when it was just perfectly sunny.

    Not looking ahead of me, I slammed into something. The impact sent me crashing down into the dirt road, and I shook my head to clear out the dust, then opened my eyes. I immediately grabbed my spear, and went into a defensive maneuver, with the spear almost jabbing through the thing that had hit me. The dust cleared on his side and I inspected him. He had short black hair, which seemed to spike out in all directions, and wore a blue jeans jacket with a white T-shirt underneath of it. He had jeans and sneakers as well, and blue eyes.

    He held his hands up defensively. "Sorry, I didn't see you there. I was just rushing to get my first Pokemon," he said, sounding scared peeless.

    I took my spear away and held it behind my back once more, poking out each side of my body. "Isn't that the story everyone's saying," I muttered. "My sister's getting one and now so are you. Well, bye."

    "Wait!" the kid called. "I don't even know your name yet."

    "I'm Vanyx. Who are you?" I asked, walking back to the kid.

    "My name is Ashton Ketchum, but everyone calls me Ash. I'm ten years old, and I want a Bulbasaur for my starter Pokemon. Do you wanna come with me? I'm...lonely by myself," Ash shuddered to make this visible. I rolled my eyes.

    "I suppose," I answered. "But only if you don't ever do that again."

    Ash nodded. "Won't happen again. Now hurry, or we'll never reach the lab!"

    We both started running like maniacs towards the large white building in front of us. It was dome-shaped, and a windmill rotated in the front. "You know I don't really want a Pokemon, right?" I asked.

    Ash stopped in his tracks. "I...think I'm feeling faint..." and he dropped into the dust, half-expecting me to catch him but of course I didn't. I just half-hovered over him, staring at him like he was a demented idiot. Which he was.

    A couple minutes later, he stood up and took me by the shoulders. "How can you not want a Pokemon? They're like the best things in the world! Like your own personal bodyguard!"

    "I don't need a bodyguard, I have this," I said, holding up my spear.

    "Oh yeah," he replied.

    "So I don't need one."

    "Aw, come on! We can get Pokemon together and then we can train them together and it'll be fun!" he pleaded.

    "Stop saying 'together' like you're my boyfriend or something," I said, looking to the lab. "Hey, some kid with tons of girls is at the lab now. He looks egocentric."

    Ash stopped shaking my shoulders and looked, putting one hand to his eyes so he could see better. "That's Gary!" he yelled, running up to the lab as fast as he could. I shrugged and followed him, running as fast as I possibly could, which was at least faster than Ash.

    Soon enough, Ash came up behind me. He walked up to Gary. "What are you doing here, big shot?" he asked, face in a furious expression.

    "I came to get my Pokemon just like you, Ashy-boy," Gary said. He had bushy red hair, and a long blue T-shirt, as well as deep blue pants and yellow boots. He smiled and closed his eyes in pleasure. "And here it is." He held out a red and white sphere, which I interpreted as a PokeBall.

    "What is it?" I asked, curious. I didn't know too much about Pokemon, so I wanted to see what kind it was.

    Gary tossed the Pokeball, and in a blinding white light came out a blue turtle. It stood upright, and had a brown shell on its back. Its tail curled around like a chameleon's, and its big blue eyes searched around for its new trainer. It spotted me, and jumped up to get in my arms. I backed away from it, and Gary grabbed it.

    "It thinks your its trainer. Let's not let it think that it could be the Pokemon of such a foolish newbie," Gary said, holding the Pokemon away from me. My face grew red, and I held up a fist.

    "You wanna bet?!" I asked, but Gary had already started on his little journey.

    "Gee, you don't know much about Pokemon, do you?" Ash asked me.

    "Of course not, I know this spear better than any Pokemon," I replied.

    "OK...so let's go get my Pokemon! Oh, and yours, if you want one," Ash said, and we walked towards the lab.


    ~~~~

    How do you guys think? I wasn't sure of a name, so I just picked Vanyx. Review please! Yeah, it sounds like it's just the first episode, but it's not. I mean, he gets a Pokemon and all but it's not just the first episode, it's the movie.
     
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    This has already been done. See Pokemon: The first movie.
     
    I couldn't find anything called that, besides it is my original idea, so I don't really think I'd have to stop writing this if there was one. I'm sure there's already been a fanfic about the fall of Arcanine, but mine still got Fanfiction of the Month (January). So...yeah. I'll be making chapter 2 today...hopefully.
     
    Ratiosu said:
    I couldn't find anything called that, besides it is my original idea, so I don't really think I'd have to stop writing this if there was one. I'm sure there's already been a fanfic about the fall of Arcanine, but mine still got Fanfiction of the Month (January). So...yeah. I'll be making chapter 2 today...hopefully.

    It's the main plotline of the first official Pokemon movie, stupid.
     
    Hey...that wasn't nice. Of course it's the first movie, just with many twists and me SI'd in it *reports -BetterThanYou-*
     
    I'm sorry :( I'm just insecure about my rubix cubing. :'(
     
    -_- And how does Rubix Cubing tie into calling me stupid and saying I copied off of something? I had to report you, and I don't like to do that...you coulda just said that you thought maybe it was a ripoff or something, but you had to yell at me T-T and I got Fanfic of the Month (YAYNESS!!)...
     
    Ratiosu said:
    -_- And how does Rubix Cubing tie into calling me stupid and saying I copied off of something? I had to report you, and I don't like to do that...you coulda just said that you thought maybe it was a ripoff or something, but you had to yell at me T-T and I got Fanfic of the Month (YAYNESS!!)...

    I didn't yell, silly ^_^ And because I can't rubix cube well so I take out my frustration on innocent bystanders :(

    But it is a ripoff
     
    First of all, if you need to take your anger out on someone, take it out on your sibs =P or one of those little squishy balls. Or go to your room and punch a hole through the wall ^_^ I should know how to calm it cause I have asperger (a mental disease that makes you react much differently from other people, not knowing when to tell someone you've got a problem with a bully, etc. and you get angry quicker than most people. You also love the computer more than people, and have a hard time socializing yet you get into big groups on the computer). Anyway, it's not a ripoff, because I know it's the movie and all but it's got a whole bunch of twists. Click on the link in my first post, and read the story. That's what YOU consider a "ripoff" of Pokemon Heroes. Basically, Sumnor and I both SelfInserted ourselves into movies. Except I'll be going through all movies and Sumnor will not.
     
    Ratiosu said:
    First of all, if you need to take your anger out on someone, take it out on your sibs =P or one of those little squishy balls. Or go to your room and punch a hole through the wall ^_^ I should know how to calm it cause I have asperger (a mental disease that makes you react much differently from other people, not knowing when to tell someone you've got a problem with a bully, etc. and you get angry quicker than most people. You also love the computer more than people, and have a hard time socializing yet you get into big groups on the computer). Anyway, it's not a ripoff, because I know it's the movie and all but it's got a whole bunch of twists. Click on the link in my first post, and read the story. That's what YOU consider a "ripoff" of Pokemon Heroes. Basically, Sumnor and I both SelfInserted ourselves into movies. Except I'll be going through all movies and Sumnor will not.

    Oh, please don't get me stared on asperger's syndrome. Couldn't you write more like that other one you did about Arcanine? THAT was good.
     
    Because it was a one-shot. It was full of feeling and in-depth stuff. Stories with chapters are hard to put a lot of feeling into. I'm really trying to make this good, if you hate it so much list why, don't just tell me it was a ripoff and could be more like Darkness In My Heart.
     
    Unbelievable <<;
    (Not you Ratiosu)

    Great description and interesting that Mew and Mewtwo have been included in the start of Ash's journey. Liked how other chararcters were added. It was interesting all together ^^
     
    Thank you, SOA. ^_^ Yeah, that kid's being annoyin'. (Just look at his username). Anyway, the next chapter will be up shortly, as I'm busy making my forum, my site, etc.
     
    *cannot wait for next part.*

    Its funny and greatly perfect in all of my eyeball spaces.
     
    Thank you ^_^ as soon as I come up with what Vanyx is going to do with Ash in the next chapter I'll post it ^_^ *gets out her flamethrower marked Jimmy* DIE! DIE, ASH! Nah, I actually kinda like him. But sometimes he just gets on my nerves with his ignorance to use EFFECTIVE moves on his opponents.
     
    Lol *grabs flamethrower marked BillyBobJoe* I can help you with the killing. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH :bandit:
     
    *grabs secondary flamethrower named Billie Joe Armstrong* FEEL THE POWER OF GREEN DAY, ASH!!I did this next chapter on MS Word, so it's a bit longer.

    Chapter 2

    Ash ran like a maniac towards the lab door, and when he opened it he started waving his arms around like an idiot, going up to each aide and asking them when he would get his Pokemon. I rolled my eyes. ?You?re just so immature; do I really have to baby-sit you?? I asked, but he was too busy asking all the aides where his Pokemon was. I walked in as well, and saw that the lab was?very white. All the floor, wall, and ceiling tiles were sparkling white, and lots of big lab equipment was spread around. Several aides were working at machines, and Ash interrupted their work by waving his arms around and bumping into most of them. They turned around angrily, each one having a long white lab coat.

    ?Ash, you idiot! Stop it before we get kicked out. Then we won?t have ANY Pokemon,? I said. He immediately stopped, and walked calmly up to a small circular table with two red and white PokeBalls. I ran my fingers over the one with the small red flame mark. ?This one?? I muttered. ??looks good.?

    Ash came up next to me, and picked out a PokeBall with a small leaf indent on it. ?I want this one,? he said, and an older man came up to us. He had sandy brown hair, which kinda spiked up a little, and a long white lab coat. He looked at us happily.

    ?So, Ash, you weren?t late after all,? he said. ?Good, I saved two PokeBalls for you. I like to see people who are right on time.?

    ?It?s only because Vanyx helped me,? he said, gesturing to me. ?If she hadn?t have gotten rid of Gary and reminded me that I was going to get a Pokemon today I wouldn?t be here. Stupid Voltorb alarm clock?? he muttered.

    ?Well, now you guys get to pick your first Pokemon,? he said. ?Vanyx, I?ll have to register you as a new trainer, but otherwise pick your Pokemon.?

    I nodded, and lifted up the PokeBall with the flame imprint. Ash took the leaf-printed one, and we both clicked the small circle in the center. In two white flashes of light, the Pokemon came out and smiled at us. Ash?s looked like a kind of small toad or dinosaur. It had green skin and a huge bulb on its back, and dark green spots dotted its body. Its large blue eyes looked up at Ash happily.

    Mine was a small orange lizard. It stood on two legs, and had a soft yellow stomach. It had a long red tail with a small flame burning on it, and looked up at me happily too. ?Charmander!? it yelled, and jumped up at me. I caught it in my arms, dropping my spear, and laughed as it rubbed against my face, making a noise that sounded a lot like purring.

    Ash opened a small red computer, and it said, ?Bulbasaur, the Seed Pokemon, this Pokemon can be seen napping in bright sunlight. There is a seed on its back. By soaking up the sun?s rays, the seed grows progressively larger.?

    He turned it to my Pokemon. ?Charmander, the Lizard Pokemon, the flame that burns at the tip of its tail is an indication of its emotions. The flame wavers when Charmander is enjoying itself. If the Pokemon is enraged, the flame burns fiercely.?

    ?Wow, Charmander?s really cool!? I said happily. ?Maybe I do want a Pokemon after all.?

    Charmander squealed with glee, obviously overjoyed to have a trainer. ?Charmander!? it screeched, and I hugged it.

    ?You two better get going if you?re going to defeat the first gym leader,? Professor Oak (as his name tag indicated) said. ?He?s up in Pewter City.?

    ?OK, we?ll go,? I said, talking for Ash who seemed to be too overjoyed at getting a Pokemon. ?Ash, are you coming or do I have to put you in a high chair and walk that around??

    ?I?m coming!? Ash called. ?Bulbasaur, come on.?

    We toddled out of the lab with Charmander at my side and Bulbasaur right alongside Charmander. I had my spear behind me again, and looked left and right when we came to the road. ?Which way?? I asked. Ash took out the red computer again, and pointed it to the left and then to the right.

    ?Darn, it?s not a map!? he yelled, pounding his fist into it. Whatever effect it was supposed to have was ruined by Ash waving his hand around in pain. ?Darn, it?s not a pillow either!?

    I raised my hands upward. ?Why me, Lord? Why me??

    Charmander mimicked me completely, and I laughed. ?Charmander, you?re so cute. Anyway, let?s get to the next town before I turn sixty!? I started running down the path on the left, and Ash followed me, though he gave up about halfway and then started running again.

    The clouds started turning gray, and rain shot down from them. I sighed. ?Great. It?s raining, and I didn?t bring a coat or whatever. Ah well, this should keep me warm,? I said, meaning my outfit of course. Ash was looking upward. ?What are you staring at, moron?? I asked.

    Ash didn?t respond. I looked up as well, and saw the faintest trace of a blue tail and sparkles surrounding it. Then it disappeared behind the clouds. At the same time, I heard in my head, <Come?he is growing stronger and I have no power?I need you to help fight him?>

    ?Did?did you hear that?? I asked Ash.

    ?No, I just saw something behind that cloud.?

    I nodded. ?OK. Never mind then, let?s get going.?

    20 Minutes Later

    I fell onto the ground, exhausted. Putting my head back on the grass that surrounded us, I put my hands towards the sky. ?Please?please?get me away from here and to somewhere civilized,? I moaned. Ash was laying on the grass besides me, and Charmander was holding the flaming part of his tail in his hands, trying to keep it from going out. Bulbasaur was just doing random things.

    ?Vanyx, do you think we?ll EVER reach the next town?? Ash asked.

    ?I don?t know, moron. This way we?ll never reach it.?

    ?I don?t want to get up, Vanyx. I?m exhausted.?

    I nodded my agreement. ?Yeah, I know.?

    A sudden crashing interrupted our complaining, and I jerked upright. ?Wow, maybe I?m not that exhausted after all,? I said. I stood up and looked around. In front of me was a huge yellow and orange dragon! It had two small bat-like wings, and a long orange tail that swung out behind it. On its round head were two small yellow antennae, and its stomach was a shade of tan.

    ?Dragonite, the Dragon Pokemon, Dragonite is capable of circling the globe in just sixteen hours. It is a kindhearted Pokemon that leads lost and foundering ships in a storm to the safety of land,? came the reply from Ash?s Pokedex, as he called it.

    ?Wow, a Dragonite! Never thought I?d see one of those up close,? Ash said. The Dragonite reached into a black bag slung across its shoulder and took out a small black box and an envelope. It waited patiently as Ash pressed the green button on the box. A hologram of a woman appeared, and she started talking. She had a circular brown hat, and a long brown cloak, so we couldn?t see much of her.

    ?Hello trainers, I am here to ask if you would like to accept an invitation to a tournament on New Island. If interested, please check Yes on the invitation and give it back to Dragonite. I sincerely hope that you will make it safely. Goodbye.? The hologram shut down and I picked up the envelope, which held a Yes/No questionnaire.

    ?Ash, do you think we should go? We just recently became Pokemon trainers,? I asked.

    ?Well, the tournament is probably pretty easy, and Bulbasaur and I can win anything!? he yelled.

    ?Gee, egocentric today, aren?t we?? I asked, and Ash nodded.

    I turned to Dragonite. ?The answer is yes, Dragonite.? He reached into the pouch and pulled out a pen, then gave it to me. I checked off Yes, and gave everything back to him. ?Thanks! We?ll see you at the tournament!?

    Dragonite nodded, and flapped his wings, lifting off.

    ?Well?we better get to this New Island. Let?s get to the next town?s Pokemon Center,? I said, and we started off.

    ~*~
    Well, Vanyx and Ash are in quite a predicament?they just got their Pokemon and now they have to compete in the so-called ?tournament? on New Island. Geez Louise, how will they ever make it? Tune in next chapter!
     
    I feel like laughing out loud. Although things got REAL sped up.
     
    ^_^ Shadow of Ash, thankies!

    ThatReallyLongNameThatICan'tRead--Yes, things got real sped up but that's the only way I can make it to New Island before chapter 50 or so LOL...there's gonna be lots of plot twists and stuff. I'm writing chapter 3 now, and WHEE! I'm getting interviewed by Timid Kyogre at SPPf for my "amazing" fanfictions.
     
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