Pokemon Fever

Jaybob

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    Pokemon Fever Current: Part 8

    Hi guys this is my comic called Pokemon Fever. It is a continuation to Signomis "Pokemon FR/LG continued". So here goes nothing


    Part one



    Part Two



    Part Three



    Part Four



    Part Five


    Part siz


    Part seven


    Part Eight



    Ok well this is them so far... so can I have your comments and if you wanna be in here you have to gimme overworlds and sprites

    Edit: Too see it in full size... clik on pic
     
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    Very nice job for a begginer I really like part 4.
     
    The capes aren't very well made, there are no battle backgrounds and you use the lazy style of speech.
     
    the acpes are full black and i know they arent that good because i am not that good of a spriter in in my newer comics i do have backgrounds it's just there i didnt have one so...
     
    I suppose it's alright ^^ Though you could've made the character designs a bit more accurate. Part two, Kris called Blue, Green was there instead o_O
     
    They're OK. But they could be a bit more cockier. Join? Well, heh, don't mind if I do.

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Fever


    There's my sheet. I suppose that's all you're going to need.
     
    No offence ment but its rubbish i dont like it at all...
     
    Dude, You gotta do battle sprites. and show some more attacks.
    Here, I give you myself. Make sure you make me Cool:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Fever

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Fever
     
    Sheepnut said:
    No offence ment but its rubbish i dont like it at all...
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    you're supposed to tell him why you don't like it and why it fails IYO, sheesh do you not read the rules?...n00b
     
    The most recent comic makes no sense. In the second to last panel, a Chansey is attacking a Mew that's covered by a bubble with an egg bomb, and in the next they're both gone and there's some silhouette of a guy in a yellow circle. This is another reason why the lazy style of text doesn't work at all.

    And between those scenes, the 3 trainers at the northern part of the island magically switch places and the birds are no longer in front of them. Try to keep continuity in your comics.
     
    kool ty renegadez sorry bout the delay lol but i got skool again now i am gettin some soon but only adamski's in it at the moment
     
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