Pokemon: Blue journey

Trainer Ben

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    This is my first Pokemon sprite comic. It mixes sprites from each of the games, but I don't mind. I did not copy this from anyone elses, although it may be similar to some peoples. Please let me know what you think:

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    Couldn't find any chip sets. I seem to like plain backgrounds better.
     
    Oh wow! thats good! why dont ya add some humour to it. XD
     
    not bad...add some humour Like Eliana said
     
    It's okay. I like the random stuff in the room. XD
    I also dont mind the mixing of sprites from diffrent games. Actually, it's kinda cool, how you did it.

    The shading on the spirtes could be much better imo. :/
    And the plot just seems like RBY with only a few twists to it. Humor or a more original plot could make it better. ^^

    I hope you improve. ^^
    ~ nayana_1120 gave out a honest but seemingly harsh review @_@;;
     
    Thanks for all of the responses. I not really one for adding humor in my comics, but i'll try. Well, here's chapter 2:
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    I think I simulated the battle system pretty good, except that my Pokemon don't have visible health bars.
     
    Your comic looks really good.
     
    Are u making anymore trainer ben cause i'm waiting for chapter 3
     
    lol, ooh that looks so exciteing! ^_^ i love the houses you used! plz continue! :D
     
    Wow! XD great graphics! I hope you'l make another comic. ^_^
     
    Pretty good. I like your battle simulations. ^^
    The variety of sprites looks kinda odd, but kinda unique at the same time. I would pefer unity though.
    A few problems; the beginning of the battle, you should have had the pokeball bars instead of the HP bar. Also, some white spots on Charmander went transparent when you did it. :/
    Why doesn't your pokemon have the hp bar? Is it part of the plot or do you not have it?
    well, enough nitpicking. ^^;

    Anyway, I hope you make more. It's a basic plot, but I'm intersted to see why the werid edited magma guy needs to take squritle. ^^

    oO;; pc was flipping out for a sec; if it double posts or freaks out tell me. oO;;
     
    Come on trainer ben arent u gonna make any new comics cmon i really would like to see more :)
     
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