Okay:
1) The frames are off. It's quite important that you keep frames are persistant size. Sometimes you can have one that's extensive and sometimes you can fit extras if shortened. But they should be in one area.
2) You see the button on the attachment? I've noticed your characters have some backgrounds attached. If you are pasting with a different colour background, use the button.
3) Spelling. Go through it before sending. It makes you look stupid if unintentional. If you have mental problems I suppose you can get away with it. :p
But you are improving.