Pokemon Emrald:Re-Make(By Rayquaza975)

[Swizzler121]

Ok, You need some help with this and please don't have another flaming fit because all forums are for are for C&C so that's what were doing!

1.you are rushing, STOP it is greatly reducing the quality
Reasons I can tell:
-Made with paint
--Solution: Go to google and search 'grapics gale Free edition download' it is a much better program.

-Drawings careless
--Solution: Slow down and redo as many times as you see fit (Ctrl+z is my fav shortcut[undo])

-Grammar careless
--Solution: you are 14 now, you've taken spelling all of your life, USE IT!! not meaning as an insult, but if you want to work for a comic company, they won't be impressed by this, Go through and read what you wrote.

-Edit some of the text colors/sizes, they are hard to read
--Speaks for its self

-Stop blaiming other things, It's your rushing causing the problems, Im sorry to say that the following statement is true:


I know it is somewhat inapropriate, but true, you are the only one to blame for the quality of this comic.

The truth is that you won't get pampered into a world class job, You can't make these and expect marvel to be regular subscribers, Hey, you can ignore anything I have said up here but, the truth will always show.

 

[King Boo]

Ok, You need some help with this and please don't have another flaming fit because all forums are for are for C&C so that's what were doing!

1.you are rushing, STOP it is greatly reducing the quality
Reasons I can tell:
-Made with paint
--Solution: Go to google and search 'grapics gale Free edition download' it is a much better program.

-Drawings careless
--Solution: Slow down and redo as many times as you see fit (Ctrl+z is my fav shortcut[undo])

-Grammar careless
--Solution: you are 14 now, you've taken spelling all of your life, USE IT!! not meaning as an insult, but if you want to work for a comic company, they won't be impressed by this, Go through and read what you wrote.

-Edit some of the text colors/sizes, they are hard to read
--Speaks for its self

-Stop blaiming other things, It's your rushing causing the problems, Im sorry to say that the following statement is true:


I know it is somewhat inapropriate, but true, you are the only one to blame for the quality of this comic.


The truth is that you won't get pampered into a world class job, You can't make these and expect marvel to be regular subscribers, Hey, you can ignore anything I have said up here but, the truth will always show.

Ok i know i know,but flaming me what for,as u can see im a frist time spirter and only discovered pokemon fourms since July so u could say something nice not that im agianst u but I REALLY SUCK WHEN IT COMES TO GRAMMER,and im sorry but i can;t help it!

 

[Draginis]

Ya know kid,there's a difference between "Flamming" and "critism"
The only reason why they're giving you harsh comments now is because you obviously don't accept critism in it's natural state.And I'm pretty sure you can stop yourself from using bad grammar,it's not that hard.And if you're a first time spriter,maybe you should practice up a bit before something like this occurs.And you're flamming a lot more than the rest of us.No,I have nothing against you.But you could be understanding with crits.Because such a thing excists.
AND you can't expect people to be nice to you when you flip out just because someone's opinion poked you.
I'm not flamming you,merely trying to get the point across.Just take the advice given,and all will be well.AND this will be all I have to say if you drop this where it is.
Peace.

 

[Crazy Frogitist]

oh rayquaza, here's gary's back that u wanted

 

[King Boo]

oh rayquaza, here's gary's back that u wanted

Whatever dude,No if it's ok i wanted his back pose in the battle scean but thats allright!

 

[Swizzler121]

At least download grapics gale, It's a good program for beginners, And Just because your a beginner spriter doesn't mean you cant spend a little more time on the comics (expecally 1 frame comics) and because it's such a small window, another thing I forgot to add is that they go by way to fast! I think they would be cool if you rolled out 2 close together comics twice a week, instead of such a hurried load, ya know what I mean?

 

[King Boo]

At least download grapics gale, It's a good program for beginners, And Just because your a beginner spriter doesn't mean you cant spend a little more time on the comics (expecally 1 frame comics) and because it's such a small window, another thing I forgot to add is that they go by way to fast! I think they would be cool if you rolled out 2 close together comics twice a week, instead of such a hurried load, ya know what I mean?

Yeah good idea thankz!,ding-ding!

 

[Crazy Frogitist]

Whatever dude,No if it's ok i wanted his back pose in the battle scean but thats allright!

u said u wanna't in da private messages and did u just call me a dude? i hate u calling me a dude, mate, just stop calling me a dude, ok pal? *squash rayquaza's tail with 23 tone statelite and punch rayquaza in da eye* :P (feeling much better after da punching and squashing :P :P )

 

[King Boo]

Dude?

Not u,i called Swizzler121 dude!:dead:

 

[Crazy Frogitist]

mr. rayquaza u suppose to tell me that earlier

 

[King Boo]

mr. rayquaza u suppose to tell me that earlier

Mr IM 14!,i did allready! :\

 

[Crazy Frogitist]

Mr IM 14!,i did allready! :\

sorry i don't understand. :\ i meant that u suppose tell me that 30mins ago

 

[King Boo]

sorry i don't understand. :\ i meant that u suppose tell me that 30mins ago

OOPS,nice Trainer card i like it!

 

[Crazy Frogitist]

OOPS,nice Trainer card i like it!

whose trainer card? whose trainer card?

 

[King Boo]

*slaps himself in the face*Whos do u think(i sound like a drunk)

 

[Crazy Frogitist]

*slaps himself in the face*Whos do u think(i sound like a drunk)

yours, u do sound like a drunk (sorry 4 offtopic people) do u know i'm just being stupid? have u read a book from andy griffths called just stupid?

 

[Fox♠]

by da way rayquaza 975 (your user name is really hard to remember) you are 14, aren't you? work on your spriting pal

And you critisize my one typo?

da isn't a word

and in a sentance "i" should be "I"

Raq...who ever you are you should really learn to take critisism, we're allowed to post our opinions, only a n00b respounds like that.

 

[King Boo]

And you critisize my one typo?

da isn't a word

and in a sentance "i" should be "I"

Raq...who ever you are you should really learn to take critisism, we're allowed to post our opinions, only a n00b respounds like that.

What ever,Crazy Frogitist he has a point!

 

[Ark Kuvis]

Vaati has more than 9 points.
You suck at comic making and you suck cuz you flamed me because of my opinion.
MORE THAN ONE PANNEL
JPEGS ARE BAD
SPECIAL EFFECTS IN THIS COMIC ARE REALLY BAD
MOST CHARATERS IN THIS COMIC ARE MADE BADLY
YOU ARE NOT GARY, BUT I'M GLAD YOU ARE NOT A CRAPPY RECOLOR.

Take the advice or leave it.

 

[King Boo]

Vaati has more than 9 points.
You suck at comic making and you suck cuz you flamed me because of my opinion.
MORE THAN ONE PANNEL
JPEGS ARE BAD
SPECIAL EFFECTS IN THIS COMIC ARE REALLY BAD
MOST CHARATERS IN THIS COMIC ARE MADE BADLY
YOU ARE NOT GARY, BUT I'M GLAD YOU ARE NOT A CRAPPY RECOLOR.

Take the advice or leave it.

**** u,come agian!~:D :D :D :D(I HATE THIS POST LIMIT CRAP)