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Chapter 9 Charmander
Callum got out his Pokedex and pointed it at the orange Pokemon
"Charmander, the baby lizard Pokemon. Charmanders are very rare and hard to find. If the fire goes out on it's tail it would die" chanted the Pokedex.
The baby Charmander began to cry. Lucian threw a bottle of warm milk in a beaker to Callum. He caught it and put it near the baby's mouth. The baby Charmander moved it's mouth towards the beaker and it drank the warm milk.
Three minutes later the baby had finished his milk. The door opened and Sammie walked in.
"I heard you were back so I…" said Sammie noticing the baby. "Aw, when was it born?" asked Sammie.
"Four minutes ago" answered Lucian. The baby began to cry.
"There, there you can have some more milk tomorrow" reassured Callum while patting Charmander on the back.
"I'll just go and tell Mum the news" said Sammie happily.
"So will I" Said Lucian calmly. "I'll be back in a minute."
Five minutes they still hadn't come back so Callum wandered out of his room, leaving Charmander on his own…
He walked past an open door. A boy who was about nine was in a large bed. He had a Squirtle and a Poliwhirl standing next to his bed. Then he heard someone's voice. It was Hope's voice. She was sitting in a sofa in the boy's room along with another little boy.
"You'll get better soon. You have already had it out now soon you can go back to school and see your best friend, Alex" said Hope kindly. Fred groaned.
"But I don't want to go back to school, please let me stay here a bit longer" pleaded Fred. They all looked up and saw Callum.
"Hey I now you, you're Charlie's mate, Callum. Am I right?" asked Hope.
"Yes, but please could you tell me who are they?" enquired Callum pointing a finger at the two boys.
"My brothers" answered Hope. "The one in the bed is Fred. He's just had his appendix taken out" explained Hope, pointing at the older boy in the hospital bed. "The other one is Wilf" said Hope pointing at the young boy sitting next to her.
Sammie walked past the open door and saw Callum.
"Where's the baby?" asked Sammie.
"In my room" said Callum calmly as he walked out of Fred's room and into his.
He looked around. Charmander wasn't there. Sammie glared at Callum.
"You left the baby alone? Boys" sighed Sammie.
Callum, Sammie and Lucian looked for Charmander all afternoon and evening. It was now dark and Callum still hadn't found Charmander. Then it hit him. He had left the window open. Baby Charmander was probably outside cold and scared. Callum had to find him.
He ran down the corridor and got his fully-healed pokemon of the nurse and ran out of the rotating doors. It was now 10 'O' Clock and it was looking grim for Charmander. Then Callum looked at the ground. There was a small path that a small fire Pokemon had created. Callum followed the small path until he came to a small barbed-wired fence. It was fifty centimetres high and had a small, burnt hole at the bottom of it. Callum stared at it. He might as well go through it.
He ran at the barb wire. It met his legs, tearing at his flesh. He was half way through the barb wire. He carried on running, ignoring the unbearable pain on his legs. Finally he had got through the barb wire.
He looked at his trousers or what was left of them. He had thousands of little cuts on his leg, but still he carried on down the small path.
After a few minutes of walking in the dense forest he saw a Squirtle run past. He had seen the Squirtle before, but where? Then he remembered it was Fred's Squirtle.
Then he heard a rustle in the bushes he turned around and saw five Pokemon come out of the bushes. Slowly, they walked past Callum. There was something wrong with their eyes. They were hypnotised.
They disappeared through some more bushes. Callum followed them until they came to a river. The Pokemon glowed and they were lifted into the air. They drifted over the river and landed on the other side. The Pokemon disappeared behind some tall grass.
Callum looked at the ten metre wide river and jumped in. Immediately he was swept away in the strong current. He frantically waved his arms about in the water. He managed to get his foot tangled in some weeds. He felt his belt and the Pokeballs being ripped from him.
Callum watched helplessly as him Pokemon quickly were swept away in the current. He dived under the water and ripped the strong weed out of the river bed. He was quickly swept away. This time he was swimming with the current. He looked around for his belt.
His stomach churned. He had remembered. This was Treter River and at the end was the biggest waterfall in Sinnoh. He was just about a mile from the waterfall. Then he saw his belt. It was about ten metres in front of him. He swam as fast as he could with the current.
Callum gasped, he could now see the waterfall. It was only twenty-five metres away. He reached out his arms and snatched the belt from the cold, icy river. There was a vine that was drifting in the river. Callum stretched out his fingers and grabbed it.
The vine began to stretch. His stomach hit a rock and he was dragged underwater. He was choking but he was still holding onto the vine with all of his might. He was only a metre away now. Then he saw it.
The black creature he had seen at Charlie's house and in the sky was staring at him. Then he fell of the river and in to the waterfall. He was falling, falling into darkness. Then the vine stopped stretching. He was halfway down the waterfall hanging by a vine. The vine was beginning to stretch even more. The vine snapped and he began his 500m descent to earth.
Chapter 9 Charmander
Callum got out his Pokedex and pointed it at the orange Pokemon
"Charmander, the baby lizard Pokemon. Charmanders are very rare and hard to find. If the fire goes out on it's tail it would die" chanted the Pokedex.
The baby Charmander began to cry. Lucian threw a bottle of warm milk in a beaker to Callum. He caught it and put it near the baby's mouth. The baby Charmander moved it's mouth towards the beaker and it drank the warm milk.
Three minutes later the baby had finished his milk. The door opened and Sammie walked in.
"I heard you were back so I…" said Sammie noticing the baby. "Aw, when was it born?" asked Sammie.
"Four minutes ago" answered Lucian. The baby began to cry.
"There, there you can have some more milk tomorrow" reassured Callum while patting Charmander on the back.
"I'll just go and tell Mum the news" said Sammie happily.
"So will I" Said Lucian calmly. "I'll be back in a minute."
Five minutes they still hadn't come back so Callum wandered out of his room, leaving Charmander on his own…
He walked past an open door. A boy who was about nine was in a large bed. He had a Squirtle and a Poliwhirl standing next to his bed. Then he heard someone's voice. It was Hope's voice. She was sitting in a sofa in the boy's room along with another little boy.
"You'll get better soon. You have already had it out now soon you can go back to school and see your best friend, Alex" said Hope kindly. Fred groaned.
"But I don't want to go back to school, please let me stay here a bit longer" pleaded Fred. They all looked up and saw Callum.
"Hey I now you, you're Charlie's mate, Callum. Am I right?" asked Hope.
"Yes, but please could you tell me who are they?" enquired Callum pointing a finger at the two boys.
"My brothers" answered Hope. "The one in the bed is Fred. He's just had his appendix taken out" explained Hope, pointing at the older boy in the hospital bed. "The other one is Wilf" said Hope pointing at the young boy sitting next to her.
Sammie walked past the open door and saw Callum.
"Where's the baby?" asked Sammie.
"In my room" said Callum calmly as he walked out of Fred's room and into his.
He looked around. Charmander wasn't there. Sammie glared at Callum.
"You left the baby alone? Boys" sighed Sammie.
Callum, Sammie and Lucian looked for Charmander all afternoon and evening. It was now dark and Callum still hadn't found Charmander. Then it hit him. He had left the window open. Baby Charmander was probably outside cold and scared. Callum had to find him.
He ran down the corridor and got his fully-healed pokemon of the nurse and ran out of the rotating doors. It was now 10 'O' Clock and it was looking grim for Charmander. Then Callum looked at the ground. There was a small path that a small fire Pokemon had created. Callum followed the small path until he came to a small barbed-wired fence. It was fifty centimetres high and had a small, burnt hole at the bottom of it. Callum stared at it. He might as well go through it.
He ran at the barb wire. It met his legs, tearing at his flesh. He was half way through the barb wire. He carried on running, ignoring the unbearable pain on his legs. Finally he had got through the barb wire.
He looked at his trousers or what was left of them. He had thousands of little cuts on his leg, but still he carried on down the small path.
After a few minutes of walking in the dense forest he saw a Squirtle run past. He had seen the Squirtle before, but where? Then he remembered it was Fred's Squirtle.
Then he heard a rustle in the bushes he turned around and saw five Pokemon come out of the bushes. Slowly, they walked past Callum. There was something wrong with their eyes. They were hypnotised.
They disappeared through some more bushes. Callum followed them until they came to a river. The Pokemon glowed and they were lifted into the air. They drifted over the river and landed on the other side. The Pokemon disappeared behind some tall grass.
Callum looked at the ten metre wide river and jumped in. Immediately he was swept away in the strong current. He frantically waved his arms about in the water. He managed to get his foot tangled in some weeds. He felt his belt and the Pokeballs being ripped from him.
Callum watched helplessly as him Pokemon quickly were swept away in the current. He dived under the water and ripped the strong weed out of the river bed. He was quickly swept away. This time he was swimming with the current. He looked around for his belt.
His stomach churned. He had remembered. This was Treter River and at the end was the biggest waterfall in Sinnoh. He was just about a mile from the waterfall. Then he saw his belt. It was about ten metres in front of him. He swam as fast as he could with the current.
Callum gasped, he could now see the waterfall. It was only twenty-five metres away. He reached out his arms and snatched the belt from the cold, icy river. There was a vine that was drifting in the river. Callum stretched out his fingers and grabbed it.
The vine began to stretch. His stomach hit a rock and he was dragged underwater. He was choking but he was still holding onto the vine with all of his might. He was only a metre away now. Then he saw it.
The black creature he had seen at Charlie's house and in the sky was staring at him. Then he fell of the river and in to the waterfall. He was falling, falling into darkness. Then the vine stopped stretching. He was halfway down the waterfall hanging by a vine. The vine was beginning to stretch even more. The vine snapped and he began his 500m descent to earth.