Pokemon Evolution 2

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I didn't say anything in response, but began lumbering towards the boulder, where I set her down, but kept a hold of he hand just in case the wind should pick up again.
 
When the wind picked up, I pulled her a little closer to try to break more of the wind, and said "You certainly didn't look like you were going home." I was a master of changing the subject while seeming to be going on about the same thing.
 
"And you followed me" I said over the wind. "why?" I was uncomfortably close to him, but my focus was on lasting through the wind part of the storm without getting torn apart..
 
'I suppose I just wanted to know why." I said, giving up and telling her. Not that I knew all the reason why myself. I was rather glad to be in my mutant form, since it was pretty much impossible to show embarrasment in that form.
 
I could feel the wind dying down, and I knew it'd start raining in a matter of moments. "we should get somewhere sheltered." I said as calmly as I could manage
 
"You're right, here." I said, and sunk into the boulder, bringing her with me. "Relax," I thought, wishing that at least one of us had telepathy, she could survive in here from her connection to me.
 
Name: Forester Ray Malcome
Age: 14
Gender:male
Morph: Juputoru (grovyle)
Appearance in morph : looks fairly normal except has a face like Grovyle with the leaf pokeing out from his hair two leaves on each arm and his skin turns a pale violet coloration
Description: about '5'10" is height short untidy brown hair
Glasses &strong legs able him to run fast & always weres black
Personality:A very Shy & reclucive boy hates being part of a crowds
would rather hide in the shade rather than face anyone & unfortunally has a fear of heights but wants to fly

is this right i'm not too sure
any changes needed tell me
now what do i do .....
 
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Paige was at home but when she saw the little raichu morph she quickly went to him...........
 
OOC: I got a question for you!
What is a Juptore?

On another note, Flygon_trainer whether you agree or not, you were power playing before.

I heard something moving nearby, and sat up, losing my peaceful state of mind.I glansed around, usign my near-photographic memory to check for somethign diffrent. I found something all right. there was an extra rock where there hadn't been before. my senses went into high alarm, and I felt my wings start to heat up, nearly getting ablaze..
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You are a 13 year old girl. Most likely you wouldn't be able to hear the small sound SE's character made. Even if you did, in your sign up you did not mention your character had near photographic memory. That is what a sign up is for, to tell people facts about your character. Its not some stupid thing that is put at the start of a RP and forgotten later down the track.

I watched for a moment, remembering what my earth science teacher had told me. rocks that were that unstable would shatter. "don't bother trying to hide, Ivan" I said. "I actually pay attention in school. And you know my study of the Mesizoic Era gives me an advantage when it comes to rocks"
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How would your character know it was Ivan? Just because SE's character is the only created character that could hide as a rock it does not make it automatically him. It could have been the wind, another mutant anything. You took information you yourself knew and gave it to your character. There was no other way she could have known it was Ivan.

I might just be picky but I am just stating fact.
 
OOC: I don't think it was powerplaying, but possibly an exageration of my charecter's mental abilties. I based it off my own memory, temporary, but extremly sharp. And she used process of elimination, it may have been another mutant, but she assumed it was Ivan because there was nobody else she knew that could hide as a rock.
 
Paige looked at the young morph with saddened eyes she asked what was wrong.......
 
Marianne meekly nodded at Andrew's request and walked away, she looked back every five seconds to make sure he was okay. She then saw the boys who teased him a while ago walking towards him. By instinct, she stopped and followed them, being as furtive as posible. When the boys, along with Andrew, stopped in the back of the school. She hid in a bush and peeked through a small hole. It took her a minute or so before she realized what they were doing. She wanted to stop them but didn't dare move, she might just hurt the boys and she wasn't supposed to do that.

Deciding that staying there would only cause more trouble, Marianne sprinted away, again being as furtive as possible. She took the last bus home and rushed to her room.

"I have to make-believe that I didn't see anything...or else Andy might get mad at me." She whispered to herself.
 
Getting up and realizing that Paige asked a question Andrew said, "No...not really...I got beat up..." He then shuffled passed her and into the institute, he knew he was in for a lecture.

Turning to face the professor, his black eye was now swollen, and there was a big blood clot in on nostril. "I'm sorry, Professor. I tryed I really did!" He said as tears rolled down his cheek. "I didn't mean to hurt anybody, or to even use my powers..." He muttered under his tears.

"It's ok, no major harm done, just be careful next time. Now go ask Ivan to help clean you up." The professor said softly.

Andrew only nodded and shuffled off to find Ivan.
 
The rain was a torrentail downpour, but it didn't last very long, suprisingly. but the clouds stayed overhead, and I could hear thunder, but it was going to be a while before it rained again.

OOC: now I need shiney over here..
 
OOC: Your wish is my command.

IC: I didn't need to look up, I could feel through the rock that it had stopped raining. For lack of a way to communicate through solid stone, I simply decided to walk out of it, gently pulling Eclipse with me.
 
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