Pokemon Dream.

[Chazzy]

notsure: that was completely off topic, don't spam others threads....

Matt: Not bad, not bad at all, but grammer and spelling is an issue, i can understand why hehe, just a few things, in one screen it says: Here you can found a team rocket leader (well alone those lines) it should be, Here you can find a team rocket leader.

The screen that says: Hey Matt, Come here, we learn you how you can stole of her's pokemons ! it should be, Hey Matt, Come here, We'll teach you how you can steal her pokemon !

good luck !

 

[ShadowKP1]

Nice screen but follow what Chazzy is saying on grammar.

 

[Matt]

OK , thx i will fix it.I forgot about past steal - stole , find - found -.-'.
Here are new screens(i think with good grammar)

After team rocket stole pokemon

Same as above ;)

plz replies!

thx , Matt.

 

[The Dash]

Looks much better with correct spelling and grammer now dosent it? :)
On another hand your font seems a bit..weird..

 

[Matt]

Yes i will fix it tomorrow , and then shows u the battle system screen , what im working for.

thx , Matt.

 

[sketch]

Very nice, Matt.Looks very good.Nice idea as well!

 

[WHALESDUDE]

Daaang! Nice job there! I find it really cool that you're learning english :D Are you going to be making custom pokemon or will you keep the good old ones?

 

[allen2003]

I like some of the maps and others are weird but goodjob!

 

[Matt]

Im not sure about the pokemons , but i think there'll be all old pokemons + some custom.
Here is the screens i promised ^^

Start Battle

Ash send out stolen pokemon

Battle.

Zubat uses Lech Life

Bulbasaur Win
And now some ingames screens:

Test ;)

Same as above.
U see is very poor BS , but im still working on it.I must change the Ash hero in BS to Ash rocket hero , and must add Zubat's level.
PLZ Comments ;)

thx , Matt.

 

[The Dash]

Wow really nice style of CBS there. Looks like the normal one but with more..erm..Harmonic colors.
Anyway Matt has said that I can be the "official" english fixer-upper type guy for the game so uh..yay lol.

 

[dude256]

Quite an original idea you have there, playing as the bad guy. Great concept Matt.

 

[Matt]

yes thx dashiel for want to help me!
next screens:

Catch :P

Stealing pokemon

comments plz :P

thx , Matt.

 

[The Dash]

Hmmm the map is very bland...try making it smaller or adding more stuff

 

[Matt]

i forget add its map is from my old pokemon game(i've made this year ago ,when i was very bad in mapping :P)

 

[ShadowKP1]

Like the stealing pokemon screens. Great job.

 

[Rubypoke]

You grammar is weird. Its 'Mark has caught you;, not 'Mark has catch you.'. The grammar mistakes put me off the game. The letters are also in weird places.

Once thats fixed, ill like it more, other than that, its very good how its coming along. Good luck with it. ;)

 

[The Dash]

Ruby poke its because hes from another country. Go easy on him,
atlest he is motiated enough to learn english.

 

[Matt]

im from poland , i have 15 years , and im study english well , sorry for my grammars.In the demo all error will be fixed by Dashiel(thanks).
Here are the 2 new (wild) battle system screens ( i've change ash color , because ur normal , blue ash before u go to TR.)

start battle

same as above.

comments plz.

thx , Matt.

 

[Bruno1440]

Nice pics man i think you should continue this game!I think you should edit the background! keep up! :)

 

[Matt]

thx , but what background u mean?
Tommor maybe i will show you the Battle in avi or gif!

thx , Matt.