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    You've just moved to Calforn Town when you wake up in tense heat.
    You discover that the heats source was a fire outside.
    Quickly,you run outside and go to your mom.
    The firemen say it wasn't much of a fire and you should stay somewhere else for now. You decide to stay with Helen,your cousin in Daltord City.
    After 3 nights at Helen's place,you head back home.
    You run into Prof. Malkart on the way. He says he has a gift for you,But he left it in his lab. So he tells you to visit him in his lab in a little while.
    When you visit him you find poke-chaos in his lab.
    You calm them down,and as a thanks from Prof. Malkart,You receive your first pokemon! Running out of Calforn Town,you run into Alex[If you chose a boy character]or Zack[If you chose a girl character].
    They congradgulate you on getting your first pokemon and shows you how to cath one. After that,he/she gives you 5 pokeballs.
    After that you head out to Daltord city. After battling a couple trainers you arrive there. There,you say hello to Helen and head to the pokemon center.
    After healing your pokemon,you head out for Mallran city.
    You run into XXXXXXX on the way.[The seven x's mean your rival].He challenges you to a battle.
    You also battle more trainers on the way to Mallran city. One of them say that they'll become champion one day and then run off.
    Others say there's someone strong in Mallran City. The person they're talking about is a gym leader-who also happens to be your older brother.
    You finally arrive in Mallran City. You also find your brother waiting for you. He says to meet him in the back of his gym.
    When you get to him,He's quite a challenge. You take him out with your partner.
    He awards you with the Crumble Badge!
    You also can use Rock Smash,HM 06!
    After saying bye to your brother,you head out for Valtanner Town.
    At the gate to Valtanner Town,you find two goons who call themselves Team Junx.
    They say back off and they have to do a major project at the gym.
    They run into Valtanner Town and leave you helplessly outside.
    Then When you think there's no hope,a helicopter arrives and picks you up. You find Prof. Malkart in the helicopter.
    He says that he's concerned about that Team Junx.
    They've been stealing pokemon and just causing mayhem.
    Prof. Malkart drops you off in Valtanner Town and tells you to stop those people.
    It doesn't take long to find them. They're heading into the gym when Looker from sinnoh arrives and stops them dead in they're tracks.
    You go into the gym and find the gym leader-Steve,away from the gym. The man there tells you he went to visit the other gym leader in Balcrang Town.
    You Walk all the way up to route 510 when Trent comes up to you and offers to surf you to the gates of Balcrang Town you say yes of course then you're at the gates when a guy says that he gave his brother the keys to the gate to Balcrang Town. He asks you to get the keys so you walk back to Balcrang Town when Trent walks up to you and asks why you're in such a rush. You tell him and he offers to fly you there.
    You say yes and he takes you to Mallran City and then you head off.
    You find his brother looking worried. He says he lost the keys to Balcrang Town. But he gives you the itemfinder to look for it. After you find it he says you have to deliver it to his brother. All of a sudden,before he can thank you a GIANT bird pokemon lifts you and drops you to the gates of Balcrang Town. You hand over the keys.
    Then the guy opens the door to Balcrang Town.
    It takes a while to find Steven because everone is crowding the gym.
    He says he wanted to say hello to Archie-nicknamed ''The Bad attituded Gym Leader''.


    More coming soon!

    Screenshots coming.
     
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    I'm not sure what you're doing posting this in Other Cards, but it seems you're writing a plot for a potential game. I'll go ahead and move it to the "Plot and Story Idea Space" in the Game Development section and see how it works out from there
     
    You seem to be spamming your own thread. Great job there, champ >_>

    Other than that, you seem to have some good ideas down here. Parts of it don't make sense, though (what's all that random stuff about keys?), but I think you can make this work. What worries me is that you don't seem to have actually done anything. Have you tried making a region map for your ideas? If not, I could help you there, but you'll need to start mapping/scripting or spriting something before interest picks up. :)
     
    You seem to be spamming your own thread. Great job there, champ >_>

    Other than that, you seem to have some good ideas down here. Parts of it don't make sense, though (what's all that random stuff about keys?), but I think you can make this work. What worries me is that you don't seem to have actually done anything. Have you tried making a region map for your ideas? If not, I could help you there, but you'll need to start mapping/scripting or spriting something before interest picks up. :)

    I have about 35 percent of the map drawing done havent wrote in a while wont be on for a while either if you private message me,dont expect a message back sooner than september 3rd

    I have Framtor city havent wrote it yet
     
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    >_< You can take screenshots in windows for free. Press the prt scr button on your keyboard (next to the F keys), then just type Ctrl + V in paint. And there is your screenshot. If you are on a laptop, sometimes you have to press Fn + Printscreen.
     
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