Pokemon: Birth of Darkness

[adwajr]

Welcome to
Pokemon: Birth of Darkness
Read the comics, look at the bio's (NOTE: to be created) but most of all:
HAVE F.U.N.

The Comics
Introduction: From the Past NEW
Chapter 1: So it Begins...
Issue 1: The Newbies NEW

The Characters
(In the making)

The Fans
The Fan area!
All people who enjoy my comics just reply and join in the talk.

The Makers
Comic maker and the person who put this together: adwajr
Helpers:
TinyPic for hosting my comics.
Pokemon Elite 2000 for some sprites.
The Spriters Resource for more sprites.
The viewers; all my guests; and you for looking at my art!

Have a nice day and don't forget to post!

 

[Blackandy]

Interesting comic. If this is you first comic then you did alot better than some other 1st comics. But try to use speech bubbles apart from that it's coming along great:)

 

[Houndoom1]

Pretty interesting comic. Keep it up I want to see what happens next.

 

[Scarlet Weather]

This is just... insanely funny. I enjoyed the random "Mario Playing Kid" thing in issue one. That was just funny. Well, anyway, keep up the good work.

On the ACC web-comic rating scale: -Ttebayo out of Dattebayo. (Equivalent to eight out of ten.) I'd make improvement suggestions, but I'm a writer, not a comics designer.

Ciao!

 

[dakelland12]

i like it but try harder .

 

[[NovaPirate]]

Well, it isn't too funny in my opinion. The boy was too random and too annoying, try to male sure jokes are funny and somewhat on topic and not drawing away from your cmic's plot, it reduces the seriousness. Very generic idea, usual poke'mon comic, right now I'd give this comic a 5/10. Try customizing characters, a better plot, and funnier jokes.

 

[adwajr]

Right now I can't update. Homework's got in the way.
I don't know when I'll update again. But I'll take the comments, it's going to have a new look and the real action will begin as soon as they get on board the boat.