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Pokemon Dimension

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"Good Idea Scott." ally said as she gave nurse joy the mudkip. "It'll be alright but i might have to keep it over night." Nurse joy said as she went into another room. Ally went and got some cocoa and sat down between Ali and Scott. "So, what should we do next? maybe try challenging a gym leader? that'd be fun. oh, and we could enter contests! We could have so much-" She was interupted, when the lights went out. They heard voices.."Sh...They dont know we're here!" Shut up! they'll hear us!" "Im in charge not you." "Just because your an admin.." "Ya. Admin, lets see if they've got any good pokemon." One voice sounded liike a girl, the other a boy. "Shh!" She girl said. "We're doing this for Archie, you know how happy he'll be once we get some pokemon?" "No, he didn't want us to steal pokemon!" The boy disagreed. Ally kept quiet.
 
Scott quitly and stealthly walked over to Ally and slowly touched her shoulder when KAPOW! Ally punched Scott "OW!" Scott said quitly "It's me!" Scott said as he got up "sorry." Ally said she was a little embarased "Why dont we just use our Pokemon and beat the living snot out of them!" Scott said as he was getting an idea.
 
"Sorry about that Scott." Ally said. "go Zane, Lileep, and silcoon."Ally whispered. "Do you hear that?" The girl said. "Ya, I can im not deaf." The boy said. The lights came on. The people were like ten feet away! "Im Shelly!" the girl said. "Team Aqua's cutest Admin." "And Im...bob." The boy said ( I couldn't think of any other name!) "GO Poochyena!" Shelly said. "Zane, Swords Dance! Silcoon Harden, Lileep water gun!" Ally commamned.
 
"This is too easy..." Scott said "Torch Flamethrower, Treecko Leaf Blade, Sonic Poisen Fang, and Dratini use Thunder!" Scott said as his Pokemon let out a fury of strong attacks against Aquas Pokemon "Okay time to play hardball" Bob said as he let out his 2 most powerful Pokemon "Go Carvanna! Go Dustox!" Bob said as his 2 Pokemon came out and they deafeated Treecko, Dratini, and Sonic "Great everyone of my Pokemon are down except Torch and hes barely standing up..." Scott said as he heard something coming from outside "TEAM AQUA YOU JERKS!" the voice said it sounded like a male then a boy about Scotts age jumped in throught the window "I cant believe your trying to take over the Pokemon Center!" the boy said "And who are you, you little brat!?" Shelly said "The names Jake..." Jake said as he pulled out 3 pokeballs "Go Squirtle! Go Takua! Go Sandshrew!" Jake said as a Squirtle, Makuhita, and a Sandshrew emerged "Your through!" Jake said "Sandshrew use Sand-Attack! then Takua use Vital Throw!" Jake said as his Makuhita threw Bob and Shelly out the door "Who are you?" Scott asked as Jake turned to look at Ally "So what's a beutiful girl like you doing in a place like this?" Jake asked charmingly.
 
Ally blushed. "Me,? I'm traveling with my friends thank you. and why are you here, Jake?" She asked. She returned all of her pokemon except Lileep. When Nurse Joy came back. "I got the lights back on, my pokemon center! What happened?" She asked.
 
Ali looked to Ally and Scott, and so two Aquas right in front of them! Ali gasped, "Whoa! This was pretty unexpected, go Tor-… No… PICHU! GO!"
"Pichu PI!" Pichu ran up to Poochyena, giving it a huge headbutt. "Move out of the way!" Ali yelled, Lileep's watergun slammed right into Pichu. "Oh no! Return Pichu, go Wingull! Use water gun!"
 
"The names Jake like i said and iv been stuck her for 2 we- i mean moved here about 2 weeks ago!" Jake said unsure what to say next "um...uh...see my Squirtle?" Jake asked.
 
"I thought you would be on some Team's side." Ally said, "Nice to meet you Jake. Im Ally, Thats Scott, that Ali, and thats Kris." Everyone waved. "Hi there, "Kris said. "So you got here two weeks ago? we arrived here like...I dunno a couple weeks ago to." ally told him.

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Alright, Its kindof hard to have two characters, anybody wanna control Kris?
 
Hey Sapphire just get rid of Kris if you dont want her, she wont be missed or anything!

"Your not from here are you!" Jake said in a convincing mood "Well i came here because iv lost everything...my family...they were killed because some goons wanted there new technology discovery...Pokemon Dimension..." Jake said as he looked at Ally "So i used there machine and sent myself here...i crashed the machine before i left so they couldnt repair or take the machine! but im guessing Jim fixed it up right?" Jake asked "Yeah, your right Jake." Scott said (he was jeleous of Jake because he tried to make a move on Ally) "Well at least them suits dont got it!" Jake said with a smile "so wanna come sit over here with me?" Jake asked Ally "No she dont!" Scott said in a protecting way. 'ooohhh crud...what did i just do...' Scott thought to himself.
 
Aww, that's a bit mean, don't ya think?

"Haha, you got a think for Ally?" Ali asked, out loud. Suddenly, the spotlight seemed to be on him. "Well, everyone's waiting for an answer! Get it out in the open!" Ali said, chuckling. Pichu stared at Jake, looking very insecure. He kept checking his back, to see if Torchic was going to jump out and take all of his pokemon food.
 
Alright....Kris just...never happened.....


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Ally blushed This is kinda wierd, I don't think this has ever ever happened. She thought to herself. She looked to Ali, to Scott to Jake. Why is Scott trying to like...protect me? Jake's not a bad guy, at least as far as I know. She squirmed. She had no idea what to do. "Um....You guys...lets just....um...Do something else? Wanna?" She said trying to get away from the 'arguement soon to follow' kinda thing. Come on, lets just do something, anything! please...comeon guys, I dont want to make enemies. She continued to think.
 
"Okay!" Scott said in a better mood, he didnt like Jake because of his "nice guy" personallity "So whats wrong with him?" Jake whispered in Allys ear "Is he your boyfriend or something?" Jake asked and looked at Ally.
 
Ally blushed, this time she could feel it. "No," She said a little loud, but quieted down. "He's not my boyfriend, he's just my friend and happens to be a boy." Oh, this is just wierd, Ive never ever thought of Scott as a boyfriend. She thought. "Alright,"She said piping up back to her casual 'hyperness'. "Lets do somethin! Any ideas?" She asked as she looked around. Her eyes fell on Scott. I guess, some people must think were like.....ya, Just because Ive known him for like forever and he's like my best friend doesnt mean anything! ANYTHING! She tried to get the thought out of her head.
 
Scott sat down next to Jake "So, Your not an evil demented stalker person are ya?" Scott asked Jake "Nope!" Jake said with a smile "I think us two are gonna be good friends!" Jake said "Well, sorry about earlier." Scott said "Nah, its okay! happens!" Jake said "Well its like 7:30 we should just stay here for the night." Scott said "and tommorow we can go be rejected by Norman for a battle and help Wally catch his Ralts!" Jake said in a sarcastic voice "Maku!" Takua said tugging on Jakes sleeve "What is it?" Jake said and the second Jake turned his head, Takua took Jakes chips "Hey! oh, well..." Jake said as he started to laugh at how Takua got his chips.
 
there are two Jakes? *shrugs* okay...
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" Lets eat! shall we?" Ally asked. "Im hungry. I bet my pokemon are too. " She turned her head and Nurse Joy came out with the Mudkip. "Here you go dear, Its all better now. " She smiled, Ally took it into her hands and gave it a nice big hug. "Aww...my lil Muddykip. ^^ Im gonna treat you well.." She cradled it.
 
Jake was just talking after he answered Scott! ^_^;
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"That Mudkip sure looks healthy!" Jake said "You can tell because its shade of Blue is so...blue!" Jake said as he looked behind him to make sure Takua wasnt coming back for seconds.
 
oh..okay, I knew that! ^^;

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"Ya, It sure is blue!" Ally said as she squeezed it. "Its soo cute! This dimension isnt so bad after all! Its pretty nice. OOPS!" Mudkip had droppen down and went and sat right on Jakes lap. "MUUDkip! KIP! KIP!" It said happily. Ally giggled. "It likes you alot! ^^" Ally thought for a moment I think Ive seen Jake before...most likely at a store or something...She looked at Scott. I wonder if Scott knew Jake, or if he doenst like him at all....
 
'I cant belive Jake...he probly came here just to annoy me...' Scott thought to himself he had knew Jake before about 6 years ago...

(flashback)

"Im sorry Scott, but i cant decide what my mom and dad want to do!" Jake said as he looked up from the swing "Well you're like my best friend Jake! Why do you have to leave?" Scott asked impatiently "Because...i have too." Jake said as he got up from the swing "Well! i dont want you too leave! ill miss you buddy!" Scott said as Jake started to walk away "You cant leave!!!" Scott said as Jake turned around and punced Scott right in the stomach "Owww..." Scott said weakly as he fell to the ground "Im sorry..." Jake said as he ran away with tears in his eyes...

(back to the present)

'I know now that Jake ran away after he hit me because he knew i wasnt going to let him leave...ever...i guess i was mad at him because he was leaving...i guess i should forgive him...it was my fault after all...' Scott thought to himself as he looked down at Torch.
 
Everyone's so quiet... Ally thought as she got up. "Its getting pretty late..Im gonna get to bed. Return! Mudkip!" As Mudkip returned she layed down on a couch and quickly fell asleep...z

*in Ally's Dream...*

"Huh? where am I? Its really dark...where am I?" "No one's here....your all alone...nobody likes you...you have NO friends...." "NO! no! nO! I have friends! I have Scott Ali, and Jake too! I have pokemon to!There my friends!" "No they are not! There just using you!" "No...no...n.o..no...this is just a dream!" "Yes, but it can quickly become reality! Have you not forgotten pokemon was just a dream?" "Leave me alone!" She runs away. The voice trails behind.."You are alone..but I will never leave!"

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Ally squirmed around, trying to wake up, but something didnt let her.
 
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"Ally?…" Ali got up, quietly. It was very early in the morning, Ally was squirming from side-to-side. He thought he had heard something, but it turned out… It was just her. Since he was up, he decided to stay up until the sun rose, "What's the point? It's not like I'm gonna be able to get any sleep now, anyways…" He walked out the door, looking out at the violet sky, flashing with flames bursting every way possible. "I thought the fire would've died down by now… But it's only gotten stronger… Something isn't right… I have a feeling this is more than what we think it is… Get rejected by Norman? I'd like to see him beat the heck out of Scott… I know I really shouldn't be saying that, but something just isn't right about him… If this Jake kid is here… Anyone could be… Anyone at all…"
 
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