Pokemon: Dark Worlds

Sakim

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Dark Worlds

    Woo..... Yet another comic by me the spriter Sakim.......

    Chapter One: Team Rocket's back again!?!?
    Episode One
    Episode Two
    Bios coming soon.....

    Credits:
    Imageshack
    VG maps
    Spriters Resource
    Coronis
    Pokesho
    Mateo
     
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    Hey! It looks pretty good! I can't wait for episode2!
     
    Thanks episode two will be up later.
     
    its ok i mean the speech bubbles could be better and the red rocket sprite doesnt look right to me
     
    How does the Red Rocket sprite not look right to you?
     
    it is to bright it stands out to much i can make a red rocket sprite for you if you like
     
    Make me one and I'll see how it goes...
     
    Episode 2 is up! How do you think that he will get past the piano?

    EDIT: Sorry for DP I thought I pressed edit....
     
    i think you should use these

    red rocket sprites
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Dark Worlds


    please if used give credit
     
    no thanks I like mine better.
     
    poke_spriter said:
    i think you should use these

    red rocket sprites
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Dark Worlds


    please if used give credit
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    Yeah his are much better,
    I like the comic but...Those jail sprites..I dont remember them being in FR/LG and im sure I saw them in a RPG Maker game....Ahh well.
    One thing..Episode 2 frame 3 he wouldent actually see the lights being off till he got to the doorway. Also you should use proper Pokémon text boxes and fonts (That might be a Pokémon font but it looks like Arial to me...)
     
    Dashiel said:
    Yeah his are much better,
    I like the comic but...Those jail sprites..I dont remember them being in FR/LG and im sure I saw them in a RPG Maker game....Ahh well.
    One thing..Episode 2 frame 3 he wouldent actually see the lights being off till he got to the doorway. Also you should use proper Pokémon text boxes and fonts (That might be a Pokémon font but it looks like Arial to me...)
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    The jail sprites were ripped from pokesho by me....He saw the end of the hall get darker so he assumed the lights were off. I like the text boxes I use because they're fast and easy to make. Oh yeah the font is Verdana 7. Is that a pokemon font?
     
    They're short, and instead of doing things like saying "black haired guy" in the text bubbles, you could give them tails that point at who's talking.
     
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