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    This is a new game idea I came up with.

    Ok here's the story-

    It takes place in a new place called Panga. Green (or whatever name you come up with) has an older brother who has beat all the gym leaders in Panga. Green decides to do the same thinking he could alot better. Green's Brother (name you come up with) will be giving you advice along your journey because he thinks your not smart and strong enough to challenge all these gyms. You travel throughout the whole region collecting all 8 badges. Along the way you will encounter Team Quaz. The team is more challenging and won't be as easy as other teams before( Team Rocket,Aqua, Magma etc). Mew will be the main Pokemon in this game. Since Mew happens to be in Panga because it is chasing after a certain person, your brother Mew sees something in your brother that others don't. Team Quaz is after Mew for power to take over Panga easier. You have to race them to Mew. There will be a chance of losing as well and having to retrieve mew form the Quaz base. Then you go to the 8th gym and continue on. You later will find your brother angry with your Mom and claims he will never speak to her again. He shoves you aside. You then have to chase him down to see whats wrong and end up battling him.
     
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    wait...you dont have a story, you dont have heroes planned, you dont even have an actual idea here. all youve given us is a title and a vague map with random buildings and people...oh, and a snorlax. youre gonna need much more than this if you want people to help you and be on your team...
     
    brokenxnote said:
    wait...you dont have a story, you dont have heroes planned, you dont even have an actual idea here. all youve given us is a title and a vague map with random buildings and people...oh, and a snorlax. youre gonna need much more than this if you want people to help you and be on your team...
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    Not to mention putting it in the right section =P
     
    That is not a story... -_-

    That map is so weird... It doesn't even look real, way too empty. Those tiles are poorly recolored.
     
    mr. ck said:
    That is not a story... -_-

    That map is so weird... It doesn't even look real, way too empty. Those tiles are poorly recolored.
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    amen and hallelujah dude.

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    -i repeat about the map: snorlax...in front of building...for what? just to look pretty? i cant comment further on other parts of the map cuz it seems too have been deleted and it was to big and empty to remember what was even on it besides people, unexplained buildings and grass
    -new thumbnail: poorly recolored. those colors are too bright and it looks jpeg'd to me
    -that story STILL isnt a story. now its just a less specific version of the other storys that have been used by nintendo. oh and a straight up plug of the hoenn story apparently, according to the update. "get 8 badges, defeat evil team, get legendary before evil team, beat elite 4, do story for another region" isnt a story. its a list of goals in the story [a very dry list at that...]. the story is what MAKES these things interesting. WHY does the evil team want mew? WHY does the hero start his journey? protip: saying he wants to be a pokemon master isnt gonna fly buddy. WHY is mew even IN your region? you recycled the usual story, yet removed the usual details included so that it now lacks the backbone to make any sense. the story DEFINITELY needs work. try giving reasons for actions in the game, not actions for the sake of something to have in the game.
    -"i dont want to say much about hoenn"? well thats good cuz i dont want to read much about it if its just gonna be the same story we've already gone through three times with ruby, sapphire, and emerald.

    fix this please
     
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