FireRed hack: Pokemon Ecru

[Ty2]

Okay, I'm a new hacker in this community and I'm not very good at scripting so if anyone wants to help me with that then you can just PM me or post on this thread. This is my first started hack and I'm planning on trying to finish this one. So please give me constructive criticism and some advice on what to do to make my maps, script, or anything else better.

Storyline
You have moved to Mirico Town and wake up in your room full of unpacked boxes, ready to be a Pokemon Trainer. After you get your Pokemon from Prof. Oak, the sky turns dark and you try to start your journey. A gray Pokemon with a large pink tail stands in the middle of the town. Team Rocket stands behind the Pokemon as it attempts to destroy the whole town. This Pokemon can speak? No way.

As that problem is finished and is not the last, you meet some more friends in your journey including Brendan from the Hoenn Region who has become the first Gym Leader in the Rektor Region. Soon he will become your friend, not rival and will pop up in different spots asking about your Pokemon. Your typical rival is very competitive towards you. He plans on helping you with the Team Rocket situation as these crimes have gone on far enough.

Screenshots/Videos(Might Be Edited)

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Maps (Might Be Edited)

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ALANO CITY

MIRICO TOWN

ROUTE 1

PARONIE CITY

ROUTE 3

Features

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~Three new starter Pokemon: Bagon, Larvitar, and Beldum.
~New gym leaders
~New Elite Four
~New towns
~New Rival
~And MORE

Userbars
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To Do List
Alpha
First Gym Leader

Alphas/Betas
None yet.

Bugs/Glitches
Will be said when the Alpha is released.

Team
Ty2(ME)Mapping, Scripting, Storyline, Tile Inserting, etc.
Sinta12: Userbar Creator​

 

[chrunch]

What's the point of the screens if they're not current?

 

[Flandre Scarlet]

Hmmm, I also agree with crunch. I would like to see some new screenshots. Storyline seems decent, but your mapping needs working on. Something about those maps just don't appeal to me... but good luck with it.

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

Hint: You should give us some screens that show us what you HAVE changed and not what you HAVEN'T.
Good luck with it!

 

[558122_DG]

Hint: You should give us some screens that show us what you HAVE changed and not what you HAVEN'T.
Good luck with it!

That and making multiple doors right beside eachother was a bad idea, I think you should stick with one door. The player's default house's windows are messed up, you should look into that. Other then that the overworld edit can use some touching up on as well, everythingelse looks tiptop to me :)
Good luck.

 

[Lord Varion]

Some of the bulidings have tile errors
e.g the pokemon center and the players house(if that is )

 

[Ty2]

@Flandre & Chrunch & Tropical: Sorry if you guys took it the wrong way, but I meant not current as in might be edited, but I will change it to might be edited.

@558122_DG: I put two doors on the Pokemon Center because it would lead to a different room, but thank you for pointing it out. If I wasn't intending on making another room then I would've changed it right away. :D
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I've changed these towns from what you all have told me that do not look good. Please tell if there are other errors.

MIRICO TOWN

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THE STARTER POKEMON PICTURES OF THE GAME

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The third town will be up for review by tomorrow. Thanks for the pointers guys :D.

 

[TheRichar]

I like the storyline, preatty simple actually, but of the starters thing, I had the Idea that the starter you choose cant be found anywere else but larvitar, and bagon do (I think beldum too right?), for example, in fire red, if you choose charmander you wont find another one... somewhere. and for the hero OW sprite, I think he needs more shading. Anyway, good luck with this :D

 

[Sinta12]

This hack looks fun! I can't wait to try it when a beta comes out! :)

 

[panthers4091]

Make sure you change beldum's moveset, all he learns is take down.

Good luck with your hack!

 

[Ty2]

@TheRichar: I'll make sure to get to that before I let the Alpha out. :D

@Sinta12:Thank you :D. And I'll let out an alpha before the beta. The Alpha will probably go to the third gym. I just need some scripters or I'll figure out the scripting stuff by myself. :D

@panthers4091: Thanks for reminding me. I forgot all about that. And thank you. :D
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Here's the third town, PARONIE CITY!

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[Alpha_Spike]

Hey you should change Bagon with Dratini then the starters will be in number order: Gen 1, Gen 2, Gen 3

 

[Ty2]

@Alpha_Spike: I was thinking about that until I figured out Dratini only learns Wrap and it takes awhile for it to level up so I might change the evolution levels of them.

 

[Ty2]

UPDATES!
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Route 3 is now added!

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Yes I know I skipped Route 2, but I will get to it, it is the next thing on my to do list.

 

[Ty2]

I messed up the hero sprite in NSE and don't know how to get it back, also resulting in my hack being deleted from my desktop, I guess my parents probably cleaned out all the data from the computer while I was gone so it would go faster :\. I'll make a new hack since Ecru had much flaws to it in the first place. So don't give up hope in me yet guys! :)

Can a moderator please close this thread?

 

[jerk]

the maps look a bit empty for some reason?
also the hero sprite looks odd. good luck with this though :)