Pokemon:Allian

[Roy-Kun]

Yup, very nice Bios, nice explanation ^^

 

[Esupio]

Yeah, I wrote my own and signomi wrote hers and Vaati wrote his. because who better to write their own bio's. the new comic is going well :P

 

[jc_rcw]

Yeah its really coming along Blazin espio.

 

[Esupio]

I'M REALLY SORRY.

I've been really busy and haven't had time to finish the next comic. ??

 

[jc_rcw]

Its ok I guess, but I really want to see more of this comic.

 

[Roy-Kun]

When you do it, try to make something that can difference pannel per pannel, the first one was a bit in disorder ^^;

 

[Esupio]

ZOMG updated....

commentz. Its teh start of matt and Arc's rivallry *dramatic music begins*

 

[Signomi]

Dude, what I said to Matt at the end totally contradicts my bio.

>.>

 

[Esupio]

he told you that didn't he ??;

and I have that done on purpose... its followed up in the 4th issue cause the next is different

 

[Signomi]

No. I told him that.

It's rather obvious though, don't you think? >.>

Alright. It's all up to you, Blazey boi.

 

[Esupio]

suppose so. Don't call me that... you never say my old name did you anyway.

The next comic onle requires one more frame. It introduces TEAM NINJA. and guess who its lead by... no its not koga :P

edit: Its the first appearance of team ninja and a robot :P
check first post... AND ITS ANIMATED not much though

 

[Roy-Kun]

Err... alright the backsprites are ok, but the bad thing is... well... i told you to have order right? And that means: Separate the pannels and guess what? You didn't! Man -_-

 

[Esupio]

I don't do seperate pannels. it goes

1=Top left
2=Top Right
3=middle left
4=middle right
5=Bottom Left
6=Bottom right

or take out the 3 and 4 and make 5 and 6 bottom left or bottom right. ??;

also you never said anything about seperate pannels you said order. DID YOU SEE THE BLACK LINE

 

[Roy-Kun]

I know hwo's the sequence >_> but bot makng separated pannels makes the comic looks bad.

Sorry for saying this but... it needs more work

 

[Esupio]

I know it needs more work... its barly started ??;

 

[Goatman56]

I know hwo's the sequence >_> but bot makng separated pannels makes the comic looks bad.

Sorry for saying this but... it needs more work

Why are you apoligizing? You didn't do anything wrong. I agree with you. All that really needs to be done is make the lines easier to see, and make the word bubbles a bit better. Rememer square bubbles are alot easier.

 

[Esupio]

Thanks for the tips Goatman.

Don't expect the next issue for a while cause I'm working on my personal sheet.