Poke'mon: Bronze Future

Jake

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    Herro! This is my second Poke'community comic. So far it is probbably my best and Iv'e only made 2 episodes for it 0-0.
    .:Story:.
    A boy name Bronze was walking down a road unknown to him. And all of a sudden, a truck coming at an extreme speed hits him! Some how the boy survives, but his memory doesn't. He wakes up later to be found by the one, the only, Proffesor Oak! Oak asks him his name and he tells him, but that's all he can remember! Oak tells him he will be right back, that he needs to make a phone call.
    -|More Later|-
    .:Characters:. Not Yet
    The comic is a spin-off of the manga "Poke'mon Adventures". Meaning most of the characters have came and/or originated from it.
    -|Coming Soon|-
    .:Episodes:.

    Season 1: Finding Myself
    Episode 1: Wtf Mr. Narrator!?
    Episode 2: OlioliOak!
    Episode 3: Booarrring
    .:Other:.

    Q: Does the comic have a narrator?
    A: No, that is SOLEY for the first episode and etc.

    Q: Will Ash and friends be in it?
    A: NO.

    Q: Are you going to be using Dungeon sprites for Poke'mon OverWorlds?
    A: NO.

    Q: How did you get the idea for Bronze?
    A: Well I was thinking about G/S/C, and wondered why they made Crystal..well "Crystal" and not Bronze or Copper. So I made my Bronze! (And I will be making Copper soon...[NO STEAL])

    Q: What's with all the speech bubbles?
    A: The long rectangle ones are for speaking out loud, the circles are for sounds, and the other one (the long circular thing) is for thinking.
    .:Credits:.
    Without these people, this comic would not be possible!
    Avatar for the EXCELLENT OverWorlds he made!
    rm2kid for his perfect Crystal OverWorlds!
    Coronis for his great Poke'mon OverWorlds and very many sprites!
    RedZigzagoon for his Pallet Town in-building rips!
    And all the great sites I visited for inspiration!
    serebii.net
    pkmncommunity.com (XD)
    friendcodes.com (I'm a mod there)
    spriters-resource.com
     
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    I like it! It's awesome! =3​
     
    It's ok, I guess.
    You never make two speech bubbles, you just make the speech bubble bigger.
    It looks odd otherwise. Just a thought.
    I'm guessing the thicker outline is thoughts? Try Italics.
    And try tails instead of names, it conserves bubble space.

    Otherwise good.
    And getting run over by a car is so generic.
     
    PokeNerdoid: Thanks
    Astral: Thanks for the advice, I'll do the tails and actually thoughts have their own speech bubbles.
    About the car, I originally had this plan for the comic about 3 months back, but I let someone use the amnesia idea, but not the car.
    The Boaren Line: I hurried and made these a couple days ago, and as you can tell there just slopped together fusions
    [PokeCommunity.com] Poke'mon: Bronze Future

    First one: Boaren, fusion of Mudkip, Mankey, andTurtwig + recolor
    Second one: Boarember, fusion of Crocanaw, Mankey, and Shelgon + recolor
    Third one: Boarflare, fusion of Snorlax, Biidaru, and Primeape + recolor
     
    I like the new starters idea.
    Shape them up, but I won't give you advice, that's for the showcase.
    I'm looking forward to progression.
    Just a suggestion but maybe a good rivalry and possibly romance.
    This is definately far better than IDC
     
    Yeah, I'm probbably going to make a couple new characters based on jewelery and such.
    Like: Copper, Amethyst, Onyx, Amber, and Citrine.
     
    Nope, but I did show you it.
    New Character:
    Amethyst A.K.A. Amy
    [PokeCommunity.com] Poke'mon: Bronze Future

    What role does she play in Bronze's life?
    NO SPOILERS!
    I'm almost done with Episode 3 BTW
     
    *Waits for it to be put up*

    Are you going to sue any of your sprites from the showcase in here?
     
    Probbably not, allot of them are for another comic, on another site (where Bkue is from).
    But BF is way better than it.
     
    I never stopped 0-0
    I just need FC to get back up so I can finish the site.
    EDIT: Episode 3 is up, with text bubbles with tails XD
     
    It was amusing for the time being but you could have put some slight humor in it, or in future comics to come.
     
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