pokemon black rockets revenge

DASHIEl?MEAN!... AGAIN!! *shocker* and please don't say that it's constructive critisism because it's not. (someone didn't get enough love from mommy and daddy)
 
DON'T TALK ABOUT DASIEL'S MUM AND DAD! YOU JUST SHUT UP!
E hem.
Sorry about that, guys.
 
exteradude said:
Here's an example of a good map. Check my attachment.
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please everybodey calm down i dont want fighting on this thread it is for the talk about my game thank you for sticking up for me freundmon but you shouldnt tlk bout his/her mum of dad but yeah oh and exteradude you say you go a good map well m8 hate to burst your bubble but if your going to put me in my place at least make shure that your map has plants that are just the top of them it usually helps if you have all of it

here it is my screenshot well it is taken out of rpg maker and yes i am using rm2k3 (rpg maker 2003) well i hope ya like it please just tell me if i can improve on it
 
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les_2212 said:
please everybodey calm down i dont want fighting on this thread it is for the talk about my game thank you for sticking up for me freundmon but you shouldnt tlk bout his/her mum of dad but yeah oh and exteradude you say you go a good map well m8 hate to burst your bubble but if your going to put me in my place at least make shure that your map has plants that are just the top of them it usually helps if you have all of it

here it is my screenshot well it is taken out of rpg maker and yes i am using rm2k3 (rpg maker 2003) well i hope ya like it please just tell me if i can improve on it
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Heh heh (Nervous) Well, I guess I messed up, didn't I? Well, You're doing a good job and everybody isn't perfect. Eve I messed up, didn't I? You know, If you's like, I can give you one of my small regions that I mapped! It's for Pkmn seraphi, but I can let you use it, for a new region.
 
screenies coming soon hopefully :)
 
In my opinion, the forest screenshot... the trees look kindda repetitive (as in many other games) and the tall grass (where you find Pokemon) are too spaced.

OMG!one!!11! World Cup!,

~Azura.
 
AzuraBR said:
In my opinion, the forest screenshot... the trees look kindda repetitive (as in many other games) and the tall grass (where you find Pokemon) are too spaced.

OMG!one!!11! World Cup!,

~Azura.
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thankyou for your advice the only reason i did the grass like that is to make it look different and not bland but ill see what i can do with it well here is the next screenie this might be the last town for the demo im not to sure yet anyway tell me what you think of and sorry you had to wait so long for it
 
i have had much thought about it and i am now going to continue with my game hey who knows it might turn out better than expected

also this may take a while but i am creating a house where a person ask's you to do errands for him and he gives you things just to make the game a little more interesting, because lets face it im not that good at game making yet anyway yeah everytime you complete one it will be a new one....if continued game not new started one. Anyway there is going to be 100 errands for the demo and after that it will grow anyway i have to go now cya
 
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hey your maps could do with a bit of work but keep it up.

oh and when doing screens, do it in-game. when you load the screen hit F5, it should make it smaller, which is when it looks the best.
 
Your maps. They look a bit off. I think it's the amount of space that you left on the maps.

Now I know you said that the game is set in the woods, but it greatly restricts movement, and makes the map look really boring (the endless amount of trees on either side of the path.

Moreover, your cave screenshot. It's a cave, a natural rock structure. You map consists of squares getting larger and larger. It's supposed to be more like a labrinyth. You should look at current PKMN games or even any game with a cave system to get a feel and some ideas for what in-game caves look like.

Actually, the above goes for any map that you make - you should try and make it look natural.

Your house also looks weird. If you wanna seperate the room like that, I have two suggestions. Firstly you should remove the black from the tops, and instead replace it with something like this (look down).

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See how there are no hollow parts, that's what you should be doing.

Lastly, you saved them as jpeg's. The number one rule in any sort of sprite display is to never use jpeg's, since they greatly ruin quality, as well as the overall look and feel of an image. From now on, I suggest you produce your screenshots in a png format, for better quality shots and a better impression on PC members.

But your maps have been getting better - work at them a bit more.

And I missed where Dashiel was mean.
 
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