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Pokemon DuskShadow

Gmack

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon DuskShadow

    Made with RPG Maker XP and Pokemon Essentials 2010.
    (not really sure if this belongs here in the beginner's showcase, but i guess..)
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    yeah, i saw you skip down here.
    WARNING! May contain vile material AWESOMENESS!
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    Releases:

    Credits:
    Poccil - Pokemon Essentials
    4th Gen. Matt's resource kit - .. who do you think?
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    Nintendo & Game Freak - Pokemon
    Kyledove/Kymotonian - Tiles
    DonLawride - Bethment Forest
    PokeRemixStudio.Floatzel - Music
    VG Music - Music

    SUPPORT US!!! c:
     
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    This is looking alright. I like how you called Professor Oak an immigrant. That's classy, my friend.

    I only have a few problems/questions: will you be changing the main character's Overworld sprite? It's a little bland, don't you think?
    As for problems, well- Denvlair. That's a little hard to say and isn't exactly aesthetically pleasing. I mean, Telemoth sounds awesome (sounds kinda similar (not in a copied sort of way, though) to Telmar from the Narnia books. I like it), but Denvlair and Arvenez don't really seem to fit with it.

    But, you know, it's up to you, I guess.

    This is looking alright. I like how you called Professor Oak an immigrant. That's classy, my friend.

    I only have a few problems/questions: will you be changing the main character's Overworld sprite? It's a little bland, don't you think?
    As for problems, well- Denvlair. That's a little hard to say and isn't exactly aesthetically pleasing. I mean, Telemoth sounds awesome (sounds kinda similar (not in a copied sort of way, though) to Telmar from the Narnia books. I like it), but Denvlair and Arvenez don't really seem to fit with it.

    But, you know, it's up to you, I guess.
     
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    And I shall follow it. GL
     
    Well, i accept your constructive criticism, and I can tell you, everything i did with names and towns and stuff, i came up with, so just to let you know..
    But i'm sorry to say i can't really help sucking at spriting, so that player sprite isn't gonna be changed. After all, this is a solo project.
    Well, I guessed that you came up with it. That's why I brought it up. I spend a lot of time proofreading fiction, and I've read probably a good seventy manuscripts for fantasy novels that just sound terrible because the places are named horribly.

    As for the spriting, I can't really say that's an excuse. I'm working on a solo project, and my spriting isn't too spectacular, but I'm working on it. That's what you have to do. Work on it. You can't just give up because you're not great at it.
     
    You're very welcome, my good man. You've got a very good attitude there. Luck you wish, sir, a wish of fish.
     
    I'll possibly make you a trainer, and over-world sprite if you wish.
     
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