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Nytkoi

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    Well, the speech bubbles had a lot of extra room which took up space on the comic. Also, they weren't in any order. They were just kind of slapped on wherever there was empty space. Other than that, there were no severe issues.
     
    I like that idea- and other than the speech bubbles, this is great so far c:
     
    Your grammar is terrible, add some order to the Speech Bubbles.
     
    O... M... G...

    The text bubbles are destorying your comic dude ><
    I suggest you fix it (Like everyone else said)
    and put in more panels of comic. but pt the panels vertically, not horizontally.
     
    Achamo-chan said:
    O... M... G...

    The text bubbles are destorying your comic dude ><
    I suggest you fix it (Like everyone else said)
    and put in more panels of comic. but pt the panels vertically, not horizontally.
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    ^I have to agree with Achamo^
     
    Too short
    Bubbles take up space
    Doesn't really have a genre
    I'm not saying it zucks, i'm just saying improvement nesscesary, I'd be a B in begginers, i was that bad before anyway :P
     
    The bubbles do take up quite a lot of space, and i don't know if it was the way i read it, but the second one didnt really make much sense.
     
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