Pokemon - Entei

[Khan6195]

Pokémon - Entei

Pokémon - Entei is a hack of:

Story:
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You are a boy/girl in the town of Carnduff. One day you wake up and go downstairs and talk to your mother. She gives you a Raiegg for protection, some running shoes, and $10,000. You run outside, and try to leave Carnduff. There, standing in front of you is Entei, a creature of great might. You commence a battle between your Raiegg and Entei. You are now going to follow Entei throughout the Raku region.

Features:
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The new Raku Region!
Sinnoh Pokémon!
Fakémon!
A new town (Way more to come!)
New scripts! (Way more to come!)
There will be way more to come...

Some new sprites! Credits to Samson for Nevidrel, Stormidran, and Occultales.
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More to come... (PLEASE do not steal my Fakémon!) :( (BUT IF YOU DO STEAL MY FAKéMON, AND I FIND OUT, I WILL SPAM YOUR THREAD AND WARN EVERYONE.

Screenshots of Carnduff/Viridian Cave/Ramaba Town
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Ramaba Town is now 50-100% larger, with an event that triggers the allowance of the Magic Cave.
EDIT: I HAVE FIXED THAT BLUE LINER THING AT THE EDGE OF THE TRESS! I have also changed Entei's level. He was previously level 44 in the Magic Cave, but he is now level 95, 15 above all of the others. All are level 80 except Entei! The Magic Cave is now also 50-100% bigger and a better maze, sort of, :P. I have also added a Magic Forest with many creatures of many types high in level. (And I mean really high, I mean levels 86-97!) Ramaba Town now even has a Gym! It does not necessarily give you a badge, but unlocks an extremely huge and important event in the game. You can gain access to it after you obtain a secret something from a secret someone :P.
Pretty intense screenshots, eh?

Hey, I've come this far in not too long, it would be easier with a team. Anyone interested?
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I need a:
Mapper (2)
Scripter (2)
Spriter (1)
Glitch Finder (1)
OW Spriter (1)
Someone to give me/the team ideas :P (1-2)
Beta Tester (Not now though!) (1)

(I may need more later!)

Right now, I've:
Mapped a little bit, and scripted. Did a little OW Spriting too.

Current Team:
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Me - Trying to do everything right now.

The Sinnoh Pokémon/Fakémon added so far:
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Shaymin
Raiga
Raiegg
Blazidash
Infernata
Psychu
Stormidran
Nevidrel
Occultales

Credits: (I don't know all the authors, but you know who you are! :))
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Advance Map: LU-HO Poké and Jiggly
PTC - Don't know =/
UnLZHACKED - loadingNOW and HackMew (HackMew for well, hacking it :P)
FSF - HackMew
AdvStarter - Sorry, I don't know, but I think it's HackMew?
Advanced Text - Scizz
XSE (I used ALOT, so a HUGE THANKS TO HACKMEW!)
Samson - For some Fakémon (The link to his thread is here.)

If your interested in any positions and stuff, just PM me. You may leave a comment too.
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Username: (Your username.)
Position: (Mapper, Scripter, Spriter, etc.)
Experience: (How good you are at this position, etc.)
Specialty: (Mapper, Scripter, etc.)
Why: (Why you want to join the team.)

I will get back to you with your results on whether you can join the team or not ASAP. Thanks.

For the Preview of the first five minutes:
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The First Preview!

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[xXgunboundpkmnguy]

this looks like a good hack! Keep up the good work and try to fix the bugs. oh look first post!

 

[Malkner]

Screenies... too... large...
*twitch* hurts... eyes...

 

[Khan6195]

Screenies... too... large...
*twitch* hurts... eyes...

Umm... Thats kind of... pointless...

 

[Time Master]

Hello and I wish to join the team. I have been needing something to do and this may be it.

Username: Time Master
Position: Glitch Finder or Mapper
Specialty: Mapping and editing
Why: Need something to do
Will you follow the rules? Yes

 

[cuplampghosthunt]

It was okay, the video shows you have down the basics of scripting and mapping and such, but I have a few grips with it:

1. The script is repetitive, the character keeps saying "I wonder what that was all about." I would make him say something different, or just have him shut up like in the official games.
2. The character's text is black, which is kind of odd, it should be blue or red (depending on the gender)
3. The script is kind of weird and not that well written, the mom's dialogue just came out as really creepy by the time she said love for the third time.
4. It's really strange how entei is level 3 the first time you meet him and level 44 the second time. The first time doesn't really make any sense either.
5. The character says "I'm sick of you," to the Entei the second time they meet, this is kind of unrealistic as if I saw something as rare as an Entei I would probably be excited or in awe, not irritated.

Other than that, it looks pretty good. I like May's cameo :)

 

[Tyrantrum]

The screenshots are too large.

An easier way is on the VBA itself:

File → screen capture.

 

[Khan6195]

The screenshots are too large.

An easier way is on the VBA itself:

File → screen capture.

Oh okay, I'll fix that right now! Sorry.

Hello and I wish to join the team. I have been needing something to do and this may be it.

Username: Time Master
Position: Glitch Finder or Mapper
Specialty: Mapping and editing
Why: Need something to do
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Add your experience to it too, thanks.

It was okay, the video shows you have down the basics of scripting and mapping and such, but I have a few grips with it:

1. The script is repetitive, the character keeps saying "I wonder what that was all about." I would make him say something different, or just have him shut up like in the official games.
2. The character's text is black, which is kind of odd, it should be blue or red (depending on the gender)
3. The script is kind of weird and not that well written, the mom's dialogue just came out as really creepy by the time she said love for the third time.
4. It's really strange how entei is level 3 the first time you meet him and level 44 the second time. The first time doesn't really make any sense either.
5. The character says "I'm sick of you," to the Entei the second time they meet, this is kind of unrealistic as if I saw something as rare as an Entei I would probably be excited or in awe, not irritated.

Other than that, it looks pretty good. I like May's cameo :)

I'm going to give you an answer for each of your 5 points :P

1. Yeah, I did this quick, C & P the script and changed some words and offsets.
2. Yeah, I don't know why the text is black...
3. I will fix the mom's script as soon as I can. (DONE)
4. You're supposed to beat him at first, and throughout the game you will tail him as he gets stronger and stronger. The level 44 is a mess-up. I didn't convert to HEX right I guess, he is supposed to be level 95, :P.
5. He says "I'm sick of you!" because you meet him so many times throughout the game it is not even funny.

I hope those are good answers :P. Thanks for the pointers and help with what I could change!