Pokemon Emerald: Legends in Hoenn (PG16)

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    Hey everyone! I decided to make my own Pokemon Emerald fanfic, mainly because I think Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza should have been given much more spotlight than either the game or the anime gave them. I've made a story with some familiar characters, such as May, Brendan, and Wally, and some original characters such as Alex and Steven's sister, Melany Stone. Its rated PG16 for comments made by certain characters, and there will be possible yuri scenarios and/or relationships in much later chapters. Anyway, for a start, here's the prologue. Oh, and I don't own pokemon and am in no way affiliated with Nintendo or Gamefreak.

    Pokemon Emerald: Legends in Hoenn

    Prologue:

    The Beginning of Legends​


    Melany Stone carefully read over the inscriptions with her flashlight, yet her hand was shaking with excitement. Melany was only 10, but like most 10 year olds in the world of pokemon, she was already having adventures of her own. Her adventures were different from most though. Any other child her age would probably either be home or getting their first pokemon and starting on a journey to try to become the Pokemon Champion. Not Melany though.

    Melany was the daughter of the presidetn of Devon Inc., as well as Steven Stone's little sister. She wasn't interested in pokemon in the slightest though. Or at least not training or raising them. She was decked out in the standard archeologist outfit with her brown shorts, vest, and hard hat. She loved visiting ancient ruins and trying to decipher the past. But she was doing that before she was 10.

    Today was slightly different. She was close to fully unlocking the secrets of Hoenn's most famous legendary pokemon, Groudon and Kyogre. These two are credited with creating the land and sea, but there wasn't much backing it up. But she was now reading ancient inscriptions that could easily fully explain the secrets of these two pokemon and Hoenn's, or even the world's, past.

    Melany was also with two other archaeologists today that she suggested her father invite along. Their names were Maxie and Archie. Maxie had been studying the legends of Groudon for several years, and Archie had been studying Kyogre. They were both in these ruins searching for clues to what happened with these two pokemon in the past.

    Between the three of them they managed to piece together missing parts of the inscriptions on the wall, but only Melany could understand them. She had seen similar inscriptions at other sites. They were by the same ancient race, who had apparently witnessed a great battle between Groudon and Kyogre. Melany deciphered the description...

    The great pokemon Groudon and Kyogre exist to maintain balance between the land and the sea. However, these pokemon could not agree on what was needed. They met in the crater of an extinct volcano, and began their earth shattering battle for domination. Neither Kyogre nor Groudon showed any signs of giving up, and whenever one of them seemed to tire, they became instantly re-energized. This went on for several days before three humans appeared, each holding a gem. One holding a sapphire, one a ruby, and one an emerald. The one holding the emerald raised it to the sky and called out the name "Rayquaza". Suddenly, a green dragon pokemon came down from the sky and began to do battle with the two fueding pokemon. However, Kyogre and Groudon still kept revitilizing. The other two held their gems toward Kyogre and Groudon, and drained their energy from them, sending them into an eternal sleep. Rayquaza sent them Groudon's body deep into the planet, while Kyogre's deep into the sea.

    Its job finished, Rayquaza left. The ruby and sapphire were hidden atop the highest place in Hoenn, where the spirits of pokemon come to rest. Should the Ruby ever make contact with Groudon, or the Sapphire with Kyogre, only the chosen one, wielding the Emerald, can put an end to the chaos what will ensue.

    "Interesting..." Maxie smirked, "I thank you for the help, miss Melany...you brought me closer to my dream than you could ever imagine..."

    Melany looked towards Maxie, "Wh-what? What do you mean?"

    "As interesting an account as that is...I have reason to believe that that Ruby will allow me to awaken and control Groudon...and now that I know where it is..." Archie stood up quickly.

    "You? Awaken Groudon? Not a chance...I'm going to awaken Kyogre and expand the seas...from the sea comes all life!" Maxie glared at Archie.

    "You are mistaken...life comes from the land...without land there is no life...and I will use Groudon's power to expand the land mass!"

    "No! Didn't you hear what that said?! You can't awaken them! They'll destroy all of Hoenn! If not the world!"

    Maxie and Archie laughed at Melany's plea, "Kyogre won't destroy anything unless I command it to! I will gather together individuals to support our cause to expand the sea and awaken Kyogre! We'll call ourselves...Team Aqua!"

    "Not a chance! I will create Team Magma and awaken Groudon!" With that, they both ran out of the ruins, leaving Melany behind...

    "They...they wouldn't really awaken them...would they? After all I said..." She brought her knees up to her chest, sobbing softly, "What have I done..."

    Two years later, Archie and Maxie successfully created Team Aqua and Team Magma. No one tried to stop them. No one tried to track them down. They were powerful and influential groups, determined to awaken the sleeping titans...Groudon and Kyogre...


    So...what do you think? >.>
    Review please! I have up to chapter 7 ready btw >.>
     
    That was very good. indeed. its a good start and a pretty well written acount of the legend. A great start. carry on! PS Check my fanfic its called team black adventures.
     
    Yay! A review! Thanks Link2005! And I'll take a look at it. Well, here's chapter 1. Its somewhat of an introductory chapter.

    Pokemon Emerald

    Chapter One:

    The Journey Begins: Enter Alex and May!​

    "Melany Stone, daughter of the president of Devon Inc., has been reported missing after having not been seen out of her home for almost two years. The famous archaeologist..."

    Alex suddenly lost interest in the tv in the pokecenter. He would have changed the channel, but there were other people watching it.
    "People go missing everyday..." , Alex thought to himself.
    "Why should it matter if some rich brat disappears anymore than if an average citizen disappears? Oh right, because stories like that get better ratings for the media..."

    Alex was an average looking 12 year old boy, just getting ready to start out as a pokemon trainer. He had just recently gotten his trainers card, and was currently in the Petalburg Pokemon Center on his way to Littleroot to receive his first pokemon. He was older than most beginner trainers, as he had no real interest in pokemon. He decided to study a bit though, more than most other trainers, and prepared some special equipment. Although he appeared average, short brown hair, brown eyes, and a slightly athletic looking build, he was fairly smart. He already had a pokedex, and downloaded information on all known species of pokemon. He was wearing a brown vest over a green shirt, pair of blue jeans, and a pair of running shoes. He had a belt strapped around his waist that had hooks for 6 pokeballs, his custom pokenav/pokedex on the opposite side, and a brown backpack for holding his items.

    Alex wasn't in the pokecenter to get his pokemon healed, mainly because he had none. He was taking a short break in Petalburg after spending a week getting through the Petalburg Woods. He was lucky getting through the woods, since there weren't many pokemon that could bother him in the woods and he stayed in the open by jumping down the high ledges. He determined from looking at a map that he should be able to get through to Oldale with little to no trouble and then from Oldale to Littleroot. He was actually fairly lucky, because if he ran into a wild pokemon he was stuck fending for himself.

    Alex left the pokemon center and started on his way out of the city. However, on his way out of the city he happened to hear something from one of the alleys, sounded like a fight.
    He looked down the alley and saw 3 teenagers picking on a green haired kid. Alex decided to check it out. The three teenagers had the kid cornered into a wall, and were taking turns throwing punches at him. They didn't notice Alex enter the alley though.

    "L-leave...me...a-a-lone..." the boy begged them.

    "Not a chance, Wood! Since your leaving soon we need to pound you extra!" The bully speaking threw another punch into the kid's chest. Alex could tell he was in a lot of pain.
    "Hey! Leave him alone!" he yelled to them. The three of them turned to face him.

    "Want to try to stop us?!" Alex backed away, holding his hands up as if surrendering.
    "N-now lets not do anything rash boys...I-I just don't think you should be picking on him!" The three of them sneered and started to move towards Alex.

    "I think you should join your little friend here then!" The one doing all the talking threw a punch at Alex, but as the bully made his assault, Alex's expression suddenly changed to that of a more determined one.

    Alex moved to the side slightly, the bully's fist just inches from his face. Alex wasn't overly strong, but he had good reflexes. Before the bully even had time to register what happened, Alex brought his fist up, connecting with the boy's chin, knocking him back slightly.

    "You're going to pay for that you little pest!"

    "Try me..." The bully backed up slightly, then charged at him. Alex quickly dropped to the ground, and shot his elbow into the boy's knee as he ran toward's him, causing him to fall over and miss Alex completely, and smashing his face off the ground.

    Alex turned to the other two, "Wanna try your luck? Your both what? 3? 4 years older than me? Shouldn't be too hard for you to take down a kid right? ...But I suppose your buddy's been thinking the same thing."

    The two looked at each other, then ran by Alex and out of the alley. The one Alex had been fighting soon got up and followed behind them, and Alex could have sworn he heard him crying. He quickly turned his attention to the kid.

    "You ok?" The boy slowly stood up. Alex could tell he was hurt, but nothing serious.

    "Y-yeah...I'm fine...thanks..."

    "Don't mention it. I can't stand bullies. Name's Alex, by the way."

    "I'm...I'm Wally." Alex nodded.

    "Do they pick on you often?" Wally nodded slowly.

    "Have you told the police? Or your parents?"

    "N-no...they'd just beat me up more...I'm moving in a few days anyway..."

    "You should learn to stand up for yourself...if you don't deal with your problems, they'll just get worse. Its a lesson I learned the hard way."

    Wally looked at him, "Your strong though..."

    Alex laughed, "Strong? Naw! Bullies just can't deal with people who try to stand up to them. They only go after whoever they think would be easy...anyway I have to go, I'm supposed to be heading to Littleroot to get my first pokemon. You should probably head home." Wally suddenly looked nervous.

    "N-no! They'll be waiting for me! I wish I had a pokemon...then they wouldn't pick on me..."

    Alex sighed, and looked back the way he came, "I really need to get to Littleroot..but..." , he thought, then looked back at Wally.

    "Tell you what, I'll walk you to your place. Those three are probably afraid of me at this point."

    "R-really? But...why would you help me?"

    "...Why should I need a reason to help someone? There's nothing to be gained from letting others suffer. Now come on."

    Wally nodded, and started to walk out of the alley and towards his home, Alex following behind him and keeping an eye out for those three. He doubted they'd try anything out in the open though, especially with him there. He knew he hurt them very little physically, but he might as well have smashed their pride with a sledge hammer.

    Wally soon stopped at a house near the other end of town, opposite the exit that'd lead Alex to Oldale.

    "This is my place...thanks for your help."

    "Anytime. Good luck on the whole moving thing by the way. Maybe you'll manage to get your own pokemon someday. Anyway, I really have to get going. See ya!"

    "Bye...and thanks again..."

    Alex turned and began walking back toward the other side of the city, where the exit to the route that leads to Oldale is. On his way he passed by the city's gym. Alex looked over the sign in front of the gym, it read, "Leader: Norman Maple." Alex thought to himself, "Despite this being the first gym I'll run across in my journey, it'll actually be the fifth I'll have to face as I recall. I hear this Norman guy is pretty good though..." Alex quickly ran toward the city's exit, he had lost time to make up for. Lucky for him, though, it was a relatively short distance from Petalburg to Littleroot. He planned to make a quick stop in Oldale though.

    Meanwhile...

    A 10 year old girl was riding in the back of a moving truck. She had short brown hair, but it went down to her shoulders on each side of her head, almost like a pair of drooping bunny ears. She was wearing a green bandana that she was almost never seen without, a red top with a white pokeball on the right side of it, a pair of black shorts and red shoes. She was May Maple, daughter of Norman Maple. As to why she was riding in the back of a moving truck...she was asking herself the same thing.

    "This was a stupid idea, mom...I swear these boxes are all going to fall on me if we hit another...", her thoughts were interrupted as the moving truck hit a bump causing the boxes to shift around her. One of the boxes stacked above her looked like it was just about ready to fall on her, so she moved to the other end of the truck, sighing.

    "We better get there soon...and I am never doing anything like this again...".

    The truck finally came to a stop, the boxes shifting around some more as the truck's brakes were applied. Shortly after stopping, the back of the truck was opened and May eagerly made her way out of the truck. As soon as she got out, her mother came out of their new home to greet her. The house didn't look like anything overly fancy, in fact the town seemed fairly small and the only building she saw worth noting was the pokemon lab, the only one in Hoenn. In addition to studying pokemon there, it was also where you went to get your first pokemon. May was actually contemplating getting one, since she was old enough to become a trainer now.

    "Oh honey, you must be exhausted from riding in the back of that truck!" her mother exclaimed as May climbed down out of the back of the truck. May's mother was a tall woman with brown hair, wearing a yellow dress.

    May sighed, "Thats one way of putting it...never doing that again..."

    "Isn't this town wonderful? Its quiet...peaceful...and not that far from Petalburg either! Why don't you come inside and check out our new home?" May's mother seemed to be ecstatic about moving here, but she herself wasn't overly excited. The town actually seemed kinda boring to her.

    She followed her mother into the house, and couldn't believe what she was seeing. There were a pair of vigoroth moving furniture around her house!

    "Umm mom...do you really think Vigoroth should be trusted to do all this?" Vigoroth was a white, ape/sloth-like pokemon with long claws on its hands and a lot of energy. Vigoroth didn't seem like a very intelligent pokemon to May though, and didn't see anyone giving them instructions...

    "They're doing all the work of moving everything into the house for us! Aren't pokemon movers convenient?" May's mother seemed to be in a state of pure bliss over everything and didn't seem to care about the Vigoroth. May wasn't half as excited as she was.

    "Oh May, you get your own room too! Your father bought you a new clock, it should be on the wall in your room but its not set. You should go set it." her mother continued. May decided it'd be best to just go along with whatever her mother said at this point, there was just no way for her to get through to her mother when she was like this.

    "Sure, mom." May went up the stairs and easily found her bedroom. It didn't seem to be anything special, but all her stuff was already there, including her computer. She decided to turn it on and make sure everything was ok on it. When she checked out the item storage feature though, she found there was a potion stored.

    "Huh? When did I put that there..." She double clicked on the potion, and suddenly a potion formed on a device next to her computer used to retrieve stored items.

    She shrugged, "Oh well, maybe I'll have a use for it soon enough..." She then opened her dresser and pulled out a large green belt pouch, that was actually more like a backpack worn about her waist. She put it on, with the pouch part of it behind her. The belt also had clips for a pokenav, pokedex, and 6 pokeballs in front, but she never had a need for them yet.

    She finally decided to set the clock hanging on the wall. Looking at her watch, she carefully set the clock to 10:35 AM. Her mother came into her room shortly after.

    "Oh good everything is put away neatly! Did you make sure everything was on your desk, dear?" May looked over at the desk her computer was on.

    "Yeah...everything's there..."

    "Oh! Good! You should go introduce yourself to the neighbours then!" Her mother then left the room and went back downstairs.

    May followed shortly, thinking to herself, "This is going to be one hectic day I can see it now..." .

    As May finally reached the bottom of the stairs, her mother called out to her yet again.

    "Oh, May! Hurry! They're showing Petalburg Gym on the news!"

    May quickly made her way over to the TV just in time to hear, "We bring you this news from outside Petalburg Gym." May's mother sighed.

    "I think your father was on, but we must have missed him..."

    "Oh, too bad." May replied, then left the house to look around town.

    In Oldale Town...

    "Mr. Norman, is it true that there have been talks of the Hoenn League getting involved in the disappearance of miss Melany Stone?"

    "I have heard no such talks, myself. But with criminal groups using pokemon around, the league may have to get more involved in public matters eventually."

    "Thank you, Norman. We bring you this news from outside Petalburg Gym." Alex rolled his eyes, yet another announcement about this Melany person.

    "If they're so **** worried about her why aren't they looking for her? **** media..." he said, mostly to himself. But his comments did not go unnoticed.

    "You seem to be quite interested in this...situation..." Alex looked over towards the source of the voice, and saw an older man wearing a brown overcoat.

    "...And you are?" The man grinned.

    "Detective Dirk. I've taken it upon myself to investigate this disappearance...and you are?"

    "...Alex. Wouldn't it make more sense to be searching in...say...Rustboro? Since, ya know, she lived there and all...?"

    "Why search Rustboro? I think I've found the best clue right here..."

    "...He doesn't honestly think..." Alex's began thinking to himself.

    "I believe you may have something to do with this! Yes, your actions are very suspicious indeed..."

    "...What a dork." Alex thought to himself, not amused by this "detective" in the slightest.

    "I'll be keeping my eye on you...Alex...don't leave town." With that, the detective left the Oldale Pokemon Center.

    "Don't leave town huh? Just try to stop me... Bah. I can see this guy is going to really become a nusiance in my travels. He suspects me?! Just because I'm not interested in hearing the media talk about her?!"

    Alex's thoughts were apparently being made more public than he thought, "Don't let that detective bother you. He accuses everyone of everything. Everyone just considers him a nusiance." the nurse behind the desk piped up.

    "I don't plan to. If he even tries to get in my way...I'll see what it takes to knock him down a few notches."

    Alex left the pokecenter and made his way toward the town's southern exit. It was a fairly small town, and thankfully he could see no sign of Detective Dork. He left the town, heading south toward Littleroot. He didn't get far, however, before he heard someone yelling. He ran off to see what it was...

    Back in Littleroot...

    "Oh! So your our new neighbour May Maple! Welcome to the neighbourhood, May!"

    "Thanks."

    May was visiting one of her neighbours, apparently it was Professor Birch's home. Or at least it was when he wasn't at the lab or doing field work. Which he was doing now.

    "We have a son around your age, May. He was excited to hear he'd be getting the chance to make a new friend. He should be upstairs." Mrs. Birch said. May nodded and went upstairs.

    May entered a bedroom that seemed like it'd belong to the woman's son, but there was no one there. She noticed there was a pokeball on the floor though.

    "I wonder if there's a pokemon in it...?" , she thought to herself, "Hmm...a quick peek couldn't hurt!" she giggled and walked over to the pokeball. She was just about to pick it up when someone yelled from behind her.

    "HEY!"

    She turned to see a white haired boy about her age wearing a green headband, black t-shirt, a pair of long black shorts, and a pair of black shoes.

    "Who do you think you are?!"

    "Oh uh...I'm your neighbour...May Maple..."

    "...Oh. So your the one who moved in next door. I figured you'd be a guy, since I heard a gym leader's kid was moving in next door."

    May twitched slightly hearing that, "And just why does a gym leader's kid have to be a boy?!" she thought to herself angrily. She then noticed him looking at the empty pokeball slots on her belt.

    "You don't have your own pokemon yet?" May shook her head.

    "Hmm...how about I go catch you one? ...Oh right I have to help my dad with some research...sorry. Maybe some other time."

    May nodded, "I'll leave you alone then." May left the Birch residence, and as she left she thought she heard someone yelling from the route north of Littleroot.

    She made her way to the town exit, and this time she definitely heard someone yelling. She ran out of the town, and didn't have to go far before she saw a man running from a very angry looking racoon-like pokemon. The man quickly climbed up a tree...but seemed to forget that this pokemon could climb trees. He then noticed May.

    "Hey! You! Help!"

    "Huh? I can't! I don't have a pokemon!"

    "Look, in that basket over there! There should be three pokeballs! They have pokemon in them! Use one of those!"

    May noticed the basket and ran over to it, and quickly grabbed a pokeball from it. She threw it near the racoon-like pokemon, and an orange chicken-like pokemon popped out. She remembered it as Torchic, one of the three starting pokemon.

    "Torchic! Use scratch!" The Torchic looked at May curiously, not used to taking orders and not having seen her before, but obeyed anyway. It leapt at the Zigzagoon that was climbing the tree, landing a scratch attack on its back. The Zigzagoon fell off the tree and ran off. May recalled the Torchic. The man in the tree breathed a sigh of relief and jumped down.

    "Thanks...I was researching the wild pokemon around here when suddenly that Zigzagoon jumped out at me...by the way I don't remember seeing you around here before. My name's Professor Birch."

    "I'm May Maple, I just moved to Littleroot."

    "Oh! Your May! A pleasure to meet you. I heard you don't have your own pokemon, but you seemed to handle yourself fine. How about I give you that Torchic you battled with?"

    May smiled brightly, "Really?!" Professor Birch nodded.

    "Of course. I already know your a qualified trainer from talking with your father, and there's only one other trainer coming by that I know of anyway."

    May was about to ask who the trainer was, when they heard someone yelling out in pain. May and Professor Birch went to investigate...and found the Zigzagoon from before latched on to Alex's arm, and Alex was trying to pull it off.

    "Let go already! My arm's not a chew toy!!" May and Birch couldn't help but laugh at the scene, and Alex finally noticed them.

    "Its not fun...oh! Er...hello professor..."

    "Greetings Alex...having a little trouble I see?" Alex sighed.

    "I made it this far without any problems whatsoever and then this Zigzagoon comes out of nowhere and bites onto my arm...and refuses to let go."

    The Zigzagoon then noticed Professor Birch. It finally let go of Alex's arm and ran after Birch! May quickly released Torchic again, and the Zigzagoon stopped in its tracks.

    "Torchic, use scratch!" Torchic leapt at the Zigzagoon, delivering another scratch attack. This was more than it could handle, though, and the Zigzagoon collapsed. Torchic started jumping up and down happily at its victory.

    "Way to go Torchic! You showed that racoon!" May yelled.

    "Your pretty good for someone just starting..." Alex commented.

    May smiled, "Thanks! My name's May Maple."

    "May Maple? As in...the daughter of Norman Maple?" May nodded.

    "...Your just getting your first pokemon though? I mean...you look like your older than I am. And I'm 12..."

    "Huh? I'm only 10..." Alex stared in disbelief.

    "She's only 10...? Sheesh. Quite the figure for a 10 year old...and whats with her hair?"

    May noticed him staring, "What?"

    "Errr..." Alex blushed slightly, "Nothing. Anyway, Professor, I'd like to get my starting pokemon now. If I can that is..."

    "Of course. Why don't we go back to my lab?" Alex and May nodded, and the three of them followed Birch back to his lab in Littleroot. Once they got there, Professor Birch placed the pokeball containing Torchic in some device to restore it to full health. Not that it was injured while fighting the Zigzagoon anyway, but he figured better safe than sorry.

    "Now, I'll need to see your training cards so I can put my stamp of approval on them." Professor Birch stated. May and Alex handed over their cards, and Birch stamped the corners of them with his personal marking, signifying that they had his approval and were given starting pokemon from his lab.

    "Now, May, Torchic is yours. Alex, you can pick from the remainign two, which are Mudkip and Treecko. Do you know anything about either of them?" Alex nodded.

    "I've been studying. Mudkip is a water type, small blue pokemon with a fin on its head. Treecko is a grass type, green lizard-like pokemon. I think I'll choose Treecko."

    "An excellent choice! Of course, all of my pokemon are good choices anyway. And I see you already have a pokedex."

    "Actually, its a pokenav. But I've made my own modifications to it. It has a built in pokedex, phone, as well as the standard functions of any pokenav."

    Birch smiled, "Ah, you seem to be quite well prepared for all this. You'll both make fine trainers I'm sure."

    Birch took Torchic's pokeball from the machine and picked up Treecko's pokeball as well, handing them to their new trainers.

    "Hey Alex! Why don't we have a quick fight?"

    Alex shook his head, "As much as I'd like to...it wouldn't be much fun at this point. Our pokemon only know very basic attacks. Maybe if we meet up again we can battle then." May sighed.

    "Alright then..." "Hey May, why don't you go visit my son Brendan? I'm sure he'd like that."

    "Sure! Maybe I could battle him instead!" Professor Birch chuckled.

    "Well I don't see why not, but just to warn you he's been helping me with my research for a while so he's pretty good. You can find him on Route 102, its north of Oldale."

    "Alright! I'll meet him there for a battle before I start my journey then!"

    May and Alex left the lab, and decided they'd travel together as far as Oldale since they were both going in that direction anyway. Alex didn't have any intention of making additional stops though, so they'd be going their separate ways once they reached Oldale. However, as they were passing through Route 101 on their way to Oldale, someone was watching them from the bushes...

    "Hmm...there's that Alex character..." Detective Dirk muttered to himself.

    "And if my suspicions are correct, then it would seem that his next target is May Maple...the daughter of the Petalburg gym leader Norman." Dirk chuckled to himself.

    "Yes its all clear to me now! This 'Alex' works for some sort of underground child pornography ring! They use Alex to befriend unsuspecting girls...and then kidnap them! Well me and my Poochyena will put a stop to that right now!"

    Alex stopped, "Did you hear that?"

    "Hear what?" May asked, staring at Alex quizically.

    "I thought I heard something moving through the bushes...could be a wild pokemon..." Alex reached for Treecko's pokeball, ready for a fight.

    "I think your being paranoid." Alex ignored her, and then suddenly out of the bushes jumped...Detective Dirk!

    "...Oh great. Its Detective Dork."

    "Thats Dirk, kid. And I'm on to you now! Don't worry Miss Maple, I'll protect you!"

    "...Protect me? From what?", May asked, not a clue as to what was going on.

    "From him!" Dirk pointed at Alex accusingly.

    "...You honestly think I'm a criminal?"

    "I KNOW your a criminal now! Go, Poochyena!" Dirk threw the pokeball about halfway between him and Alex, and a black pokemon that looked like a cross between a dog and a hyena pup came out, growling.

    "...If its a fight you want, its a fight you'll get. Go, Treecko!" Alex released Treecko from its pokeball for the first time, and it glanced around cautiously at its surroundings, its eyes resting on the Poochyena with a determined look on its face. Alex took out his pokenav and aimed it at the Poochyena to get an estimate of its strength. He knew Treecko was a level 5, as all pokemon received as starting pokemon were, and the Poochyena was level 6 apparently. Alex knew Poochyena were particularly weak, though, so he wasn't worried. No dumb detective was taking him in for no reason.

    "Treecko start off with a pound attack!" Treecko rushed toward the Poochyena, bashing it across the face with its tail. Poochyena already seemed like it was taking a serious pounding after the first attack.

    "Heh...so you have a pokemon now huh. No matter. Poochyena, tackle attack!" The Poochyena rushed toward Treecko, but the green lizard pokemon just stepped aside of the attack.

    "Treecko, hit it with another pound attack!" Treecko nodded in agreement and leaped toward the Poochyena, slamming its tail into the pooches back, slamming it into the ground. It didn't get back up either.

    "Dammit...this isn't over kid! Poochyena, return!" The detective called back his pokemon into its pokeball and ran off toward Oldale.

    "...Ok, what was that all about Alex?" May asked, still not sure what was going on. Alex returned Treecko to its pokeball.

    "Just a screw up of a detective...seems to think just because I don't like the news, I have something to do with the kidnapping of Melany Stone."

    "Wow, screw up is right..."

    "No kidding...anyway we're almost to Oldale." May nodded, and the two of them continued walking. It wasn't long before they reached Oldale town, and no sign of the detective either.

    "Well, be seeing you around May."

    "Yep. Bye Alex!" Alex started heading toward Route 103 while May started heading to Route 102, but then Alex remembered something.

    "Hey, May! Wait!"

    May turned to face him, "Huh? What is it?"

    "Are you taking the Hoenn League Challenge?" May nodded.

    "A tip then, the first gym is run by Roxanne. She uses rock type pokemon. According to my research her team consists of two Geodude and a Nosepass, which means it'll be a 3 on 3 battle. You started with a Torchic, so you might want to consider finding at least one good pokemon to challenge her with, or try to get your Torchic to evolve into Combusken, then it'll be a fighting type as well as fire and will learn Double Kick."

    "Wow...you sure know a lot. Well thanks. See ya!"

    "No problem. Later!"

    And with that, May and Alex, having just met, went their separate ways after starting their own adventures. What challenges await them along the way?



    Its probably one of the less interesting chapters. They get better as they go though *nod* By the way the next few chapters will be split into 2 parts to show their respective journeys.
     
    *peers about* I see a decent number of people looking but not many comments >.> Am I doing good? Bad? Or what? Anyway here's Chapter 2, Part 1.

    Disclaimer: I do not own pokemon and am in no way affiliated with Nintendo or Gamefreak. Now that that legal stuff is out of the way, on to the story!

    Pokemon Emerald

    Chapter Two (A):

    Adventures in Petalburg​

    "Zigzagoon, use tackle attack!" ,the other trainer yelled out. Alex's Treecko hardly seemed to consider the Zigzagoon a challenge. It took the hit and was knocked to the ground, but quickly got back up.

    "Treecko, finish it off with Absorb!" Treecko happily obliged, as the last of the Zigzagoon's energy was drained out of it, green bubbles of energy moving between the racoon pokemon and Treecko. The other trainer's zigzagoon collapsed as the last of its energy was drained from it, and the damage done to Treecko was restored.

    "Great job Treecko! All that extra training seems to have paid off." Alex recalled his Treecko to its pokeball, and the other trainer recalled her fainted Zigzagoon.

    "Wow...your Treecko is pretty tough..."

    "Thanks. Your Zigzagoon isn't half bad either." Alex passed this trainer before on his way to Oldale, but he didn't have any pokemon to challenge her with then. Her only pokemon was a Zigzagoon.

    The battle won, Alex once again found himself entering the city of Petalburg.

    "Alright...I should probably heal Treecko up at the pokemon center...maybe spend the night at a hotel since its getting a little late, and before I head out tomorrow I should probably stock up on supplies a bit at the local pokemart. I probably could have gotten here quicker if all those trainers didn't want to fight...oh well. I'll get to sleep early and get an early start tomorrow. Beats camping out anyday."

    Alex made his way to the pokecenter, and handed his treecko's pokeball to the nurse once he got in. It only took a few seconds for his Treecko to be healed, which was his only pokemon still. He hadn't seen any pokemon yet that interested him, and he wasn't one for collecting either. He knew of at least one pokemon on the next route he wanted to catch, though. He decided to quickly duck over to a nearby restaurant for a quick meal. The whole time, though, he was being watched.

    "I bet that kid makes a lot of money from turning in celebrity daughters...", Dirk muttered to himself, "but soon his days in the child pornography business will be over! I, the great Detective Dirk will put an end to him! ...Tomorrow. For now...I observe." Dirk went back to observing Alex's every move through his binoculars.

    "He needs to contact his boss at some point...and when he does I'll catch him in the act."

    Alex sat down at one of the tables in the restaurant after ordering a club sandwich, fries, and a soda.This was the first thing he had to eat since leaving Petalburg for Littleroot earlier that day, and he was starved. As he ate, he thought about what he'd need to restock before setting out for Rustboro tomorrow.

    "Funny" , he thought, "I left from Rustboro, and now I'm going back there. Interesting how things work out like that." As Alex looked out the window next to him, he could have sworn he saw a red light in some bushes nearby. When he looked again though, it was gone.

    "I bet that detective is still tailing me...wonder what he meant when he said he was going to 'save' May? ...Probably figures I intended to kidnap her. Well, if I was going to do that, one would think I would have. And he certainly wouldn't make a good hero. He ran as soon as I beat his Poochyena. What if I WAS going to kidnap her? He would have been no help at all. Wonder how he became a detective anyway..."

    Alex finished his soda and tossed his garbage in the garbage can and left the restaurant, then started looking around for the hotel. Eventually he came across a place called "Maple Inn". It wasn't run by any of May's relatives, however it was apparently named for the gym leader Norman. Seemed he had a fair amount of respect in Petalburg. Alex checked into the inn, paying for just a basic room, which only had a bed, bathroom, and a tv. Alex didn't bother getting into bed or anything. He just flopped on the bed lazily and fell asleep.

    The next day...

    Alex didn't waste any time checking out of the inn. In fact, he was out of there by 8:00 AM in the morning. He stopped for a quick breakfast, and then decided, against his better judgement, to head to the pokecenter to check out the news. The whole Melany thing actually seemed to have died down. ...And now they were reporting a UFO sighting around Mt. Moon in the Kanto region. Alex didn't even bother sticking around to hear it.

    After leaving the pokecenter Alex quickly made his way to the pokemart and stocked up on supplies for his journey. By the time he had finished all preparations, it was 9AM in the morning. Alex started on his way out of the city, after which it'd be a short walk to Petalburg Woods. As Alex was making his way out of the city, however, he noticed someone hiding in the shadows next to Petalburg Gym. As he went to inspect it, he realized it was the bully he beat up just yesterday.

    "Well now...planning to challenge Norman? I doubt you'd win. Or are you just trying to hide your shame?"

    The bully sneered at him, "Actually, I was waiting for Wood to ambush him! He's supposedly going to ask Norman for a pokemon. But since you got here first, I'll take you on instead! And this time I have my Tailow to teach you a lesson!" The boy tossed a pokeball and out came a Tailow. A mean looking Tailow.

    "This might not be good...my only pokemon is Treecko, and grass is weak to flying..." Alex took out his pokenav to check the Tailow's level.

    "...Level 5...and to think I was worried." Alex grabbed the only pokeball on his belt.

    "I've got a pokemon now too...go Treecko!" In a flash of white light, his Treecko appeared from its pokeball, looking confident as usual.

    "Grass type huh? This will be a piece of cake! Hit it with Peck, Tailow, and finish it off quickly!"

    "Treecko, use Pound!" The bully's Tailow attempted to peck at Alex's Treecko, but before it could even attack Treecko slammed it hard with its tail, instantly KOing it.

    "No way! How can your lizard be that strong?!"

    "I could have it show you just how strong it is..." At Alex's statement, his Treecko shot the bully an intimidating look.

    "N-no way man! Keep your lizard away from me!"

    "Alright then...but if I hear anymore about you picking on my friend Wally Treecko will be using you for practice." Hearing this the bully immediately recalled his Tailow and ran off crying. Nearby, Dirk saw the whole thing.

    "Hmm...that kid is strong...his Treecko took down that Tailow in one hit...perhaps he is also this organization's assassin...it'd make him the perfect choice for...recruitment. No one would be able to resist...I'll have to act quickly. With any luck his Treecko is tired out after that fight! Poochyena will have a field day with it!" Dirk gathered up his gear and prepared to face off against Alex once again.

    Alex recalled his Treecko and continued on his way.

    "Bullies...sometimes they just never learn.Oh well. When I catch my Tailow I'll train it to be much stronger than his...Hmm now that I think of it there should be Marill hiding around just outside Petalburg too. Maybe I'll be able to add a water type to my team..." Alex stopped as her heard footsteps in front of him. He looked up and saw Detective Dirk standing in front of him.

    "...Shouldn't you be off chasing real criminals?"

    "You are the real criminal, kid! I've figured you out! Your working as an assassin and some sort of recruitment officer for an underground child pornography company, befriending young girls then kidnapping them!" Alex stared at the detective in disbelief, then gave a sarcastic clap.

    "Congratulations, Detective Dork, you figured me out..." he replied sarcastically.

    "HA! Thought so! Now I can finally get my job back once I turn you in!"

    "...Get your job back? Why am I not surprised that your out of a job...and I suppose you think your Poochyena will bring down my Treecko?"

    "As a matter of fact I know it will! Your Treecko will obviously be tired out after that last fight!" Alex tried to keep from laughing,

    "Tired out...right...what an idiot...", he thought to himself.

    "Yeah your right...my Treecko is probably pretty tired...but nevertheless it will fight your Poochyena...go, Treecko!"

    "Get'em Poochyena!" The two pokemon appeared facing each other, and Treecko rolled its eyes when it realized who its opponent was.

    "Poochyena, use Howl!"

    "That won't do you any good...Treecko, use pound!"

    Dirk's Poochyena howled loudly, and suddenly seemed to be slightly stronger. Treecko rushed in and slammed its large tail into the Poocyena. It staggered, and Alex figured it must have gotten a bit stronger since last time, otherwise it'd already be down and out.

    "Poochyena, hit it with tackle!"

    "Treecko, hit it with another pound attack!" Poochyena ran in to attack Treecko, but since Treecko was faster than it it managed to bring its tail around to whap Poochyena in the side of the head, knocking it out. Another flawless victory for Treecko.

    "No way! That Treecko is just too powerful...this isn't over yet kid!"

    "Yeah...sure..." Dirk recalled his Poochyena and ran off into the city. Alex recalled his Treecko.

    "Now, assuming no more distractions, we will be leaving Petalburg..." Alex looked around him, as if expecting something else to happen, then left the city. Once outside, Alex began scanning around.

    "Now...I know Tailow live on this route somewhere...and they're supposed to be pretty common..."Alex didn't have to look around long before a bird with green feathers on its back, white underneath, and orange around its neck landed near him.

    "Hey! There's one! ...Hey wait a sec...I thought Tailow were usually blue with red feathers around their neck...Wow, guess this is one of those "shiny" pokemon as they call them. This one's mine then! Go get it, Treecko!" Alex tossed the pokeball containing Treecko, and Treecko popped out in front of the Tailow. Tailow looked at it, prepared to fight.

    Alex took out his pokenav, "Level 6 Tailow...this should be an easy catch. Treecko, hit it with pound!" Treecko obliged, bringing its tail down on top of the 'shiny' Tailow before it had much chance to react, instantly knocking it out.

    "Alright, my turn now!" Alex reached into his pack and got out a pokeball and threw it towards the Tailow. The Tailow was sucked into the pokeball, which then dropped to the ground. It wasn't able to put up much of a fight against the pokeball, and soon the pokeball clicked shut, confirming the capture.

    "Great job, Treecko! We caught our first pokemon now!"

    Alex recalled his Treecko, "I haven't gotten very far from Petalburg yet...so maybe once I find a Marill I'll heal my pokemon one last time at the pokecenter before heading off. Treecko is doing fine, of course, but Tailow is already fainted and Marill will probably be in similar condition once I find one." Alex looked around him, and remembered there was a beach nearby that he went through before to avoid any pokemon ecnounters.

    "I might find some Marill closer to the water..." Alex hopped down the short hill and onto the beach, and began looking around. As he got close to the water, he saw a Marill splashing about in the waves.

    "Well that was easy enough...this isn't taking me long at all." Alex checked his pokenav. It was level 9, and had a trainer id assigned to it.

    "Guess someone's just letting their own Marill play in the water...thought that was too easy..." Shortly after he realized this, a boy walked up to the water and called back his Marill.

    "Alright then, back to searching." Alex combed the beach for about 30 minutes before he saw a Marill. This one was level 4 and had no trainer id.

    "Alright, this one's mine! Go Treecko!" Treecko appeared behind the Marill, who still had its back to him.

    "Alright Treecko, hit it with Absorb. That should weaken it plenty." Treecko nodded, and in a burst of green energy Treecko drained the Marill's energy. Alex got out another pokeball and threw it, again catching the Marill without much trouble.

    "Good job, Treecko! Now we have a Marill too! Return!" Alex retruned Treecko to its pokeball.

    "Having a complete pokedex is a big help...now all I have to do is heal up my pokemon and give them a bit of training before heading to Rustboro. Need to make sure they'll be strong enough to make it through the woods easily."

    Alex headed back to Petalburg to heal his pokemon, and then started to train his newly caught pokemon against the wild pokemon in the area. After a few hours of this, he headed into Petalburg forest, ready to start the next part of his journey.


    And there's chapter 2, part one. Part two will be May's version.
     
    He's doing it too easily. Alex is winning all his battles, catches a Taillow and Marill without any trouble. He has to lose sometimes and also fail to catch a pok?mon. The Level system works sometimes in a fic' though so I don't care about that part. Just make Alex seem a less perfect, have some charecter devolopment in there and more discription and your done.

    This fic' is a bit unoriginal since the sarting is exactly like the game, I know this is based on Emerald version but atleast something should be different... The "detective" is a good idea though.

    ~DL~
     
    It alright. As I say in many of the fics I read that are pokemon ones, I think you should spend some more time on developing the pokemon's personalities. I mean, they are what this is all about, without them it would just be a bunch of kids wandering around.... Giving your pokemon little personality quarks is the least you should do (Ex: After five pieces of pizza, Alex guessed that the little guy must've really liked the italian food.). Use the pokemon to liven up your story, otherwise they get ignored, or seem a bit like extra baggage.

    Otherwise seems okay so far. Um, a bit unoriginal in some parts like Dragon Lover said, but I'm sure you'll improve upon that as the story goes on.

    BTW, are you gonna have much of Wally in it? It was stupid how they didn't include him in the anime. I really like him.

    Keep up the writing!
     
    Dragon Lover: Well depending on the loss, it could be a short story >.> And the battles will get a bit more in depth as the story goes on and such and won't be nearly as easy. I think I based the first few chapters a bit too heavily on the game, personally. A little weakness Alex has will start to become apparent in chapters 3, 4, and 5.

    Light_Azumarill: I never thought much about the pokemon outside of battling, but in future chapters I'll try to give them their moments. And Wally will have the same appearances as in Emerald, and maybe a few others. Wally's character will change quite a bit from when he first appears, and I plan to either cut the story off just before the 'end of the game' and make a sequel or keep going beyond. Although I made this mainly for Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza I've been thinking about other possibilities too.

    Anyway! Here's Chapter 2, part two. May! Yay!



    Pokemon Emerald

    Chapter Two (M):

    Adventures in Petalburg

    May sighed as she continued her trek through Route 103.

    "I've seen so many pokemon here...but I don't have a single pokeball!" She looked at the pokeball containing Torchic, "At least your getting plenty of training fighting off these pokemon...but that Wingull we ran into took hurt you pretty badly with its Water Gun attack...I hope Brendan doesn't have a water pokemon or we'll really be in trouble! ...Wait why am I talking to myself anyway?"

    May then noticed that just up ahead was Brendan, standing in front of a patch of grass holding a notebook.

    "Alright...so that pokemon appears here...but not there..." she heard him muttering to himself as he took notes.

    May giggled softly, "Well...guess I'm not alone on the 'talking to myself' thing anyway...wonder what he's doing anyway?"

    Brendan felt like there was someone behind him, and turned and saw May standing behind him. He quickly noticed the pokeball at her waist as well.

    "Hey May! I see you've got your own pokemon now!"

    "Yep! Your father gave it to me."

    "How about a practice battle then?" May smirked.

    "Alright, your on! Go, Torchic!" May tossed the pokeball to the ground, and out popped a somewhat weakened Torchic.

    "Go, Mudkip!" Brendan shouted, tossing his own pokeball to the ground. The blue pokemon appeared and gave a soft cry.

    "Oh great!" , May thought, "He would have a water type wouldn't he? ...I guess I should have used that potion."

    "Torchic! Use Focus Energy!" May's Torchic glowed as it gathered energy from within.

    "Mudkip, hit it with Tackle!" Brendan's Mudkip rushed toward Torchic, slamming into it. Torchic immediately recovered from the attack, though, and still looked ready for more despite its injuries.

    "Torchic, use Scratch!"

    "Mudkip, use Growl!" Torchic raised its clawed feet and brought them down on Mudkip, scratching it hard. Mudkip then growled at Torchic, and Torchic seemed a little intimidated.

    "Maybe Alex was right...this battle certainly isn't very exciting...neither of our pokemon seem to be able to do much at this point. Wonder how strong his Mudkip is anyway?"

    "Torchic, use Scratch again!"

    "Mudkip, hit it with Tackle!" Torchic once again raked the Mudkip with its small claws, seeming to do less damage than the last because of Mudkip's Growl. Mudkip once again slammed into Torchic, but Torchic still looked like it could at least take one more hit.

    "Torchic, hit it with another Scratch attack!" Torchic complied, and this time its attack managed to hit Mudkip's weakpoint, and it instantly fainted.

    "Alright, Torchic! We won!" Torchic chirped and hopped up and down happily, flapping its tiny wings. May and Brendan recalled their pokemon.

    "I think I see why my father gave you that pokemon now...you just got it and it already seems to like you. Why don't we head back to his lab?"

    May nodded, and the two of them took a shortcut back to Professor Birch's lab in Littleroot to avoid any encounters with wild pokemon. Brendan ran all the way there, and got there long before May did and told his father about how she beat him on her first try. Birch was impressed by this, since his son already had a history as a trainer before she even had a pokemon.

    May finally arrived at the lab and found Brendan and Professor Birch waiting for her.

    "Ah, May, there you are! Brendan told me how you beat him on your first try. Brendan already had an extensive history as a trainer, it must have taken a fair amount of skill to beat him. I have something here for you, May." May nodded and watched curiously as Birch walked over to his disk and picked up a small, handheld device and walked back over to May with it.

    "I was saving this for my research, May, but I think you'd be better off having it." he said as he handed her the device.

    May looked it over, "What is it...?"

    "Its a pokedex, it records information on any pokemon you've seen or caught."

    "Oh...thanks!" Professor Birch nodded, then Brendan spoke up.

    "So you have a pokedex now huh? Here, you can have these then." He handed May 5 empty pokeballs.

    "You probably know this already, but you need to use those to catch pokemon." May nodded, "Thanks guys!" May turned to leave, and Brendan and his father wished her luck as she left.

    May yawned, standing just otuside the lab, "Boy...I'm exhausted...I've never walked this much in a while, and its getting late...maybe I'll head home for today and then set out tomorrow morning after breakfast. Mom would probably want to see me off anyway...and I guess I should visit dad when I get to Petalburg."

    May headed to her place, and found her mother was outside waiting for her.

    "Welcome home, dear! You've been gone all day!"

    "Uh yeah sorry mom...got a bit carried away with things I guess...Professor Birch gave me a pokemon!" May realeased Torchic from its pokeball and it chirped happily.

    "Oh, its so adorable! I suppose you'll be going on an adventure of your own then?" May nodded.

    "Thought so...you have your father's blood in you afterall."

    "I think I'll stay the night here though and leave in the morning."

    "Ok then, dear, but I have something to give you before you leave tomorrow!"

    May nodded and recalled her Torchic, heading into her house. Her mother made her a quick meal and then May decided to research Torchic a bit using her computer and her pokedex. While she was doing that she had released Torchic from its pokeball, and it was happily hopping around on her bed. May watched it for a bit.

    "Your a very energetic little pokemon huh?" Torchic chirped happily in response, taking a big hop off the bed and landing in May's lap. May smiled, cuddling it gently.

    "Aww, your so cute!" May put her Torchic back in its pokeball, then took a quick shower before heading to bed.

    May woke up the next morning with a yawn. "What a strange dream...I dreamed I got my first pokemon yesterday..." May looked over at the pokeball next to her computer.

    "Oh, it wasn't a dream...well guess I should get ready to go then!" May quickly hopped out of bed and changed into an outfit similar to the one she had yesterday, and threw some supplies into her belt pouch.

    May went downstairs to find her mom was already up and had prepared breakfast. There was a plate with some bacon, fried eggs, toast, and a glass of orange juice set out for her. She only planned to eat a bowl of cereal.

    "Mom...whats all this?"

    Her mother smiled, "Well since your leaving today, I figured I'd make you a special breakfast. Oh, and here!" Her mother handed her a shoe box.

    "Try those on, dear! They're running shoes!"

    May took the shoes out of the box and looked at them. They looked exactly like the shoes Alex was wearing when she met him just yesterday, and Brendan had a similar pair of shoes as well. She tried them on and they fit perfectly.

    "They fit fine, mom. Thanks!"

    "Your welcome, dear. The box says they'll put a zip in your step!" They both laughed a bit at the cheap advertising, but May did find them more comfortable than her old shoes.

    May quickly ate her breakfast and set out after saying goodbye to her mother. She decided to try out her new shoes, and ran through Route 101. She managed to get to Oldale Town very quickly and didn't really feel tired either, despite running so much.

    "Wow, these shoes really are good! Too bad I didn't run into any pokemon though...I would have liked to catch one...Oh well."

    May looked around the small town. She was in such a hurry during her previous visits that she never noticed what was in the town. There didn't seem to be much. Usual pokemart and pokecenter, but other than that nothing. She decided to check out the pokemart's selection, and bought a couple of pokeballs and potions, but made sure she still had enough money left incase she needed some supplies.

    After her brief stop in Oldale, May set out once again toward Petalburg. She didn't get very far, though, before she was challenged by another trainer. "Hey! You have pokemon with you! You can't say no to my challenge!" May stared at the boy blankly.

    "I can't say no? I don't see why not...but, whatever." she thought to herself.

    "Alright, have it your way...go, Torchic!"

    "Go, Poochyena!"

    "Poochyena huh? I remember how easily Alex beat that detective's Poochyena..."

    "Torchic, use Scratch!"

    "Poochyena, Tackle attack!" The Poochyena got ready to hit May's Torchic with Tackle, but before it could Torchic scratched the dog-like pokemon with its claws and it instantly collapsed.

    "...Yeah, that was easy." May thought. Torchic didn't seem to care that it was easy, though, as it hopped about happy from its victory.

    "Grr...you should have told me you were strong...I only challenged you because you looked weak..." May had to restrain herself from hitting the boy because of his comment, and decided to ignore him and continue on toward Petalburg.

    Soon May came across a small pond, and stopped by it. The lily pads in the pond seemed to be moving! May watched curiously as one of the lily pads seemed to approach her. The lily pad rose out of the water slightly, and under it she could see a pair of eyes staring at her, and whatever it was had a duck's bill for a mouth. She pointed her pokedex at it, and it immediately registered the pokemon as Lotad and showed a picture of it. It had a blue body and four legs. That was the only info it was showing her though.

    "Lotad huh? I think I'll catch it! Torchic, go!" May tossed out Torchic's pokeball, and the pokemon appeared with a loud chirp.

    "Torchic, use Scratch!" Torchic complied, and clawed at the Lotad. Lotad was still standing but barely. Lotad then attempted to scare Torchic with Astonish. Torchic was frightened momentarily but shook it off.

    May reached for a pokeball, "Now lets see if I can catch it!" She threw the pokeball at the Lotad and it was sucked inside. It landed, half submerged in the shallow water. The pokeball started to shake as Lotad tried to break free. After a few tense seconds, it finally clicked shut.

    "Alright! We caught a Lotad Torchic!" Her Torchic chirped happily in response as she recalled it. She then decided to check Lotad's entry again.

    The pokedex read, "This pokemon lives in ponds with clean water. It is known to ferry small pokemon across ponds by carrying them on the broad leaf on its head." May smiled, "Wow, what a helpful little pokemon..."

    May continued on toward Petalburg, letting both her pokemon train a bit against any wild pokemon she encountered along the way as well as battling a few trainers. She ended up having to use a potion on her Lotad since it was still weak from when she had Torchic fight it.
    Eventually, she managed to make it to Petalburg and immediately stopped by the pokecenter to heal her pokemon. She decided to check out any information on her Lotad on the PC while she was there. Afterwards, she decided to head to the gym to see her dad.

    As May arrived at the gym, another trainer was just leaving, muttering to himself, "Man...I can't believe how strong that guy is..." May didn't really pay any attention to him, and went into the gym. Inside the gym was a large, wooden floor with markings on it that designated it as a battle field.

    "Welcome, challenger." She heard from the other side of the gym.

    "Dad...its just me..." Norman looked up from where he was at the other side of the gym.

    "Oh...sorry. Habit. Are you and your mother finished unpacking, May?" May walked over to where her father was.

    "Yep, and Professor Birch gave me a pokemon!"

    "Ah...I figured he might. Are you setting out on your own journey then, May?" She nodded. Her father was about to say something else, but was interrupted by the sound of the door opening and closing.

    "Umm...excuse me...is umm...Norman here?"

    Norman smiled, "Ah, Wally, glad you could make it."

    "S-sorry I'm late, sir...c-could I get a pokemon?" Norman was about to reply when the door opened again, and an angry looking trainer stepped in.

    "I want a rematch!"

    Norman sighed, "Well as a gym leader I can't say no...hmm..." Norman turned to May.

    "May, could I get you to help Wally here catch a pokemon?" May nodded.

    "Sure, dad."

    Norman handed Wally an empty pokeball.

    "You can use this to catch a pokemon once you find one you like." He then handed him another pokeball.

    "And you can use one of my pokemon to help you catch it."

    "Wow! Thanks sir!" Norman nodded and made his way to the other side of the gym.

    "Well good luck you two." May and Wally nodded and left the gym just as the battle was starting to get underway.

    May led Wally toward a small patch of grass in Route 103.

    "Alright, we'll search here for a pokemon." Wally nodded, and began searching for a pokemon in the grass. There didn't seem to be many around, though, and they were looking for a few hours before May finally spotted a Ralts.

    "Hey Wally, over here! I've spotted a Ralts you can catch!" Wally quietly made his way over to where May was and saw a timid looking Ralts.

    "Ok, now that we've found a pokemon, send out the pokemon my dad gave you and have it fight the Ralts." Wally nodded, and tossed the pokeball Norman gave him containing a pokemon. A Zigzagoon came out of the pokeball near the Ralts.

    "Ok... umm... use... uh... Tackle!" Wally looked at May, "It does know Tackle...right?"

    May nodded, "Tackle is a pretty safe bet, but a pokenav would show you exactly what it knows."

    As the two of them talked, the Zigzagoon rushed in and slammed its body into the Ralts. It quickly hopped back up and growled at the Zigzagoon.

    "Do I...use the pokeball now?" May shook her head.

    "Ralts is still pretty strong...it'll probably break free. Try using Tackle again." Wally nodded.

    "Ok, Zigzagoon...use Tackle again!" The Zigzagoon used Tackle again, and the Ralts seemed to be weakening. All it did to retaliate was use Growl again.

    "Now... do I use it?" May nodded, "It should be weak enough now."

    "Alright... umm... here goes!" Wally tossed his only pokeball at the Ralts, and it was sucked inside. The pokeball fell to the ground and started shaking. It shook three times before it clicked, locking shut and holding the pokemon inside.

    "I...I did it! I caught my first pokemon!"

    May smiled, "Congratulations!"

    "Thanks May...I need to return Norman's pokemon now..." May nodded and the two of them started on their way back to the gym. On the way there, though, they ran into a familiar face. Or familiar to Wally anyway.

    "Well well well... so now you need a girl to protect you Wood?" an older looking boy sneered.
    Wally looked scared, and stepped away from him. The boy snickered.

    "Don't worry, Wood. I'm not going to torture you today...you'd probably go and rat me out to that friend of yours. He said if I pick on you anymore his Treecko would beat me up, and he already beat my Tailow. So you're getting off easy today, Wood." With that, the boy left.

    "Umm...who was that?" May asked. "Th-that was Danny...he and his friends are always picking on me and beating me up...they were beating me up two days ago when a guy named Alex stopped them..."

    "Alex? I met a guy named Alex back in Littleroot. He took a Treecko for a starting pokemon."

    "Really? Someday I'm going to be just as strong as him...and my newly caught Ralts will help me...and I'll never have to put up with bullies like Danny again..."

    The two of them continued toward Norman's gym, and found there were no challengers when they got there. Wally handed Norman his pokemon back.

    "Umm...thanks for lending me your pokemon sir...and thanks for your help May...I should get home now before my parents worry."

    "Your welcome, Wally. Hope you do well in Verdanturf." Norman replied, and Wally left for home.

    "Now, May. If your going to be taking the Hoenn League Challenge you should start with Roxanne in Rustboro."

    "I know, Alex told me about her. She uses two Geodude and a Nosepass." Norman seemed a bit surprised.

    "Alex huh? He seems to know what he's talking about. Is he a trainer too?" May nodded.

    "He also said that if I wanted to use Torchic I should get it to evolve into Combusken first."

    Norman laughed, "He really knows what he's doing then if he knows that much about pokemon. You could probably learn a thing or two. I suppose you'll be on your way to Rustboro then... Of course, I'm a gym leader as well. We'll battle someday when your stronger." May nodded, she already knew she'd have to face him.

    "Alright. Bye dad."

    "Goodbye, and good luck" May left the gym and noticed it was close to evening.

    "Guess I'll just train my pokemon a bit and spend the night in Petalburg... it'll be better than navigating the woods at night... I'll probably be camping out in the forest a bit anyway but still I think I'd rather stay here for tonight."

    May had a quick meal at a nearby restaurant, then headed back to Route 103 for some quick training, and managed to catch a Ralts of her own while she was out there. Once she was satisfied her three pokemon were strong enough to get her through the woods, she healed them up at the pokemon center and headed over to the "Maple Inn". After going there, she quickly decided it'd be best if she didn't tell people her last name, since being the daughter of Norman would probably draw more attention than she wanted.

    She paid for a room. When she got to it, she found it wasn't much. She wanted to let her pokemon out but apparently the inn had a rule that pokemon had to be in their pokeballs at all times, so she couldn't. She decided to take a quick shower and went to sleep.


    I doubt part two was any better than part one, but things will pick up a bit in chapter three as Alex and May try for their first badge. Things start picking up from this point on >.>
     
    I'll take your word for it then =P

    I like the new concepts you introduced such as Lotoad's Pok?dex entry and how someone challenges Norman before May goes and helps Wally catch a pok?mon e.t.c I like it. It does get boring sometimes but also gets interesting. I made any sense =P

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    Chocolate Muffins are the Bomb!

    ~DL~
     
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