FireRed hack: Pokemon Espeon in Darkness

[gary_productions]

Heyz! my name is Gary_production
Il bring you a new hack Pokemon Espeon in Darkness.
im from Holland (the netherlands) and my english is not so good.! :P
Here ya go!

**Rom**
Fire red.

**Features**
New Tiles
Some D/P pokemons
Some ASM scripts!
New events
some new rivals
New Regio
New gymleaders
And of course. new story!



*Glitches*
Dont got one att the moment


**screenshots!**

**Storyline**

You as a child of 13, gets to hear that your father is kidnapped by team rocket members.
you decide to take a trip with your father's Pokemon.
Looking for your father.
but soon you notice that something good is wrong, and you work together with proffesor ???
to stop Team Rocket?


Play Now! Pokemon Espeon in Darkness!


**beta(S)**
none.

Hacking Team :
Me ( doh)
AgeAngel - Music Hacker!

**Credits**
Nintendo - Rom
Laidjon - Rombase
Kyledove - Tiles.
z!nx - Tiles.
WAH - overworld

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Hmm...the screenies look fine, but I think you should use the Anime Misty OW because Misty looks weird when she is walking everywhere barefoot.

Anyway, GL!

 

[gary_productions]

Thanks :)
Im learning some ASM scripts :)

 

[Laidjon*]

That rock climbing script is very nice. You've got to teach me that one day =)

And what Ruka Prince said. Change the OW of the Misty sprite.

 

[gary_productions]

Hey :)
Il gonna make a Hacking Team!
So il need a Tile inserter
and tittlescreen editor,
If you will work together, just send me a pm!

 

[Circa]

Seems good. But look at this:

Look at the house. ( Not the lab ). It's door doesn't fit it's tile house. You should've edit the palette into dark blue. Anyways it's just a suggestion.
Your hack looks great. And i like the features very much. Goodluck on this project.

 

[gary_productions]

ah yes IL see:)
thanks, :)
tomorrow it will be Update day.!
what will the update be? it is a Surprise. :)

 

[Payload]

Even the youngest of hacks need story criticism, so let's give it a shot.

You as a child of 13, gets to hear that your father is kidnapped by team rocket members. ...Why was he kidnapped? Don't they have better things to do then kidnap random fathers?
you decide to take a trip with your father's Pokemon. Wouldn't have the Rockets taken his Pokémon and sold them?
Looking for your father. Why? Your only thirteen, wouldn't it be proper to alert the authorities and let them handle it?
but soon you notice that something good is wrong, and you work together with proffesor ??? ...That's pretty vague. Many good things can go wrong. And you might want to select a name for the professor.
to stop Team Rocket? Again, why do you have to do it?

My comments in bold, yatta yatta yatta.
Hopefully you can come up with a sort of reasonable argument for everything listed, or change some things. I'd hate to see such a new hack get burdened by a vague story.
Good luck, and cheers.

 

[Surf]

You stole this script right out of Thunder Emblem.
Remove it, or I'll report you.

 

[Laidjon*]

You stole this script right out of Thunder Emblem.
Remove it, or I'll report you.

Dude, chill out. It's a script. Anyone can make one like this. It isn't that Mitchel1 has copyright or something... -.-

 

[gary_productions]

em, they are much hacks whit that script ,
go report me ! :)

i​

got on XSE the scripts,

i​

can make screen but, go report.

ill​

don't​

have steal this.

 

[Vrai]

Dude, chill out. It's a script. Anyone can make one like this. It isn't that Mitchel1 has copyright or something... -.-

Well, obviously not. But if you came up with an awesome script, and someone made something that did the exact same thing, with the exact same words, wouldn't you accuse them of theft as well? I mean, this case is nowhere near as extreme, but still. :/

em, they are much hacks whit that script ,
go report me ! :)

i​

got on XSE the scripts,

i​

can make screen but, go report.

ill​

don't​

have steal this.

^ Yeah, although it seems pretty much the same, just about anyone could have made that script, so it's pretty much pointless to try and do anything about it. :/

 

[gary_productions]

ok if it is a problem
Ill will change my rock climb script into a HM​

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

ok if it is a problem
Ill will change my rock climb script into a HM​

Now that's better. So you mean that Rock Climb is going to be like D/P/P's one?

 

[Neo-Wolf]

Looking good . But the storyline needs a bit more info . Keep up the good work .