Pokemon: Hero's Origin

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.
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    Welcome people, this is, as most of you know, my third comic. I promise this one shall make it past comic 5, unlike it's predessors. This new comic, titled Hero's Origin, is based on one of my earlier comcs, one that never made it into the forums.

    Yes, I know I have some spelling mistakes in chapters, and if you kindly point them out, I'll fix them

    Plot

    A young boy and his female friend are just starting out as trainers, when a shadow falls over Kanto. After it's last defeat, Cipher has begun funding Team Rocket, and so is now slowly gaining possession of Kanto's finest trainers. as mroe and more trainers become corrupted, these two must stick together and fight Cipher, or forever live in it's shadow.

    Comics

    1. ((The Beginning)) https://usera.imagecave.com/amydamuffinlady/heroes_origin1.PNG
    2. ((The Route 1 Route)) https://usera.imagecave.com/amydamuffinlady/heroes_origin2.PNG New!!

    Cast

    Coming soon!

    Credits

    -D-Man/Griridon (sp?)/Closetman ((HP Bars from Diamond, later on some sprites))
    -Avegaile Adams ((Treeko, Torchic OWs))
    -Coronis, Virusgamer ((Original Ky OWs, Megans OWs and Trainer Sprite))
    -All the Comic Makers whose comics have inspired me (Maneachicken, Decepticon, G-Man, Who ever created Kanto Dimension, whom I forgot)
    -TSR ((Oak OW's, Oak's Lab))
    -VGmaps.com ((Pallet Town))
    -Raichu.Srea (errr... whatever it is.. I forgot, since I got it from somewhere else) ((Rick "Rock" Sprites, Rose Sprites))​
     
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    I inspired someone into making a comic? Im flattered! really and truffully. What part of My work inspired you?

    Well... I better get to the critic part of my job... The part i hate.

    I don't know the story line yet, but there are early indications of it being a Generic. OK, I got critisised in the past beacasue of it, but you might pull through if you stick to it, and make it interesting.

    Good recoloured sprites. Its common in the comic world today that you see boring monochrome sprites, with no shading and horrible ilumonous paint defaults. I take my Hat off to you. (But I want it Back!).

    Little Humour Creeping in! Yes! It can be done! always look for Humour in comics. It always keeps people attachted to your comic! My favourite Panel? The one with Megan calling her Treecko Leaf, and Ky arguing over it!

    The MD sprites look disapointing becasue of their under shading (Shadows) they tend to look better with out. (I hope you remove them alright, if not, PM me for Help).

    Nice HP bars. I was waiting for someone to use them! They look tonnes better, and you can officially say that you were the first member on PC to use them in a comic!

    Just noticed the story... My eagerness... I was fooled by the story line in the first comic, but have now realised that its a very good story! Its one that is very open to plot twists.

    Well... I have done what i can remember. Im sure someone else can tell you more. and once more, Im flattered. Thank You.
     
    It's good,better then mine,but it's getting better.
    I like how you recolored.
     
    Hello brother....I like your comic especially the way you make the battles. I'll be looking forward to the next eppy. You did an amazing job. :D Keep posting, and have fun. :)
     
    Thanks guys, I just hope that I don't drop this one. It's really nice to have encouragement around here, and I feel sorry for the spriters who are being picked on...

    Anyways; If one of you would like to donate ideas or sprites, just PM me!
     
    Gr8 comic i loved it. its colourful cute and funny
    i lyk how u make the battles it looks kool..
    your friend bubsy
     
    I made Kanto Dimension...go me..
    Soem problems I spotted straight away is the fact that it happens to be a journey comic, TUP adn you have mixed RSE with FRLG sprites.
    I think if you fix these problems, your comic will be better, that's all.
     
    Fat is the only guy in my comic that is fat! Well... Thanks... I have never had my name mentioned in someone elses comic! Busby... everything is cute and funny to you.
     
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