Pokemon Chronicles ~ BY Kai

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    POKEMON CHRONICLES
    BY KAI.​

    INTRODUCTION:
    I have learned a new way to make a comic, while I was away, and I am going to see if you people at PC like it! ;)​

    STORY:
    One kid named Phoenix (me) gets his first pokemon from the littleroot lab. Meanwhile, a team of thugs steal pokemon from the Oldale Pkmn Center. The newspaper says its been happening all over the pokemon world. Phoenix and his sister, July, set off to get the pokemon back to their rightful places before the thugs turn them evil. They make many new friends on the way and there are many sidequests.​


    LATEST COMIC:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chronicles ~ BY Kai

    CHARACTER BIOS:
    COMING SOON​

    THANKS FOR READING~​
     
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    ... I'm comfuzzled... WHERE ARE THE CHARACTERS???? oO;;
     
    Well, good but way too short for a single strip. You used flash for the inner glow, bubbles ,bevels, and drop shadow right? Anyways, the graphics are good. I'm betting that the blurry thing is him jumping over the ledge, right? Overall, this looks like a good one.
     
    Um.. in the first one, if they're supposed to be in darkness... why not make the gradient thing... dark? O_o

    One major thing that bothers me is all the unneeded text on the tops and bottoms. The only text that really should be there would be "Pokemon Chronicles - Made by Kai" small in like- a bottom corner, and the title of the comic. The copyright information or whatever that is and the "I hope you liked this issue" are very distracting.

    I would comment on the story... but it's so terribly vague at this point... I can't. XD
     
    Wow, cool comic. The graphic is nice, and the bubbles speech is nicer. But, can you make it to the point or more boxes at 1 page?
     
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