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Pokemon Gray

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TOKEYO-MONKEY

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    I am in the proses of making a pokemon game titled Pokemon Gray you start out in palet town where you your mom,Dad, and sister(your rivel) live soon you over hear that you are going to be poor because your family can pay for anything your mom sees you listening she says "Im so sory you beter look around we have to leave in 8 months so you walk outside when you find a poster on the ground that says Come to Gree were the campion pokemon trainers go to battle the new Pokemon masters at battlers cave baleved to be hunted! grand prize $8,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 hope you can come!
    then you ythink I better talk to prof. Oak you walk to Prof. Oak and he says "ohh the last pokemon was taken by your sister..... I was going to do some research on this Steelball but seems like you want it so here I can't seem to open it mind if I give it one more try?" then prof. Oak tosses it one last time the pokeball finaly opens and its a shiny Registeel then your jorney is to get the money,battle your sister and win, Defeat Team Poisin, Cach Oxamantasyn the Gohst/Dark in battlers cave, and save your family! no pictures yet still more coming soon!
     
    Not to be rude, but the way you typed up your summary of the game gives me the sense that your game will look the same way...bad. I hope you were just typing really quickly because games that have bad grammar and horrible spelling just makes me feel that the creator didn't put enough effort into his/her game. Anyways, starting with a shiny Registeel makes the game feel too simple. And the prize being $8,000,000,000,000....ect. is kinda too much, don't you think? I hope you reconsider how you start out your game.
     
    phoenix316 said:
    i don't understand. People start threads to share information and updates about their games so why did you start a thread when you haven't started a game. Especially when you might give up in a couple of days. Making a legendary as a starter is a real n00ob move. And the name couldn't be any less original.
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    Hay your right I GIVE up on every thing!!!!!!! CLOSE THIS NOW!!!
     
    Just that one post makes you want to give up on your game and be banned? You really come off as being pessimistic. I see you've added your new sig after phoenix made those comments about your game. Life stinks... yes, but you have to take the good with the bad. I'm sure not everything in your life sucks. I'm going to admit, phoenix could have been a little nicer about what he said but he isn't such a bad guy once you get to know him. Maybe he sounded meaner than he intended to be. We are speaking to you through a computer screen, you know.
     
    I apologise if I've caused you any offence, it WAS unintentional. What I meant to say (and probably should have said) was to give the game a bit more thought and consideration. I'll explain what I meant.
    The Shiny Registeel as a starter: Shiny Pokemon are extremely rare and it is a privelage when you catch one so why would someone give one to you? The same thing goes for Registeel. Also think about how powerful Registeel is and how boring it would be at the start of the game when your destroying the Lvl 2 and 3 Pokemon.
    The name Pokemon Gray: Using colors as a title shows a lack of originality and thought. Think of all of the great games on these forums. NONE of them use colors in their titles.
    There is no need to completely cancel your game because of one harsh, yet unintentional comment. Just give it a bit more thought and plan out a more realistic storyline and go from there.
     
    Well from last night when he came to my house (we are friends I am the one who told him about PC :D ) He seemed prety upset! He said the folowing "IM NEVER GOING ON PC AGIAN! I thought of a good game and they ruend it you know the pokemon gray ive been talking about" So I said "dont let some one get in your way I mean its your game not theres!" so he said "I dont care im NOT going on pc besides I am tiard of pokemon I mean that is a so I watched when I was 8 now I am (He dose not say his age on the internet)" and I said "do what ya want to do go ahead dont go on pc agian" I think his still making Pokemon Gray I dont think its you he has been having a hard time
     
    Well, considering you're friends, he's probably around the same age. I was wondering why he was taking our comments so hard, but now I understand. I should have realized how young you guys were from how you guys type. Tell him to not take it to seriously, and that he shouldn't react to things like how he did here. I guess we thought he might have been a little older than his actual age, and thought he would have taken our comments as ways to make his game better. He doesn't need to mature right away, but he also shouldn't react like that. In a couple of years, he'll probably be more reasonable and hopefullywon't take offense to constructive criticism.
     
    Sometimes people don't know how to take constructive criticism. No matter what the age. I hope he does come back eventually, and realizes you weren't trying to discourage him. Just trying to help.
    I dont think its you he has been having a hard time
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    Also, he may have been having a bad day, and since he probably doesn't know anyone here, this is where he released some of his anger.
     
    Well, I'm really sorry if I upset him. Mistook him as the wrong kind of person.
    I'm looking through a computer screen so I can't really understand people's
    emotions just from their text. Especially indirective ones. Anyway, I'm really
    sorry and hope that you carry on with this.
     
    I'm bordering on closing this topic. Nothings happening with the game, and Tokyo Monkey isn't coming back on. You know what? It's getting closed. If anyone has any reason for me to reopen it for posting, PM ME!

    *Closed*
     
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