Pokemon: Dusk of shadows.

[ranger of almia]

So i got an idea for a hack an it goes something like this.

In the years after Brendan and may defeated team aqua and team magma things where nice until one day mysteriously dusk came slightly darker and earlier each day until one day a group calling them selves "The Dusk" appeared and told the hoenn region that they where going to continue the progression of dusk until day was night unless that got one thing,Rayquaza. soon after there announcement spies of team dusk have been implanted into city's to make sure there wouldn't be a rebellion. But sure enough another team formed of renegade magma and aqua officials and just trainers formed to stop the dusk. One of the spies overheard teammates and reported it to the leader Micheal.Once heard about this Civil war broke out and now, Even the most peaceful city's are now war stricken and the only hope is a mysterious young man. This person is determined to stop the dusk from succeeding.

so how do you guys like it?Tell me of any other things i could add or editing so do constructive criticism.

 

[Blazichu]

You'll need to add some more information if you want to keep this open.

 

[Vrai]

If you've just got an idea, you probably should have put it in the Storyline Help thread.

It's not a bad idea, btw.