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Pokemon:Genesis

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    Pokemon:genesis
    (prolougue)

    Story:the story is about four trainers in Jouhto becoming chapions,batleling a new organization called:Alpha,The year is 2008 of nombember,15.

    note:this is prolouge no excuses that is short,if you dont like it don,t post please,and if fan fic don,t reach the standers thats why is prolouge,and if is bad gramer dont cristism me for it,please and you like to help me with it post please.

    prolougue:
    chapter:blaze in my eyes (short version)

    By:envyhikari

    The morning look like noon(the felling of batle was in the air)BUZZ,BUZZ,BUUZ.(The clock ringing)yuuiki:zzz,huh what the hell is that noise.a clock i dont rembember having clock,Mom!! shut up(he punch the clock hardly)Mom:what is it dear,oh no the clock that buy you,you recked,you berter tell why you dit it young man.(saying madly)yuuki:why,becase you clock wake me up.mom:i put the clock so you not late for fist journey honey.yuuki:what no,what hour is it(he looks trouht the the broken clock that still says time.yuuki:oh i late.Mom:Honey this may right time>heh where he is,is gone.yuuki:hah come on legs go faster.(he runs the town when)fhff, hah look out.Hakura:what the hell. poff st st(down and down like rouling ball)bam!Prof.elm:huh looks like we have still more desprate trainers.yuuki whats thats gonna mean.Hakura:get off me.(the traners get up.elm:soorry,pardorn me but are you the traners that sing up for you first pokemon.(both traners say yes)

    more soon if there somepeople that like it.

    send me pm if you like it.
     
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    ok i dont mean to be a jerk since i myself have not finished my fic..but this looks like you have not put a lot of work into it since there are many spelling errors..i dont know why you ask if anyone likes it since if they did someone would have posted a comment already..just my opinion.
     
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