Umbreongirl
As riddled as the tide
- 388
- Posts
- 17
- Years
- Age 33
- At the party of pants.
- Seen Apr 23, 2012
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Ren, your application shows alot of potential. It was pretty much decent in most ways, and more than enough to land you a spot as a re-occuring character. Seeing as our two other re-occuring characters didn't show alot of interest in this thread after their applications on the OOC, and I haven't heard from them since, i'm assuming they're not planning on coming back. x_x; So in order to keep this RP alive, i'm accepting Ren as well. Everything was good, just please add all the Pokemon in your Final party (Unless you haven't decided yet!), and go back and look carefully at all of your grammatical errors. I noticed a few, nothing major, but they make your sign-up appear very rushed. Also, if maybe you could add just a bit more to personality, so I can get a better idea of your character, that would be great. Do all that, and i'll be happy to accept you as a re-occuring character. Oh, another thing. Like Charizard first told me, and this is how he would've wanted it, re-occuring characters do not post of their own accord. How it works is that the main characters have a specific order to post in, in our case, it's Charizard, GP, then me I think. I will tell the re-occuring characters when to post, as they won't require as much posting as the original three. So that said, it's oaky that you already posted Samurai, but Ren, please wait for a bit until you do. We'll be going to Pewter city next, so when you do post, your first run-in with Adelina, Tai, and Rin will be there. Think of Tai, Adelina, and Rin like Ash, Brock, and Misty. Re-occuring characters in this RP like Gary or Richie, appearing over and over again. So i'm late for class! I'll check this when I get home! ><; Adioss! <3UG
Ren, your application shows alot of potential. It was pretty much decent in most ways, and more than enough to land you a spot as a re-occuring character. Seeing as our two other re-occuring characters didn't show alot of interest in this thread after their applications on the OOC, and I haven't heard from them since, i'm assuming they're not planning on coming back. x_x; So in order to keep this RP alive, i'm accepting Ren as well. Everything was good, just please add all the Pokemon in your Final party (Unless you haven't decided yet!), and go back and look carefully at all of your grammatical errors. I noticed a few, nothing major, but they make your sign-up appear very rushed. Also, if maybe you could add just a bit more to personality, so I can get a better idea of your character, that would be great. Do all that, and i'll be happy to accept you as a re-occuring character. Oh, another thing. Like Charizard first told me, and this is how he would've wanted it, re-occuring characters do not post of their own accord. How it works is that the main characters have a specific order to post in, in our case, it's Charizard, GP, then me I think. I will tell the re-occuring characters when to post, as they won't require as much posting as the original three. So that said, it's oaky that you already posted Samurai, but Ren, please wait for a bit until you do. We'll be going to Pewter city next, so when you do post, your first run-in with Adelina, Tai, and Rin will be there. Think of Tai, Adelina, and Rin like Ash, Brock, and Misty. Re-occuring characters in this RP like Gary or Richie, appearing over and over again. So i'm late for class! I'll check this when I get home! ><; Adioss! <3UG