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Pokemon: Black Infection [OOC/SU]

I read the last two posts, and imagined one of those clothing-change montages. Man slides in the revolving door and comes back out before it stops spinning in completely new clothes, gets a long scarf caught on the door, and starts getting dragged around and around. Then I got dizzy. x_x
 
Just gonna butt in here and tell you as apposed to sending out multiple; don't forget about the four line rule guys. Fuyu and PkMnTrainer Yellow's last few posts have been a little lacking for the last few posts! I know it gets hard when it's just dialogue between two characters, but try and include details. I find it helps if I make my characters do a little more, you know? Scratch, twitch, shuffle a bit, etc. Or perhaps take in more of your surroundings without being too dull.

Please try and keep the quality up, alrighty? <:
 
Hahaha, I understand. I have an iPhone and I think four lines is equal to like 8 or 9 iphone/itouch lines. d:

Just keep it in mind. Find somewhere that you know has four lines on your computer and look it at on your iTouch to get a good idea.
 
Sometimes I feel tempted to turn off my formatting, both the font and size of which cause my posts to look smaller. |D

(Formatting on)
Here, have a free example. Notice how significant the difference is even on a small sentence. |D

(Formatting off)
Here, have a free example. Notice how significant the difference is even on a small sentence. |D
 
About Zapdos... I've talked to him, and he's not really interested in this RP. I can't remember what he said exactly, but yeah.
 
I've come down with an /awful/ cold. |D I also apologize for not being as timely on posting as I used to.
 
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