Pokemon Glacier

[Groudontrainer]

Hey guys i just started a new game! I need help tho:

Scripters 2 and me
Mappers 1 and me
Beta testers 0 for now
help would be greatly appreciated ^^
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Screenies:

Your room:

Brothers room:

Your living room: (subject to change)

Lab:

Boulder City:

Boulder Harbor:

Boulder Water Station:

New Saffron City:

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Story: (subject to change)

You start off as a tten year old boy living with your mom and brother in the quiant Sunray Town. Lately though it's been geting colder and colder until the whole town is coverd in snow. You go and talk to Prof. Birch's brother Prof. Kirk. You get your first Pokemon and set off on your journey. You will end up doing all the regualr things like battle your rival and get badges until you find somthing out. Team Glacier is using Regiice in an attempt to cover the whol region (unnamed yett) in snow and i ce to spread the pole regoins out. So you have to stop them to save the world. At the end of the road when you are about to defeat team Glacier you get a big suprise (i wpnt tell you tho so i wont ruin it)
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Of course the legendary is Regiice and it's just 1 region which is brand new....

C&C please and tell me if u wanna help me out

 

[Datriot]

The Inner maps look a little empty. (maybe it's just me)
Intresting story. ;)

 

[[_DarkDragon_]]

I think the maps are a little big for the ammount of objects and people in them, appart from that I like them and the story XD

funny, you start at Sunrise Town in my game XD

 

[Groudontrainer]

thanks ^^ i was expecting crappy reveiws ^^

 

[Sorye HK]

Well, the maps look rather blank, but I guess they can be easily improved. Good luck.

 

[Flameguru]

the inner maps need work, i have found many errors, but other than that, good story:D

 

[Crystal Clair]

The game has potential, about the evil teams, there's a rant in my sig. You do have to fill the maps a little better but I know if you put effort into it, it may happen.

 

[DarkDoom3000]

oh shes gotta point better change my storyline :dead:

the sereenies are preety gooD!
anyways good luck!!

 

[Scompi]

The game looks ok right now, just need to fill in the maps a little, there is no way that people should be voting 'I'M GOING TO BARF!'. Good luck though!

 

[Groudontrainer]

Thanks for the tips ^^ (stupid short message system *curses*)

 

[Groudontrainer]

Boulder City:

Boulder Harbor:

Boulder Water Station:

New Saffron City:

Sorry to double post :(

 

[pokemon programer]

Not trying to be mean ,but if you go to the tutorial section there is one one
mapping if you want to get better at mapping quicker.It helped me a lot.

 

[PokemonXP]

Some of your maps need work. Do you know how to layer correctly? Its just a suggestion. It'll help to play around with layering so your maps don't look weird. The path in one of your maps looks a bit weird. You should also fix your inner maps. The people look like they are hovering above the table. Other than that pretty good.

 

[Groudontrainer]

Thanks again 4 the tips :P i am redoin the inner maps to make them look alot better and fillin em up ;) i need some scripters if anybody wants to help ^^

P.S. i'm adding a new legendary to the game :D