Pokemon Frost and Flame

[M4sterm1nd]

Game Name:
Pokémon Frost and Pokémon Flame
Team Name:
Team Starlight
Team Members:
Luxraymaster
M4sterm1nd
Game Background and Storyline:

Spoiler:

You live in a region with very harsh weather conditions, and for your birthday, your parents allow you to start helping the professor with learning everything within the region you live in(it is strange how the professors don't know much about the Pokémon that live in the region, even though they live there and work in there.) With the help of your friend, you start off on your journey. Along the way, you meet a villainous team(to be announced), working to bring the two legendaries (Work in Progress) together and create the ultimate Pokémon. You get to explore both regions and catch brand-new Pokémon AND Pokémon from other regions!

New features:

Spoiler:

New regions (To be Announced)
Some new Pokémon & legendaries
New villainous team(name to be announced)
New characters and Gym Leaders(Leaders to be announced)

Tools Used:

Spoiler:

RPG Maker XP
Pokémon Essentials
S.M. pack

Credits:

Spoiler:

Pokémon essentials by Maruno, Peter O. and Flamguru
Zeak6464 Tapu Fini SpartaLazor leparagon BlackOutG5 Rune M3rein Rigbycwts Rot8er_ConeX James Davy and Luka S.J. for the S.M. pack.

If you would like to help create this game, PM me
And also, there will be updates every week, so keep watch

 

[Jefries]

Sounds like a nice plot the thing is that it feels like little bit rushed in your storyline. Now there are things that I understand which are that you want to capture the reader's interest but in the same time is like you are giving away too much. Just saying you should sometimes try to go for that "General" explanation that isn't too specific like saying troubles instead what trouble he gets in( I hope you understand this).
Just something extra which is about the names I believe you will change the names for the region probably right? Also for the evil team name would be better to leave it unknown and with their motive also unknown( something you could say is a team that has plans that will change the world that everyone knows of).

Hope this proves helpful just wonder if this is good advice at least I believe so since I'm telling it to you. #MyReturn :D

 

[M4sterm1nd]

Thank you for this and I have fixed some things!

 

[M4sterm1nd]

The updates will now be set for every Monday!

 

[Popponic]

Pretty nice idea. It seems a bit ambitious, but I feel that once visual progress is put out it may not be that way.

Hopefully you can make something decent out of this.

 

[M4sterm1nd]

Weekly updates have been resumed for every Monday.

 

[Luxray Master]

Hey M4sterm1nd, how's it going? I'm wondering what happened? You haven't updated recently, what's going on? You have such a great idea, I don't want to se it go!

 

[M4sterm1nd]

UPDATE:
I realize it's been quite a while since I have updated, but Pok?mon Frost and Flame have been put on hold, since Team FrostedFlame recently joined Starlight. That's right, Pok?mon Frost and Flame are now under the development of Team Starlight.

 

[ErinNyu]

I like the title name. Hope this turns out well!
If you need my help don't hesitate to ask!