Pokemon Comic Time! "Stuck On You"

That is dumb wrong how they called there child "dummy". Anyways great comic can't wait for more.

:t003:Dark Venusaur
 
Thanks to all who replied! Your wonderful reviews warm my heart! ^-^ They make me want to make this comic great. Well, I hath updated!! And this time I think it looks even better, what with simplistic backgrounds included. ^^ And by the number of pages, I think you'll see why it took me so long to complete. >.>

So... as I shall update on this post and in the first, enjoy:

Ch. 3 The Bridge

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Comments and such welcome as usual!
 
You updated it!
YAY!
Hyuk Hyuk Hyuk... There's something off about that Waru...
AND I LOVED THE WAY YOU DREW THE DROWZEE.
So, so cute. Great story, great art....5 stars! Mwahahaha.
 
Wow L_A nice, interesting story, and the art.... It's comic book store worthy. Maybe you should try and get this baby published.
PS: I love um.... Dummy... lol I sweet Sneasel, I love it, I want here on my team!!!!
 
Another chappie...and longer than the other two combined, too! Go Lightie-chan! ^___^

Anyways, the chapter itself was definitely enjoyable, and the plot thickens too. The backgrounds are a nice touch, and I simply love the expressions, particularly the Drowzee's one.

Incdientally, Waru kind of reminds me of the thief dude from 8-bit theater (Not that anyone else here probably knows what I'm talking about), but the point is that I liked that character and I consequently see good things ahead of Waru...little conspirator. xD

Finally, I simply must state that your art = greatness. Very proffessional. I could actually picture this getting published if not for the copyright issues on pokémon *Stabs copyright issues*. Keep up the good work. ^^
 
OMG! ebil teddy! aw its cute though! go L_A! can't wait to see what happens next!
 
I think I may know where the name for the Teddiursa came from! :D

This is great! I'm really enjoying it. I especially love the way you draw Charmander - he'd be an awesome Charizard! :D

Keep it up, can't wait to read more!

--FG
 
Hmm... that Teddiursa is up to something. Better keep an eye on little Waru. The Sneasel baby is just too cute. I guess even Hino can't ignore that cute face. And as FG said, that manga-like style works very well. I'll be waiting to see the "creepy" Pokemon.
 
OMG! Another chapter of this sprang up, and I missed it? *dies*

I love this new chapter! ^_^ The cute, innocent-looking Teddiursa is plotting something.... O_O' It's a conspiracy...Kekeke. n_n' This is most enjoyable, L_A, and your art is great! Keep up the awesome work!
 
Wow! I love it! Hino's head might POP bcause he's so mad. Lol, Nice job on the art!
 
Wow! You are a very talented artist. I used to make a comic series called Pokemon Pals where the stars were a Pikachu named Thunder. He has a ruffle of hair on his head like Richie's Sparky. A Squirtle named Squirt, and a Charmander named Charmer. I stopped making it though. :(
Anyway great job on the comic. I love it. ;)
 
Well, I have to say, it is good. But I think you copied me. I was the first in our family to do comics. You're a copier. I hope I can forgive you for that...




Just kidding Melissa. This rocks. I like the shading in it. Super cool...

It would be better if there was a filter that made the comic look more like a comic - you know, with all the dot look. I haven't been able to do that in Photoshop yet. There's a way though... I've seen it...

Keep continuing this! Don't be lazy! T . T

EDIT: Sorry for double posting for about two seconds of your life, if you even saw it. I don't know why I typed this, I felt guilty.
 
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It's been ages since I've updated, ne? Well, between me being lazy, and PokeCommunity server problems, it took forever. Thankfully, I have great fans and comments to sustain the thread! ^-^

All of your comments are wonderful! And Skitty101, that comic of yours sounds cute. ^.^ Anywhoo, thanks to all of you for reading so far! And to thank you even more I have another long chapter of eight pages! XD

I've also added some profiles of characters to the front page. Because I can. ^^ A note about this chapter: the Dunsparce in this chapter never noticably opens his mouth when speaking. This is explained on the first post of this thread. ^.^

Here's Chapter 4: "Is that a 'Dumb'sparce?"

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Enjoy.
 
I seriously can't believe I haven't replied to this thread earlier. <.< This comic/manga/whatever is simply awesome! =D I think the characters' personalities are what appealed to me the most in this comic. The plot seems to have started off nicely and your drawing style looks very professional.

Dune's personality seems to fit a Dunsparce very well, and the way you drew him is just too darn cute! <3

Keep it up, Light_Azumarill.
 
OMG! i cant beleive i missed this latest chapter!! Teddy is a meanie! its verry verry cute! cant wait for the next!
 
Nyah, can't believe I haven't posted here yet. ~_~ Sorry, Melissa, the impending doom that is school start kind of distracted me, and then I forgot. .__. Don't go thinking that I hadn't read it, though. (I've already done that like four or five times. xD)

Anyway, I love it! I mean come on, it's got a Dunsparce and a ticked-off Hino in it (He's so darn cute when he goes all angry. xD), how could I not love it? =D Oh, and I love Dune's personality too, especially that calm expression during the whole berry argument. ^^ Waru's betrayal was a nice touch too, the scale was quite a bit larger than I had expected. Keep at it. ^-^
 
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