Pokemon: Celo League

[RealPokemonFan]

I was inspired by Rubyrulez's Lento Legends Fanfic, that I decided I would make my own new Pokemon fanfiction! I will be doing it in script format as well as Rubyrulez. Thanks for making Lento Legends, Ruby! :D



CHAPTER ONE: NEW BEGINNING

ASH'S TEAM: Pikachu


Ash is walking out of his house towards Prof. Oak's lab. He had returned home only three days ago, and the Professor had called for Ash to meet a good friend of his.

Ash: *Opens door* You wanted to see me professor?

Oak: Yes Ash, come over here. A good friend of mine would like to meet you.

Ash: *Sits in chair beside Oak*

Professor Rose: Why, you must be Ash. How nice to meet you!

*Rose has red hair, and almost always has a green clip in her hair. Her eyes are a deep blue, and she has a more slim build to her.*

Ash: That's me!

Oak: Ash, Prof. Rose just gave me a stunning idea. She thinks you should enter the Celo League!

Ash: For real!? Wow!

Oak: Take a friend with you, Im sure someone would like to go along.

Rose: Yes, bring one of your friends. You must have some stories to tell!

Ash: I know exactly who I'll bring! Brock has been my best friend for years, and I bet he would love to come along with me.

Oak: It's settled then. Ash's coming to the Celo Region!

Rose: Thats wonderful! There's a boat that's leaving to Celo tomorrow at about eleven o'clock.

Ash: I'll be there!

The screen turns off.

Oak: Have fun over at the Celo region. Prof. Rose will have a Pokedex upgrade for you, and also a Starter Pokemon for both you and Brock!

Ash: That's great!

Suddenly, the door creaks. Pikachu walks in and smiles at Prof. Oak and Ash.

Ash: Hey, buddy! *Runs to Pikachu and picks him up, and sets him on his shoulder* We're going on a new adventure!

Pikachu: Pika!

Ash: Bye Professor Oak, Ill go tell Brock the news! *Runs out door*

Oak: That boy is growing up so fast, it hurts. *Laughs*

Ash walks into his house and runs up to Brock.

Ash: Brock! We are going to the Celo league! There will be a new pokemon waiting for us there.

Brock: Whoa whoa whoa. Slow down! We just got home for Peat's sake!

Ash: Awww! There's a boat leaving tomorrow! *An idea pops into his head*
You know, I bet there will be a lot of Celo girls who would want to meet you... You know, with all these adventures youve been through and everything...

Brock: What are we waiting for!? Get your stuff and lets get out of here!

*Both run out the door*

The scene takes place on a path walking to the Port.

Brock: So Ash, you exited about this adventure?

Ash: Yeah, its too bad I could only bring one of my friends though.

Brock: Actually... *Pulls out a boat ticket* We can bring one more person. *Smiles*

Ash: Cool! Who should we take?

Brock: Thats a quick descision. You know you wanna take her, 'cause you have a crush on her. *Wink*

Ash: *Turns red all over* Do not! But, maybe she should come too.

Brock: Knew you had a crush on her!

Ash: DO NOT! *Chase Brock down the path anime style*

The scene now is at the Cerulean Gym

Misty: So your'e saying you want me to go with you to the Celo League?

Ash: That's right! Brock had an extra ticket and we HAD to bring someone else!

Misty: I'd love to go! Ive heard a bit about Celo, but not a lot. Thanks for taking me along *Gives Ash a hug*

Ash: *Turn red*

Brock: Well, lovebirds, lets go.

Ash&Misty: WE AREN'T LOVEBIRDS! *Both chase Brock out anime style*

The port comes into view as they exit the Cerulean Gym. The night sky is high up, and everyone wants to get to sleep.

Brock: *Check watch* Okay, we have an hour untill the boat leaves. Let's go get some dinner...

Jessie: Not so fast! Prepare for trouble!

James: And make it double!

Ash: Oh great, not these clowns again...

Jessie: To protect the world from devastation...

James: To unite all peoples within our na-

Ash: Pikachu! Thunder!

Pikachu: Piiikaaaaaaa!!!!!

*BOOM*

Jessie&James&Meowth: We're blasting off again!

Meowth: And I didn't even get to say my part either! *Whine*

Brock: Oookay, let's skip dinner and go on to the boat...

All walk to the boat and hand the clerk their tickets.

Clerk: I will show you to your rooms.

The clerk leads Ash, Misty, and Brock down the hallway.

Clerk: For the young lady. *Beckons her in one room.* And for the young gentlemen. *Beckons to room oposite Misty's* Have a nice trip. *Walks back down hall*

Ash: G'night everyone... *Yawn*

Brock: Yeah, goodnight...

Misty: What they said....

All doors shut.

Whos that pokemon!? (HINT: When these pokemon gather, they can create lightning storms)

It's morning on the ship. Ash wakes up with a yawn, knocking Pikachu off the bed.

Pikachu: Pi- *FWOMP* Piii...... *Anime-style bump forms on his head*

Ash: Oops, sorry Pikachu...

Brock: *Already awake and making breakfast* Goood morning! We are about an hour away from Celo. Care for some breakfast?

Ash: Am I ever! Haha!

Brock: *Hands Ash a plate with Eggs and Bacon* Ill be right back, I need to go take Misty her's. *Walk out door*

Ash(THINKING): So Im almost to Celo huh? I can't believe that Im already in a new adventure!

THAT POKEMON: Pikachu!!!


That was the first episode! Please give me suggestions and stuff. Episode Two will be up shortly! Oh by the way. I ask the Whos That Pokemon question in the middle and answer in the end. Its a new twist! : :classic:

 

[IceKing]

it went by rather quickly. It was rather random and little description/detail. Its too monotonous! Work on the main skills more to make the fic more exciting and not as fast and boring. You made some good references BTW (Brock and girls,Ash and Misty going insane) Grammar and spelling needs work too. I would suggest not doing script format, and if you do, do it properly. Although, you might be doing it properly Im not that sure. Make things more interesting because your fic is pretty boring as of now.

Here are some examples of how things go by quickly

Ash meets proffesor rose who suggests he does the Celo league and he immediately runs off?

Jessie and James appeare PIkachu uses thunder they go blasting off. Most everyone hates that in the anime, can't you change that in your fic?

The whoel chapter is just rather rushed. That's the major problem I have with this fic, that its extremely rushed

 

[Asura Nirosuki]

I liked it alot.It's better to take your time at all cost cus other wise some people are going to flame it. Nice work.

 

[RealPokemonFan]

!

Thanks for suggestions, I expected the first chapter to be a little choppy. Believe me, it will get better.

CHAPTER TWO: A new Beginning (PT 2)

ASH'S TEAM: Pikachu
MISTY'S TEAM: *NONE!*
BROCK'S TEAM: *NONE!*

We continue our story as the Ferry headed for Celo reaches the port. Our heroes are exited to meet and tame new Pokemon in this new region!

Ash: *Breathe in and throw arms up* Celo, a new Pokemon trainer is here!

Brock: It does look like a nice place.

Misty: Sure does! I wonder if I could catch a pokemon right off....

Officer Jenny: *Pulls up on her motorcycle* You, kid. That pikachu is out of its Pokeball, you have just breached Rule 18 Section 2 of the Celo League Laws.

Ash: Officer, I just took my first step into Celo just now. I don't know any of the rules.

Officer: Wait... I recognize that face! Your'e Ash Ketchum!

Ash: That's me!

Brock: *Blushes and drools anime style* And Im Brock, his best friend!

Misty: *Smash Brock off-screen anime style* Yes, he's Ash.

Officer: You must be his girlfriend. Your'e a lucky girl! *Wink*

Misty&Ash: HE IS NOT MY BOYFRIEND!
SHE IS NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!

Officer: Suuuuuurrre... But here's a copy of the rules and regulations.

Ash: There's one problem, officer. Pikachu despises pokeballs! I havn't been able to get him in one for years!

Officer: You really ARE new to Celo aren't you? Use this Pokeball. *Hands Ash a Zapball*

*A zapball is like a pokeball, only it's all around blue and it has a lightning mark on the top. It is known to charm any electric type pokemon that is already tamed into it.*

Ash: Well, here goes. Pikachu, return!

Pikachu: *Willingly enters the Zapball*

Ash: Cool! Oh, there's one more problem, I don't know the way to Prof. Rose's lab. Could you please point me towards it?

Officer Jenny: That building up on that hill, that's her lab. Good luck in Celo! *Drive off*

Ash: Well, we had best get there as soon as possible, 'cause I can't wait to start my new adventure!

*CHANGE SCENE*

Team rocket is sitting in their Meowth baloon.

Jessie: Oh, why can't we ever get that twerp's pikachu!? With one zap it's the same thing over and over!

James: I know! I can't get over him! Plus, every time we fail, BLOOP! There goes a cut of our paycheck!

Meowth: Stop whining you twos! *Scratches faces anime style*

Jessie&James: You are't helping!
Yeah, she's right!
*Beat him up anime style*

Wobbofette: *Burst out of Pokeball* Wobba!

Jessie: Return you bafoon! *Zap it back into Pokeball* This thing has been NOTHING but trouble the entire time it's been with me! Oh... *Eyes open wide* Heeheh.... I know how we can trade this thing in.

James&Meowth: Uh huh! Uh huh!

*SCENE CHANGE*

Our heroes are making their way to Prof. Rose's lab. Ash, a spring in his step, can't wait to get his first new Celo pokemon.

Ash: *Knocks on door*

Short pause

Prof. Rose: *Opens door* Why, Ash! Hello! Come in, come in!

Group walks inside

Prof. Rose: I've been waiting for you! Plus, I was just about to call Professor Oak. Would you like to speak to him?

Ash: Sure thing, thanks!

Prof. Rose: I thought you were bringing one friend.

Ash: We got an extra ticket, and here we are!

Prof. Rose: I have enough Starter Pokemon for all of you! You understand that originally there are three choices, correct?

Ash&group: *Nod*

Prof. Rose: Well, I have six! Three have already been taken, but you can have the other three.

Ash: You know, I have the sinking feeling that Team Rocket's gonna show up any time now.

Jessie: Prepare for trouble!

Ash: Of course...

James: Shut up, you insolent twerp!

Jessie: We mean business this time! No more running! Seviper, go!

Seviper: Seviper!!!!

Jessie: Seviper, attack the Pokeball Container!

Seviper: Sevv!!!!! *Lunges at container*

Ash: Oh no you don't!

James: Oh yes we do! Cacturn, go!

Cacturn: Cac!

James: Cacturn, use your Spike Cannon!

Cacturn: Cac! Cac! *Fires a flurry of spikes*

Pika: Pika!

By the time Pikachu recovers, Seviper has already broken the containment chamber and Team Rocket is already retreating.

Ash: No! The pokemon! Pikachu, thunderbolt!

James: Ha! Meowth, deploy Rubber Coating!

Meowth: Dat's right! *Pushes button*

A huge rubber ball envelopes the entire baloon*

Ash: Drat! We have to follow them!

Prof. Rose: But your Pikachu can't harm it!

Ash: But I have a pokemon that can! Get Professor Oak to transfer me my Taillow!

Prof. Rose: On it! *Calls professor Oak*

Oak: Hello, Professor Rose!

Rose: No time to talk! Send over Ash's Tailow immediately! We have no time to waste!

Oak: Well, dear! Okay! *Puts on transfer table*

Ash: Okay! *Grabs off other table* Tailow, go!

Tailow: Tail! Tailow!

Ash: Peck their bubble out now!

Tailow: Tail! *Dashes at the bubble popping it.

The rubber bubble pops and the baloon comes down.

Team Rocket: We give up! *Drops all the Pokeballs except for their own*

Jessie: All we ever do is try and try and TRY! We quit!

Team rocket: Team rocket running away like sissies again!

WHOS THAT POKEMON!? Hint: Whenever this Pokemon flaps its wings, sparks shower in the sky.

Prof. Rose: Thank you very much for getting the Pokemon back. You may now have your pick at these Pokemon.

Ash: I choose... This one! *Picks up the middle ball*

Prof. Rose: You chose the Flizzard. The flizzard is an icy pokemon, but leans towards water attacks.

*A Flizzard looks like a long salamander, but it only stands about a half-foot high, and is about two feet long. Icy spikes line its back and its scales are a shiny light blue.*

Brock: This one looks good to me. *Picks up ball to the right*

Prof. Rose: That's a Chardon. A Chardon is a fire-type pokemon.

*A Chardon looks similar to a Flizzard, but has small flames lining its back. Its scales are a dark red.*

Misty: This one's mine then!

Prof. Rose: Thats a Kordon. Its a normal-type version of the Flizzard and Chardon.

*A Kordon is similar to both Flizzard and Chardon, but has no design lining its back, but its scales are grey with an emerald line lining its back. It has harder scales than the others, and also has fangs.*

Prof. Rose: I suppose you three are tired. There's an Inn downtown, I hope you enjoy your stay!

Ash: Hey, Prof. Rose, is there a gym in this town?

Prof. Rose: Actually, yes. the Aciles Gym is a great Gym to start at. But, you have to have three pokemon to participate in the battle.

Ash: Thats a good thing, now Ill have to catch another pokemon whether I like it or not, but believe me, I like it!

Prof. Rose: *Turns to Misty* You must be his girlfriend! You are lucky. *Giggle*

Ash&Misty: WE ARE NOT IN LOVE!

Brock: But I think I am! *Leans over to Prof Rose and drools anime style*

Prof. Rose: Lose the drooling, and you just might charm me. *Wink and giggle*

Our heroes, tired and worn, make their way to the Aciles Inn, for a new journey lies for them tomorrow. What challenges await them?

THAT POKEMON: Ho-oh

 

[rubyrulez]

I was inspired by Rubyrulez's Lento Legends Fanfic, that I decided I would make my own new Pokemon fanfiction! I will be doing it in script format as well as Rubyrulez. Thanks for making Lento Legends, Ruby!

Awwww, thanks. I like getting great comments like that :D! Anyway, I read this story and the plot indeed is very good. However, as Iceking said, it does seem a little short and does move by a bit too quickly. Also, I was told that it was a better idea not to use 'our heroes', and to go with something like 'Ash and friends', or 'Ash and the gang'. This story has great potential nonetheless! Keep it up! :D

 

[Asura Nirosuki]

good agian hopfully you will do more.Like who's that pokemon don't you mean zapdos? cause every flap does a strom while hooh is a fire bird.In magonarie pokemon for misty :Raygoon the sea dragon this pokemon never hade a heart for war and loves to swim where there is a lot more garyados. Will brendan and May be in this fanfic? and will Ash and co have rivals? .__.

 

[RealPokemonFan]

Sorry I havn't been on for so long.

CHAPTER THREE: Astounding Abby

ASH'S TEAM: Flizzard, Pikachu
BROCK'S TEAM: Chordon
MISTY'S TEAM: Kordon

As the sun rises, Ash and the gang wake up with a robust spring in their step, as Ash prepares to venture to the Aciles Forest. As the team leaves Aciles Inn, who else should show up than...

Ash: GARY?! What are you doing here?!

Gary: Oh great... You know you won't get ahead of me!

Ash: Oh yeah? Even when I made it about five rounds higher than you at the Johto League?

Gary: Look, let's TRY not to cross paths. Oak sent a message along with me to give to you. His phone broke, so he couldn't call

Ash: Err.... Oooookay.

As Gary departs, Ash can do nothing but stand in confusion. Why was Gary at Celo just to deliver a message?

Ash: Well... We might as well make our way to the forest.

Brock: Yeah, but first... *Eyes Officer Jenny* *Drools anime style* Hey there, my name's Brock!

Misty: *Pull Brock's ear* Get over here! (Brock: Yeow! That smarts! Why are you so cruel to me!? *Shake head and cry anime style*) Because I can. (Brock: You suck, I swear...)

Ash: Ehhh.... Ill forget he said that.

SCENE: Near Aciles Forest entrance

Kid: Whoa! That's Ash Ketchum! He's been in three leagues now!

Kid2: You're right! Hey, Ash! Wanna battle?

Ash: Okay, but no bets.

Kid2: In spite of that, I bet you Ill win.

Ash: I expected that.

*Battle music*

Ash: (Perfect time to check out my Flizzard's stuff!) Flizzard, go!

Kid: Kleo, go!

Ash: That's new! Maybe my Pokedex can give me some info...

Pokedex: Kleo, the Mini Lion Pokemon. This pokemon is rather shy, but will attack when provoked. It is known for its golden-brown mane.

*Kleo looks like a small lion, only with a cute anime face. It has small claws and a golden-brown mane*

Ash: Okay Flizzard, attack with Water Gun!

Kid2: Dodge it Kleo, and Scratch Attack it!

*Kleo dodges the water gun and dashes at Flizzard*

Ash: Flizzard, tail whip!

*Flizzard whips it's tail around and THWAPs the Kleo to the side.*

Flizzard: Fliz! Fliz!

Ash: Flizzard, Water Gun!

Flizzard: FLIZ!

*Flizzard hoses the Kleo down while it is on the ground.*

Kid: Kleo! No!

Ash: I guess that makes me the winner!

Kid: You win, here's the Credit...

Ash: Credit?

Kid: You mean you don't know about Credits?

Ash: Umm, no. This is my first time to Celo.

Kid: You get a Credit every time you defeat an opponent. You need a Credit Board to keep track of them. A Credit Board is about the size of a creditcard, but it's electronic. I have an extra Credit Board you can have.

Ash: Gee, thanks! Since you gave me that, don't bother to add a credit.

Kid: I knew you were a good sport! Here's a tip. You can find lots of Kleo in Aciles Forest, if you want one, get it now because they come out in the mornings.

Ash: Cool! Ill have to get one while Im the- Drat!

Misty: What is it Ash?

Ash: We forgot to stop by the store! I forgot to get Pokeballs!

Brock: Calm down, I have some extras. *Tosses Ash some Pokeballs*

Ash: Thank's Brock.

After winning his first battle in the Celo League, Ash has learned the importance of Credits. But he shall learn more soon enough.

WHOS THAT POKEMON!? Hint: This Pokemon can take up to ten seconds to react to pain.

SCENE: Outside Aciles Forest entrance.

Announcer: The forest is now open for tours! Feel free to catch some Pokemon while your'e there!

Ash: Haha, this is perfect! Ill catch a new pokemon, and tomorrow Ill challenge the Gym Leader!

Misty: Slow down! Don't rush so much!

Ash: Misty, after I get my first badge I will calm down.

Misty: Okay, honey.

Ash: Did you just call me honey?!

Brock: Knew you two were perfect for ea- AUGH!

Ash&Misty: WE ARE NOT IN LOVE! (Brock: How do I get myself into these messes...)

SCENE: By the Big Oak in the Aciles Forest

Ash: Shh! There's a Pokemon I can catch!

Pokedex: Mooso, the Cow pokemon. This pokemon creates milk that can heal many types of diseases.

Ash: Pikachu, thunder!

Pikachu: *Released from pokeball* Piiiiii....KA!!!! *BZZZZZZZZZZZT*

Mooso: Mooo! *Thwomp

Ash: Pokeball, go! *SHewww!*

Mooso: Mooo- *ZPPPPPPPPT*

Pokeball: Wakka Wakka... Wakka... Wakka. Boooot.

Ash: Yeah! I cought a Mooso!

Misty: Whoopty-do. Why don't we catch some other random Pokemon that we have no ideas what it can do?

Abby: Hm! You caught a Mooso with one Pokeball!

Ash: Who are you?

Abby: My name is Abby Kadabbi.

Ash: Abby Kadabbi? Sounds like Abra Kadabra.

Abby: I get that a lot. Hey, why don't we have a battle?

Ash: Why not?

*BATTLE MUSIC*

Abby: Beautifly, GO!

Ash: Flizzard, GO!

*BZZT* *BZZZT*

Ash: Flizzard, Water Gun it out of the sky!

Abby: Beautifly, Protective Wind!

*Flizzard shoots a series of Water Guns at Beautifly, but Beautifly sends out a wave of gusts.*

Abby: Beautifly, tackle!

Ash: Flizzard, tackle!

*Both pokemon make a series of jumping and smashing motions but neither come out victorious.*

Ash: Quick Flizzard, use Tail Whip!

Flizzard: Fliz!

*Flizzard begins to whip Beautifly*

Beautifly: Beau! Beau! Beau!

Abby: Beautifly, Wing Attack!

Beautifly: Beauuuuuuu!

*THWAM! Beautifly's Wing Attack nails Flizzard right in the chin. Flizzard goes flying into the air.*

Ash: Flizzard! Return...

Abby: You owe me one credit.

Ash: Guess I do. How do I give you a credit?

Abby: Just sign your name on the Credit Board and it will assign me a credit. You need three to compete in the Aciles Gym.

Ash: Who is the gym leader?

Abby: Me!

Ash: Whaa?! *SHAA!*

Abby: I may seem a bit young *Actually, she's eight!* but I am eligable by Celo Credit Laws to be able to lead a gym.

Ash: I was looking forward to a Gym Battle. How many Pokemon will I need?

Abby: Four is the minimum. Six is the max. You'll need more credits if you want to battle me in a Gym Battle. But I like how you battle.

Ash: Gee, thanks.

Abby: Wait a minute... YOure...Ash Ketchum! Your'e a legend around here!

Ash: Aww, shucks... *Blush Anime Style*

Abby: Im looking forward to our Gym Battle.

Ash: So am I. 'Till tomorrow?

Abby: 'Till tomorrow. *Both shake hands*

And so, Ash and the gang head out of the Aciles Forest, ready for a good night's sleep.

SCENE: Team Rocket Baloon

Jessie: We have got to change our names and start a new crime organization. Okay, I go first. I will be Jesica, since that is my real name.

James: I will be... Jonathan, in honor of my grandfather.

Meowth: Im still Meowth ;3

J&J&M: We are now... Team Blast!

THAT POKEMON: Slowpoke

 

[rubyrulez]

That chapter was a lot better. I was actually surprised to see Team Rocket change their names and become Team Blast! Also, the "You suck, I swear" from Brock was unexpected, but pretty good. Looking forward to your next chapter! :)

 

[RealPokemonFan]

Next Chapter!

Chapter 4 for your enjoyment. I AM NOW CHANGING THE STARTING FROM:
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CH. 4: Move-so Mooso!

Ash's Team: Flizzard, Pikachu, Mooso
Brock's Team: Chardon
Misty's Team: Kordon

Scene: Outside Aciles Gym

Ash: I am so ready for my first gym battle!

Misty: Overconfidence will be your downfall eventually.

Brock: Misty's right. You just started the Celo League, why don't you catch one more pokemon?

Ash: Well... Whatever...

Misty: You're going to agree? With no argument? Who are you, and what have you done with Ash?

Ash: I never win arguments, so why keep trying?

Brock: Are you sick ash?

Ash: Shut up. A new Pokemon wouldn't hurt.

Suddenly, Officer Jenny rides up on her motorcycle.

Brock: Officer Je-

Misty: *Pulls Brock by ear before he can finish sentence* I suggest you don't do that. (Brock: Owowowowow!)

Ash: What's wrong Officer Jenny?

Jenny: I need to get to the Aciles Forest immediately, there's a problem with the Mooso there.

Ash: Hm, I may be able to help! Let me go with you.

Jenny: Okay, but make it there quick!

Jenny rides off on her motorcycle.

Ash: Hmmm... I wonder what's happening!

-TITLE THEME-

Our team, Ash, Misty, and Brock, make their way hastily to Aciles Forest. What could be wrong with the Mooso?

Ash: We made it as fast as we- Whoa...

All the Mooso are frozen solid in front of the entrance, nobody can get in.

Ash: Officer Jenny! What happened?

Jenny: It was the doing of a Pokemon. Abby is trapped in there!

Ash: Oh! *Flashes back to battle* I have to help her.

Brock: Let me handle this one. Chardon, go!

Chardon: Char! Char!

Brock: Chardon, ember!

Chardon shoots a series of embers, but they all bounce off the ice.

Brock: Whoa, that's some strong ice.

Jenny: We thought that the first time we tried to melt it.

Brock: Chardon, return! That's very strange!'

Ash: Yeah, it is!

Misty: Hmm... Hey! *Snaps fingers* Ive got it! Ash, use Water Gun with Flizzard!

Ash: Misty, thats ice. Water won't help.

Misty: No, not on the Mooso! Let me finish. Kordon, go!

Kordon: Don! Don! Kordon!

Misty: Kordon, use Dig!

Kordon: Kor!

Kordon digs a hole under the Mooso, big enough to fill with water.

Misty: Okay, Ash, fill it up with water.

Ash: Flizzard, go!

Flizzard: Fliz!

Flizzard fills the pool up.

Misty: Okay, Brock, make your Chardon jump into the pool.

Brock: Chardon, go!

Chardon: Charrr!

Chardon jumps into the water and the water begins to boil

Jenny: Good idea Misty! It will probably melt the ice.

Whos that pokemon!? Hint: This pokemon attacks by rearanging its cellular structure.

The team waits for five minutes, the ice hasn't melted a bit.

Jenny: That's strange...

Brock & Ash return their Pokemon, Misty did three minutes ago.

Suddenly, an old man walks by.

Man: I know what's wrong with them.

Ash: Who are you?

Man: My name is Kent. Those Mooso have a Flever.

Ash: A flever?

Man: It's like a fever, only it freezes, not burns. There is a liquid about five miles from here that can cure them.

Ash: We will get it!

Man: This water is hotter than that Chardon's scales.

Ash: Yeouch! We have to get it somehow though... Abby is trapped in there!

Man: I understand that. I have a small bit, enough to free one or two Mooso.

Ash: That's plenty! Please hand it to me.

Man: *Hands over liquid*

Ash: *Frees middle two Mooso.*

Abby is waiting at the entrance. She runs out and hugs Ash.

Abby: Thanks, Ash! I thought I was gonna be stuck there for good!

Ash: 'Salrite. Now we can get into the forest!

Abby: I can get some of my men to get the liquid needed to free the other Mooso. (Mooso1: Moo! Mooso2: Moo! Both walk off.)

Ash: We can get a pokemon by that time!

And so, our heroes depart into the forest, determined to add a new friend to the team!

THAT POKEMON: Deoxys

 

[RealPokemonFan]

Thanks everyone for the great reviews! Chapter Five will be up in about 30 minutes to 45 minutes.

 

[rubyrulez]

Well, I must say you are definately getting better with this fic, it seems a lot less rushed. Chapter 4 was very entertaining, I really liked it. Also, I like when you put in the bits and pieces of humor, I might try that. Looking forward to chapter 5!

 

[RealPokemonFan]

CH 5: May-Day

Ash's Team: Flizzard, Pikachu, Mooso
Brock's Team: Chardon
Misty's Team: Kordon

Brock: So, Ash. What type of Pokemon are you looking to catch?

Ash: I think a plant pokemon would be a good addition to my team, or a water.

Brock: Ash, you are finally using your head.

Ash: Hey!? What's that supposed to mean?

Suddenly, a familiar face appears.

May: Hey guys!

-TITLE THEME-

Ash: May?! How are you?!

May: Peechy, thanks!

Misty: *Fudge, it's that witch again! Ill show her!* So, how are you May? *Walks up to Ash and hugs him from behind*

Ash: Err, Misty, did you stumble?

Misty: *Turns hot red* Oh, yes... Stumble! Eheh...

Brock: How have you been May?

May: Not bad. Max couldn't come though.

Ash: That's too bad... Well, at least we met up again!

May: Yeah. Oop! *Ash hugs May all "Friendly" style.* *Turns red*

Ash: I just came to capture a pokemon so I can earn my first Gym Badge!

May: Cool! I just saw a group of grass pokemon. Maybe you can catch one!

Scene: An open field, a lot of grass pokemon are running around

Ash: I wonder what those are! *Pulls out Pokedex*

Dexter: Dandi, the Dandilion Pokemon. This pokemon has an aroma that can put any Pokemon into a trance. This Pokemon is also very shy.

Ash: Wow! That Pokemon would be great for my team! Go, Pikachu!

Pikachu: *Released from Zapball* Pi! Pikachu!

Ash: Pikachu, Quick Attack it!

Pikachu: Pikapi!

*Pikachu rushes at the Dandi quickly and rams it a few times*

Dandi: Dan! Dandi!

May: Use this, Ash! *Hands Ash a Grassball*

Ash: Go, grassball!

Dandi: Dan- *BZZT*

GB: Wakka wakka... Wakka.. Wakka wakka... Blooot.

Ash: I cought a Dandi! Cool! *Releases the Dandi from it's Pokeball* You'll be good with us, Dandi!

A giant BOOM is heard as a Seviper Baloon flies up into the air.

Ash: Team Rocket!

Jessie/Jessica: Wrong.

James/Jonathan: We have changed name and motto!

Jessica: Prepare for battle!

Jonathan: For we will fight.

Jessica: We will win.

Jonathan: And you will be left with plight.

Jessica: Jessica!

Jonathan: Jonathan!

Jessica: Team Blast Booms a new debut!

Meowth: Dat's right!

Ash: Team Blast huh? We won't let you have Pikachu!

Jessica: Oh, won't you?

A giant claw grabs May by the waist.

May: Ahh! Ash!!!

Ash: Grr! Pikachu, thu-

Jonathan: I wouldn't do that! If you were to throw a bolt at us, our claw would absorb it and send it at your little girlfriend ten-fold!

Ash: Grrr....

Jessica: Meet us at the old warehouse at six o'clock SHARP! Come only with your Pikachu, or else your girlfriend dies.

Ash: You won't get away with this!

Jonathan: We already have!

TB: Hahahaha! Team Blast booms off into the distance!

A rocket extends from the baloon and the group shoot off

WHOS THAT POKEMON? Hint: This pokemon can change into any other Pokemon.

Brock: May! You have no choice, you have to go alone!

Ash: No... May... If anything were to happen to her... *Begins to cry softly* I would be ruined!

Misty: Its okay Ash. We will get her!

Ash: I don't want to lose May OR Pikachu!

Misty: Don't worry. We will get Pikachu back after we get May back.

Ash: *I can't let anything happen to her... I... I...* I...

Misty: Just say it, Ash. We are the only people here.

Ash: I really want to, but I don't...

Brock: Just say it.

Ash: I love her. If something were to happen I wouldn't have a reason to go on!

Brock: It's four o'clock. Make your way to the warehouse. We will meet you back here.

Ash: *Begins to walk away*

Misty: And Ash?

Ash: *Turns around* Hm?

Misty: Good luck. *Kisses Ash on cheek*

Ash: Thanks. I will get out of this...

Will our hero truly rescue May? What will become of Pikachu? Only one thing is known, Ash is in a dilemma!

THAT POKEMON: Ditto

 

[rubyrulez]

That was good. I liked how Misty showed affection to Ash in front of May, just to get a reaction. The Pok?mon Dandi sounds interesting as well. Can't wait for more!